A Little Trouble With Kids. (A young Obi fic)

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  1. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    I'll try to get it out ether today or tomorrow. But tell me if I should even try.
    I'll be waiting for ya!
  2. JediCandy Jedi Master

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    I like little Obi stories.....I will await your posts.
  3. Kelly Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Goody a new little Obi fic!
  4. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    Thanks again Candy. I can't get on it right now, but I'll try tomorrow. And I have a question, how do you get a signature? I can't figure out how. I was just wondering.
  5. JediCandy Jedi Master

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    Click on "Options" link (next to Logoff). Scroll down and click on "Change Your User Details". The place for your signature is towards the bottom of the page.
  6. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    Here is the first part. I have to go mow as so as I'm done so I'll expect some replys when I get back.


    *****

    Qui-Gon Jinn was at the end of his patience. ?Obi-Wan, come back! Please!?
    But the two-year-old boy was in a fit of giggles. ?Come ?an get me, Quigee!?
    ?I?m faster, smarter, and my arms length is longer then your?s. You might as
    well give up.?
    ?Huh??
    ?Please Obi-Wan, you have to get a bath. You?re all dirty.?
    The boy began to giggle again, but ran to Qui-Gon. ? ?kay.?
    Qui-Gon carried him to the bath and gently sat him down in the water. ?Now,
    I don?t want you to spla-?
    Obi-Wan slamed his small fist in the water, splashing water everywhere.
    ?Obi-Wan, I?m soaked. What do you have to say for yourself??
    ?You wook funny!?
    ?Thank you, Obi-Wan. I really needed to hear that.?
    ?Ya welcon?.?
    He sighed. This child will be the end of me, he thought.
    ?Wanna hea? a joke??
    ?Tell me,? he prompted, as he scrubbed the boys? knees.
    ?What would ?appen if ya dwopped a bwue tuinauc wit? a yella sash in da
    water??
    Qui-Gon thought for a moment. ?I don?t know. What??
    ?Ited be wet!? he squealed. Qui-Gon fought the urge to roll his eyes.
    ?Amusing.?
    ?Huh??
    ?Forget it,? he murmured. ?There. All done. Stand up.?
    Obi-Wan giggled as he did what he was told. He?s obeying me for once.
    //Who?s comin? to visit, Quigee?//
    //Mace Windu and-//
    //Baldy!//
    //Obi-Wan if you call him that while he?s here you?ll be in big trouble.//
    //?kay.//
    Qui-Gon wrapped Obi-Wan in a towel and picked him up. He walked to a
    chair, and sat down with the bundled boy. Obi-Wan began to giggle and
    move around. ?I wanna ge? up, Quigee.?
    ?No,? he said shortly.
    ?Lemmie? go!?
    ?Let me get you dressed first.?
    ? ?kay.?
    Qui-Gon dressed him quickly then got dressed himself in their good clothes.
    //Is Baldy comin? soon?//
    //Don?t call him that, and yes, he is.//
    After Obi-Wan?s hair was combed, Qui-Gon made dinner. ?There. All we
    have to do now is wait,? he told Obi-Wan.
    There was a knock at the door and Obi-Wan jumped to get it. Obi-Wan
    opened the door. ?Hawoe!? Mace Windu smiled and ruffled the boys? hair.
    ?Hello, Obi-Wan. Hello, Qui-Gon.?
    Another voice came next. ?Hello, boys.?
    ?Adi Gawa!? Obi-Wan squealed.
    ?Are you ready to eat?? Qui-Gon asked, as he reached out his hand.
    Everyone sat around the table and began to eat.
    ?Wanna hea? a joke??
    ?Not now Obi-Wan,? Qui-Gon warned.
    ?I?d love to hear your joke, Obi-Wan.,? Adi Gallia said.
    ?What would ?appen if ya dwopped a bwue tuinauc wit? a yella sash in da
    water??
    This is going to be a long night!

    *****
    Like it? Let me know
  7. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    Cute! Can't wait for more.
  8. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    Thanks NS. If you're still reading this, could you update "I promise"? PLEASE!!!!
  9. Kelly Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Cute cute cute! Love Little Obi, he can certainly give Qui-Gon a hard time.

    I do have a questiom Jedi_KnightMariah, is this going to be only a humorous story (the first thread certainly was) or is there going to be angst and mush to. Either way would be great, I was just curious!

  10. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    Mostly humor. The end post isn't though. I'll go ahead and do the next part now if you want.
  11. Eryce Jedi Knight

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    YES YES YES! Write ! Write! Write! Now! Now! Now!
  12. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    Phew! Back from mowing the lawns. Eyrce, I'm just wondering when StH2 is coming out?
    Here it is. Roll that beautiful bean footage...


    ?Good night, brat,? Qui-Gon whispered as he tucked Obi-Wan in bed.
    ? ?night, Quigee. whill you fowgive me fow awmost cawing Macey ?baldy???

    ?Of course.? He turned the light off and went to bed himself.


    ?Wakie time!? Obi-Wan shook Qui-Gon to wake him up. No use, he won?t
    wake up. He began to pout. Maybe I can play with meself so Quigee can
    sleep in. Wow! I smart enough to make dat...dat...what did Quigee call
    it?
    Oh yeah, de...sis..ion? Hmm, I?ll have to work on dat one. What could
    he
    do? Play with balls! He had some in his room. He left and got his
    favorite
    ball. It was light Blue, Quigee had said it matched his eyes. He began
    to
    bounce it off the wall, when his stomach began to grumble. I needy to
    eat
    now! He peeked in the kitchen, and tiptoed to the fridge unit, so he
    wouldn?t
    wake Qui-Gon. Mmm, lotsa snackies! He pulled out what he usually had for

    breakfast. Quigee gonna be so proded of me!



    Well? How'd I do so far?
  13. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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    You're doing great. Can't wait for more.
  14. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    TOP! There I said it! Happy?!?! Now I have to 'Top' my own threads! Great!
  15. Kelly Kenobi Jedi Master

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    A two year old left on his own, and in the kitchen no less, I see a mess in Quigees future!

    Love it Mariah!
  16. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    I'd like to post more but there's only a few more post's worth left and I don't want to post it all today. (kinda; )
    And has anyone seen Gimpy's "A Place to Call Home"? I can't find it.
  17. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    Why do you people make me do this? ; )
    *sigh* up.
    And thanks again Kelly.
  18. RogueJai Jedi Master

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    YAY! I love lil obi stories! And you'll prolly find da Gimpster's stories easer over at JN :)
  19. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    Thank's everybody. This is still funny to me, because I was always reading people's fanfics
    and now some of them are reading mine. I might post again tonight 'cause I might not be able to tomorrow. You might convence me to put it down sooner. *hint* *hint*
    I'll be waiting for your replys, as always.


    Jedi_KnightMariah.
  20. Neon Star Jedi Grand Master

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    Great story, Jedi_KnightMariah! Little Obi is sooo cute.
  21. Kelly Kenobi Jedi Master

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    So whats it gonna take to get you to post sooner, I will prolly be willing!
  22. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    lol. okay, let me think...The X-Men DVD, Jedi Power Battles for Dreamcast... j/k!
    I might get around to it soon. I'm not on my comp right now so I have to wait to get the story up.
    Oh, yeah! Woo Hoo! #2!
  23. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    I have this idea. How about we make A JA/X-Men crossover?
    I'm open to ideas!
  24. JediCandy Jedi Master

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    Oh, this is excellent. I can relate, my little girl loves jokes. Her favorite is that knock-knock joke with banana and orange (orange you glad I didn't say banana again!). I am also familiar with little "messes" kids make.

    Pretty soon, I have to go mow, too. Hopefully I can get some done before it rains. The grass is getting too tall--it's hard trying to keep up with 5 acres of grass!
  25. Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Master

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    I thought I had it bad! Man, Candy! Do you get breaks? Well, ether people don't like my idea or they've suddenly become silent. I need to know if it's a good idea!
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