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Before - Legends A Memory Lost an Obi-wan Story -JA - July 15th --- "Completed " -----

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Gkilkenny, Jun 17, 2005.

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  1. Seven

    Seven Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Seven in typical STAR WARS fashion: ~gasp!~ NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

    Vader: What in the world is YOUR problem?

    Seven: You mean, besides you?

    Vader: ~glare~

    Seven: She ... She... She.......

    Vader: Come on! Spit it out already!

    Seven: SHE LEFT IT THERE! ~sobs~ :_|

    Vader: But there will be more.

    Seven: But... not NOW. I want more story NOW!

    Vader: Keep your pants on.

    Seven: I'm not wearing pants.

    Vader: :eek: [face_sick]

    Seven: I'm wearing shorts. Wacko.

    Vader: Riiiiiiiiight. And you think I'm strange...

    Seven: ~shakes head~ Well, this is wonderful, and I'll be waiting at least semi patiently for the next post! You're doing a wonderful job.

    Seven: More soon please!
     
  2. AriaJediKnight

    AriaJediKnight Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I'm sorry I hit you Qui. Poor Obi. I feel bad that he has to live with this guilt. I <3 you Obi. Please don't let this be the end.[face_praying]
    Rachel
     
  3. LilQui-Gon

    LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Gkilkenny will there be sequels? I'm just curious. :confused:
     
  4. padmay_skywalker

    padmay_skywalker Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Is that the end? No...No...Noooooooooooooooooo!!

    Please let there be a sequal!! Or continue the story! Please, please, pleeaaassee!
     
  5. Lady_Snow_Kaguya

    Lady_Snow_Kaguya Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Jun 9, 2005
    Move over Sidious, we have a new Sith Master! :D

    evil cliffie..XD but soooo good. I'm going to be thinking of ways it could end until an update arrives XDD.
     
  6. Lady_Snow_Kaguya

    Lady_Snow_Kaguya Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Jun 9, 2005
    Move over Sidious, we have a new Sith Master! :D

    evil cliffie..XD but soooo good. I'm going to be thinking of ways it could end until an update arrives XDD.
     
  7. obi-wanfan123

    obi-wanfan123 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Jun 12, 2005
    THAT"S THE END??? Oh, please just write some more, pleaseeeeeee?????[face_praying] [face_praying] It was so heart warming!![face_love]
     
  8. Jedi_Tigris

    Jedi_Tigris Jedi Knight star 4

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    Oooh, so it took something mildly drastic for Qui to break through to Obi. I bet Qui wouldn't mind a bit of bleeding for the bond to be mended though. Yay, now Obi will be able to sense that Qui is sincere! :D Obi's feeling all guilty now. Qui better comfort him!

    I hope there's at least one more post! Great job!
     
  9. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Lightsaver IT'S NOT OVER YET IS IT?!!

    The final post later today:D

    Maychorian It needed something drastic to bring them back together.;)

    obi-wanfan123 Welcome aboard and thanks for the reviews
    Nope not working for Lucas Films, but wouldn't it be great.
    He owns everything I own nufin. Not even Obi-wan
    LAST POST shortly
    [face_dancing] ;)

    Bastet Yep sorry to say only one more post left.
    So get the tissues ready:D

    padmay_skywalker Thanks for the reviews and the friendly banter. Last post coming soon.:_|

    LilQui-GonYep got a big box of tissues handy.:_|
    Sequel? Well I haven't written one for this story yet. I truely didn't think of it.:(


    Padawan_Anne You dont need encouraging you do fine on your own WELL DONE. TWINS.[face_laugh]

    Seven Thanks Just be patient for a couple of hours
    then all will be revealed.:D

    AriaJediKnight Please don't let this be the end.
    It has to end somewhere!
    I dont want it to end either but thats all I wrote.:_|

    Lady_Snow_Kaguya Mmmm I am a bit of a Sith at times
    especially when I have to get up early.

    Posting the last part soon and I am Sad.:_|

    Jedi_Tigris Comfort and Mush coming:D
     
  10. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thank you one and all who read my story those that reviewed and those that lurked.
    I enjoyed writing this and I am sad it is finished.

    If any of you are interested in reading my first attempt at writing it is called
    Lost and Found the link is in my BIO.

    Now the conclusion
    ~~~

    Qui-Gon pulled me towards him wrapping his good arm around me holding me against his chest.
    Whispering to me ?There, there, it is all right now, everything will be alright now.?
    ?I know you didn?t mean it My Padawan. Let it all out. Let the pain go.

    We stayed sitting on the ledge for a long time.
    Qui-Gon just held me, rocking gently, until there were no more tears left.

    I looked up again to see dried tear tracks on my masters face, he brought his hand across and wiped my tears away.

    His eyes were sparkling and he lifted my chin slightly and smiled at me, and then he gently kissed my forehead.

    ?My young one, I think we had better get up of this rock before my legs go asleep totally?. Qui-Gon said with a chuckle


    I helped my Master up, and we walked back to the cabin slowly, he put his good arm around my shoulder and I put my arm around his waist.

    Once we got back to the cabin Qui-Gon said he would lie down for a while to regain his strength;
    He said another healing trance would be enough to mend the arm.

    I didn?t want to leave him, I still blamed myself.

    ?Master would it be all right if I sat here with you,? Obi-wan asked pointing to the chair next to the bed.

    Qui-Gon had marvelled at the amount of love and worry, he could feel radiating through their newly reformed bond.
    He didn?t think Obi-wan realised just how much emotion he was broadcasting through the bond.

    That thought alone made Qui-Gon wince with shame.
    How could he ever have treated this ?light in his life? as
    carelessly as he had.

    Qui-Gon was determined to make Obi-wan feel needed and loved, and he sensed a break through with Obi-wan, he didn?t want to risk him sliding back into depression.

    ?I would appreciate the company my Padawan. I think we could both use a little rest.?

    He patted the bed and moved over to make enough room on the bed, and he motioned for me to join him.

    I rested my head on his good shoulder and he put his arm around me, I felt safe and wanted.
    We laid like that for the rest of the day.

    We slept for a while and talked for a while, and explored the new and improved bond.

    The bond seemed stronger to me than it ever had been before.

    My Master explained that because we had opened up to each other completely, we had an infinite connection.

    It was dark when we finally got up from the bed and went to the living area, ?I was starving.?

    ?Master I will prepare the meal you rest? I said. Pointing to the couch.

    I had found a purpose in life a strange warmth, that I wasn?t accustomed too seemed to have lifted my spirits.

    Qui-Gon sat on the couch watching me get the meal ready;
    I looked at him a couple of times to see if he was alright
    and I noticed him looking at me with a smile on his face.

    It was something that still surprised me as I had hardly ever seen him smile at me before.
    I liked it. It made me feel wanted.

    I smiled back.

    Because we had slept for most of the day, we sat up late into the night talking, or actually reading.

    My Master had brought his own Journal with him.

    I felt embarrassed reading it but he insisted that I read what he had written about me over the past three years.

    I had no idea he thought so highly of me.
    It was hard for me to read that he was always proud of me, but couldn?t tell me in words.

    He was afraid I would laugh at him and leave him.

    In his journal he explained his fear, that he was a failure as a Master, and he was afraid that if he spoilt me I would change like his former apprentice did.

    He also wrote about my rock and what he had told me about finding it and what he felt through the force when he gave it to me.

    That he knew it was meant for ?Me?

    He wrote about the other Masters telling him
     
  11. AngryWarrior

    AngryWarrior Jedi Youngling star 1

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    One word:


    SWEET

    Bring on the tissue. :D
     
  12. maychorian

    maychorian Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oh, how very beautiful. I'm sad that it's over, though! :_| Great job!

    Write more mush stories! Please?
     
  13. padmay_skywalker

    padmay_skywalker Jedi Youngling star 3

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    In one word: WONDERFUL!=D= =D=

    :_| Although i am sad for the story to come to an end:_| .

    When you write another story could u PM me the story link? please!
     
  14. LilQui-Gon

    LilQui-Gon Jedi Youngling star 2

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    It's over! :_| :_| :_| One Word: BEAUTIFUL!!! =D= [face_love] [:D] @};-
     
  15. Padawan_Anne

    Padawan_Anne Jedi Padawan star 4

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    :eek: Enough with the one worders already! Sheesh! :rolleyes: o_O

    Wonderful story G!=D= :p I better hear that theres a sequal from you! :D(me and me twin ova there -points to padmay- are gonna write some stories of our own. ;) When I get mine up for sure you better review it! :cool: )
     
  16. lightsaver

    lightsaver Jedi Youngling star 2

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    MORE! MORE, DAMN YOU!


    *gkilkenny whispers into his ear*

    what?..what the bloody hell do you mean there are no more?!

    NO?! NO MORE?!!?! DAMN YOU!!
     
  17. Seven

    Seven Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Seven: That was wonderful!

    Vader: ~sniff~

    Seven: Vader? Are you ... crying?

    Vader: NO!

    Seven: Okay... Anyway, that was once again beautiful! And I humbly (once again) request that if you have a new story on the board, that you let me know.

    Seven: That was excellent.

    Seven: So, I guess there's only one thing left to do.

    Seven: Cookies and milk for everyone!
     
  18. JEDI-KNIGHTS_R_L

    JEDI-KNIGHTS_R_L Jedi Youngling star 1

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    That was amazing. I am so glade that obi and qui are happy. It was a great stroy and i am sad to see it end.


     
  19. Bastet

    Bastet Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm so glad Obi and Qui are happy again. But, now the rest of us are sad, because it's over!! Waaahhhaaahhhaaa!!! :_|
    *sigh* That was a great story, Gkilkenny, thanks for sharing it with us. And those regular updates were much appreciated. I'll be on the lookout for more great stories from you!! :D
    =D= [face_dancing] :cool: [face_love] @};-

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    [face_chicken] Eat chicken, today is Cow Appreciation Day! [face_cow]
     
  20. AriaJediKnight

    AriaJediKnight Jedi Youngling star 1

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    *Sniff.* I'm fine. I just have something in my eye.:_| :_| :_| :_|:_| That was amazing. I loved it. To bad there isn't any more. Oh I'm so happy that Obi and Qui's bond was fixed.
    Rachel
     
  21. Jedi_Tigris

    Jedi_Tigris Jedi Knight star 4

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    That was a beautiful ending! [face_love] I'm so happy Qui and Obi got their bond fixed and finally understood each other, though I thought it was a little too abrupt. Wonderful job! =D=
     
  22. Aya-Na_Bashu

    Aya-Na_Bashu Jedi Youngling star 2

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    :_| Damn, the store's closed and I'm out of tissues. :_|

    I just wish it wasn't finished, yet.

    Note to self - remember to praise Padawan.
     
  23. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thanks every one for all the good feedback

    AngryWarrior I liked it and I am glad you did too.
    Thanks[:D]

    maychorian Thanks I do have another one I will start soon
    Called Guilty until proven innocent (Quite a bit of mush)

    padmay_skywalker Thank you and I will PM you[:D]

    LilQui-Gon One Word: BEAUTIFUL!!! Thanks
    I enjoyed writing it.[:D]
    Padawan_Anne I will PM you with the start date of my next story, but no sequel to this one yet although my next one could be taken as a sort of sequel it has the rock in it.
    [:D]

    Lightsaver Sorry to disappoint NO MORE of this one.[:D]

    Seven Thanks WOW cookies and milk. Chocolate chip?
    [:D]

    JEDI_KNIGHTS_R_L Thanks I am glad you liked it[:D]


    Bastet Thanks I dont like to keep the readers waiting
    unless RL gets in the way I will always post regularly[:D]

    AriaJediKnight Do I detect some tears. thanks for reading[:D]

    Jedi_Tigris Thanks I tried to extend the story but I couldn't think of anything else to say.[:D]

    Aya-Na_ BashuI just wish it wasn't finished, yet. WOW thanks for reading I also wished it could go on longer.[:D]

    To every one else who may have read it silently, THANKS:D
     
  24. Seven

    Seven Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Chocolate chip cookies?

    Sure, for you, anny cookie you'd like.

    ~pulls out a large bucket of chocolate chip cookies~

    There you go!

    Seven
     
  25. jodiwent

    jodiwent Jedi Master star 4

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    Awwww.

    See Obi, buckethead does love you ;)

    That was a sweet story G. Keep them coming!
     
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