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A Little Trouble With Kids 2.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Jedi_KnightMariah, Aug 10, 2000.

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  1. Anika Skywalker

    Anika Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Post more! I'll pray for your dad! I like your signature, too! My grandma has a card with that on it taped to her mirror.

    ~Anika Skywalker
     
  2. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thank you all for your prayers. My father is fine. And I hope he'll be well enough to ride with me and my sis at Islands of Adventure. Yes! I'm going again! *music begins to play in backround* Could you guys send in ideas or something via PM's so if I chose one to take of one the others won't know what happened??? PLEASE!!!
     
  3. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Here's the next part!

    *****

    Qui-Gon held Obi-Wan?s hand as they walked down a Temple hall. They
    were going to the care center. After Obi-Wan?s endless begging to see Bant
    and his other friends, Qui-Gon couldn?t take it anymore.
    The doors opened to Mekal sitting in a chair watching the children.
    ?Hello. Child duty again?? Qui-Gon asked.
    ?Of course. Hello, Obi-Wan.?
    ?Hewwo, Mekky! Hwow ah? you today?!?
    ?Aren?t you the perfect gentleman? I?m fine. Do you want to see-?
    ?Obi-Wan!? Bant ran to him. ?Ca? you pway??
    ?O? cou?se!?
    ?Wet?s go!? Bant pulled him away from the adults to a group of young
    children.
    A little girl stepped forward. ?Hewwo, Obi! Wong twime no see, ?ey??
    ?Hewwo, Pwy?chie! Weeft!?
    ?We ?bout to ?ave wunch, can ya stay?? Reeft asked.
    ?Yup!? Obi-Wan exclaimed.
    ?Wet?s ea?!? Bant grabbed his hand and pulled him to line.

    ?Please!? Mekal begged.
    ?No! I can barley take care of Obi-Wan, let alone all of them!?
    ?Oh, please! I?ll owe you!?
    Qui-Gon sighed. ?Big time.?
    ?Thank you, Qui-Gon! Thank you sooooo much!? She ran off.
    ?Hey! Wait! What do I do??
    ?Feed them!? She ran out the door.
    ?All of them?!?
    ?We?re hungy!? The children cried.
    Qui-Gon felt a tap on his shoulder. He turned to see a boy around the age of
    seventeen.
    ?Do you need help, Master Jinn??
    Qui-Gon smiled evily. ?Yes...I do.?

    *****
    Tell me what ya think!
     
  4. FORCEisSTRONGwithTHISone

    FORCEisSTRONGwithTHISone Jedi Youngling

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    I love Obi and his little friends! Who is this Padawan dude? I feel sorry for him.
     
  5. Eryce

    Eryce Jedi Master star 2

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    LOL. The poor lil Padawan.. He doesn't know what he's getting into...

    Run, padawan, run! Run for your sanity!


     
  6. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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  7. Kelly Kenobi

    Kelly Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL Eyrce that is the same thing I was thinking.

    Obi and his little buddies are darling, lunch time should be interesting!
     
  8. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Double post! And Dain will be back!

    *****

    Padawan Dain had no idea kids had so much energy. At least some of them
    were sleeping. But he was starting to regret asking Master Jinn if he needed
    help.
    Qui-Gon tried to get Reeft off him for the fifth time. If one wasn?t jumping on
    him another one was! The second he put Reeft down Bant attacked.
    ?Mas?ah Jinny!? Bant squealed as she jump up and down while holding his
    legs.
    Obi-Wan ran up to him. ?Quigee, whe? di? Dean go??
    ?What?? Qui-Gon looked over. A group of kids were a circle around
    something that Qui-Gon identified as Dain. He ran over to see a little boy on
    top of the Padawan. He pulled the boy away and Helped Dain up. ?Are you
    allright??
    Dain took wobbly steps. ?Why are there two of you??
    Qui-Gon sighed as the Padawan collapsed.
    Obi-Wan tugged on his robe. ?Wha? da mattah??
    ?He has to go to the healers, that?s all.?
    Suddenly all the kids ran into a corner at the other end of the room. ?Da
    HEALERS?!?
    ?Yes. What?s the matter??
    ?Dey do tawbwe t?ings to us!? Pry?ch cried.
    ?Dey ?tick us wit? needwes!? A boy excliamed.
    ?Oh, brother,? Qui-Gon mumered as he picked up the unconscious Padawan.

    *****

    Well????
     
  9. JediRogue9

    JediRogue9 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    May 8, 2000
    Nice post!!

     
  10. Neon Star

    Neon Star Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Great post!
    Poor Padawan Dain.
     
  11. Anika Skywalker

    Anika Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL! I love this story! Post more!

    ~Anika Skywalker
     
  12. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Last post for a day or two. I do have school, ya know. This goes out to JediCandy and my sis for the idea.

    *****

    Healer Geldan was running a blood test when she heard what sounded like a
    stampede. Qui-Gon Jinn burst through the doors with twenty initiates.
    ?Jinn, what are you doing in here with all these children?!? She asked.
    He set down Dain in a cot. ?Well, uh, I had to take care of the children and,
    well, I had no other choice.?
    ?Ahhh! Healer!? Reeft screamed.
    The kids screamed as they ran everywhere.
    Qui-Gon was surprised they could pronounce ?healer? correctly. ?Calm
    down. It?s allright!?
    ?Ah? you weawwy a healer?? Obi-Wan asked.
    ?Why, yes.?
    ?I gotta ouchie!? He stuck his finger in the air for her to see.
    ?Let me help you with that.? She picked him up and carried him to a cot.
    ?Calm down!? Qui-Gon had to yell so they could hear him.
    ?Stop yelling!? Dain cried holding his head.
    ?Sorry, they?re out of control!?
    ?Stop it!? Gelden shouted at the top of her lungs.
    Silence.
    ?That?s better,? she said with a smile. ?Now please be good little Jedi?s and
    be quiet.?
    ?I wanna be a good Jedi!? Pry?ch giggled.
    ?Me too!? Bant shouted.
    ?I?ll be better!? A white haired boy yelled.
    ?Quiet!? Gelden held up a shot.
    Silence again.
    ?I?ll pick a helper for little while, I?ll need all of your help though.?
    ?What are you doing?? Qui-Gon asked.
    ?You?ll see,? she whispered back.
    ?I wanna help!?
    ?Me too!?
    ?Me three!?
    ?Me four!?
    ?Shh!? Qui-Gob tried.
    At that moment, Pry?ch decided Qui-Gon needed a shot.
    ?Ahhhhhhh!? He reached for his bottom. ?What did you do that for?!?
    She giggled. ?You funny!?

    *****
    Well?
     
  13. JediRogue9

    JediRogue9 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    ROTFLMAO!!! Qui-Gon got a shot in his butt!

    heehee
     
  14. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    What the hack does that mean?! Nobody will tell me! I figred half. Rolling On The Floor...I can't get the rest! Tell me!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  15. Erin Kenobi

    Erin Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    It means "Rolling On The Floor Laughing My *** Off"
     
  16. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oh...um, at least one of you beeped it out : )
     
  17. Anika Skywalker

    Anika Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ugh... school. Post more when you get back!

    ~Anika Skywalker
     
  18. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm homeschooled. I'll be here. At least my mom considers writing a subject. But my sis wants me to write on some stories I can't post anywhere cause it's X-Men and she get's mad (not really) when I don't write on it. She thinks I'm best at writing Humor. Maybe so... Sorry for babbling.
     
  19. Eryce

    Eryce Jedi Master star 2

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    I think you've just put me off having kids for life, Mariah! *grin*

    Mwore, pwease?
     
  20. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    No! Don't do that! Kids are so cute and cuddly! I've never had experance with kids though. I just baby sitted once and it was really my mom doing all the work 'cause I was sooo young.
     
  21. JediCandy

    JediCandy Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Kids are less trouble than husbands. At least kids grow up!
     
  22. Anika Skywalker

    Anika Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL, JediCandy!

    Little kids are fun. My science/math teacher's two-year-old son is adorable!

    Mariah, I didn't know you homeschooled. I was homeschooled in kindergarten. I sometimes wish I was completely homeschooled. But being a Senior High Freshman sounds fun. :)

    ~Anika Skywalker
     
  23. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I like being homeschooled. I don't think I would like public school. I have nothing against it or anything but it's not for me.

    Lol! JedyCandy! Thank you for the ideas! Your little girl sounds adorable! and so does your nephew! When he was younger anyway.

     
  24. JediCandy

    JediCandy Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Lets see, Tyler is now 16...he is tall with broad shoulders and narrow waist. Dark hair with hazel eyes that change colors based on what he is wearing. His grade point average is just over 4. He is on the student council and on the media team at school. He works at a movie theater and can get us into the movies at no charge.

    When he was four, he had a riot of curly dark hair and a perpetually runny nose! He had a maniacal laugh (still does, now that I think about it).
     
  25. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hi all! I'll post as soon as I hear from JediCandy about the next part. And if she thinks it's good, I'll post. If not...I'll slave over it until it's perfact!!!!!
     
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