A Mile in Their Shoes(JA fanfic by Cassia)

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  1. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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    WHEERE IS THE POST AGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

    I CAN'T SEE THE POST!!!
  2. JediKnight-Obi-Wan Jedi Grand Master

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    OHHH I love this story already. Cassia has me hooked already.
  3. Kirixchi Kenobi Jedi Padawan

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    could you send an e-mail to jedi_kenobi_us@yahoo.com so that I will know how to get in touch with you about pleading to let us archive your stories at my website?

    Thanks!
    Love the story.
    Kirixchi
    http://www.geocities.com/jedi_kenobi_us http://www.geocities.com/jedi_kenobi_us
  4. naw ibo Force Ghost

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    Great story. I always love Cassia fanfics .
  5. The Butler's Butler Jedi Knight

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    *"Master,"* Obi-Wan called out to Qui-Gon silently as
    the men pushed him through the secret door. His link with
    Qui-Gon was his only hope of alerting anyone to their
    situation. *"Master, we're in trouble..."*

    Hahaha! ROTFLOL! Good thing I'm not a jedi!
  6. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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    ha ha ha ha ha there are replies, YAY

    Kirixchi Kenobi which stories of cassia did you wish to archive? I can relay the message to her for you

    Kim B
  7. Jane Jinn Jedi Grand Master

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    I like the way the kidnappers tell Obi-Wan to be a good girl! I love this story, and Cassia is so talented and imaginative! Can't wait for more!
  8. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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  9. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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    I don't have the next part yet, no doubt Cassia is working on it this moment. I will post as soon as I get it (or realise I got it). Is itn just me or is it little quiet in this thread? People away perhaps???? The author checks this forum now and then so Feedback is apppreciated.


    Kim B

  10. jodiwent Force Ghost

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    Why does the song by No Doubt "I'm just a girl" keep running through my head when I read this story?

    "Take this pink ribbion off my eyes...."

    ROTFLOL
  11. HealerLeona Jedi Master

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    Of course we all know their in for a big surprise with Obijeena.
    Can't wait for more.
  12. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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    <yoda talk>

    Have the next part I do. Post here in 15 mins I will.


    Kim B
  13. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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    here is the next part. Please feedback.

    Kim B

    *********************************************

    -A Mile in their Shoes-


    PART FOUR:

    Qui-Gon stood, motionless, but watchful in one of the
    outer halls of the Palace. The Princess' party had been
    going on for hours. The faint touch of a grin tugged at
    his lips as he wondered what kind of time his Padawan was
    having in there.

    Something in the Jedi Master was uneasy. His body was
    calm, but his mind was on the alert. He had told Obi-Wan
    that he did not fear danger this evening, but now he
    wondered if he had been wrong. Everything *seemed* quiet
    enough, but he could not rest easy.

    All at once he heard Obi-Wan's voice call to him,
    unmistakable, clear, and urgent. *"Master, we're in
    trouble. You've got to come at once, help us Master!"*

    Qui-Gon refused to allow his stomach to tighten into
    the knot that it wanted to, forcing himself to be calm
    instead. *"Where are you Obi-Wan? What's happened?"* he
    called back, searching the Force for his Padawan's
    presence, his legs already carrying him towards the
    Stateroom as he traced Obi-Wan's signal.

    ***********

    *"Where are you Obi-Wan? What's happened?"* Obi-Wan
    was relieved to hear Qui-Gon answer him. Before he could
    reply the men prodding him along the narrow, dimly lit
    passage stopped suddenly.

    "This is as far as you need to see girly," one of the
    abductors said roughly. Wrapping an arm around Obi-Wan's
    waist, another man pressed a folded cloth over the
    apprentice's nose and mouth.

    Obi-Wan felt the material press against his face,
    smelt the distinctive smell of the drug it was soaked with,
    felt the chemicals sting his throat and lungs as they
    forced him to breath it.

    *"NO!"* Obi-Wan's mind screamed as his vision blurred
    and his knees went weak. Further along in his training,
    Obi-Wan would have known how to center, how to hold his breath
    and use the Force to conserve the oxygen that his body had and
    therefore stave off the effects of the drug for a long time, but
    the young apprentice was not yet so skilled.

    Obi-Wan battled the unconsciousness that was slowly creeping over him
    with all his strength, but it was a losing fight. Attempting
    to hold his breath, Obi-Wan struggled fiercely with the men
    holding him, but the drug was already in his system,
    slowing his responses and rendering his attempts
    ineffective.

    The kidnappers just laughed and held him still while
    the drug took effect.

    Too late, Obi-Wan realized that by struggling he was
    hastening the effects of the already potent drug. As icy
    unconsciousness claimed him, the Padawan calmed his mind
    enough to send one last image to Qui-Gon. Whether the
    Master received it or not, he did not know because the
    whirling blackness before his eyes pulled him under and he
    slumped senseless in the kidnapper's arms.

    *********

    The tension in Qui-Gon's stomach solidified into an
    icy jab of fear. Something had alarmed Obi-Wan.

    *"NO!"* he heard a note of panic in his apprentice's
    mental voice but the cry was not directed at Qui-Gon.

    *"Obi-Wan!"* the Master struggled to make contact
    again. *"Obi-Wan! Where are you?!"* This time, there was
    no answer. A strange, half-confused image of a fish-like
    creature flashed through his mind for an instant. A moment
    later, he lost hold of his Padawan's presence.

    *"Obi-Wan!"* he fairly shouted. *"Obi-Wan!"* but he
    received no answer and found only emptiness. His pace
    slowed to a walk, no longer sure of where he was heading
    now that his tie with Obi-Wan had been broken.

    He found himself standing before the tall, heavy doors
    of the stateroom. The door stood slightly ajar and probing
    it led Qui-Gon to believe that someone had very recently
    used the Force to open it, probably Obi-Wan. What was he
    doing here, so far from the party? Qui-Gon knew that Obi-
    Wan would not have left the Princess, and the Padawan had
    said "*We're* in trouble, help *us*."

    With a sigh, the Jedi Master realized that whatever
    had happened to Obi-Wan, happened to the Princess as well.
    He scanned the room, but saw no trace of anyone present,
    although he disco
  14. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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  15. Tenel'Ka Jedi Knight

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    COOL!!! Post more! I wanna see if anyone will find out Obi-Wan isn't a girl!
  16. Kelly Kenobi Jedi Master

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    This is getting very exciting. What are they going to do when they discover Obi is not a girl, which if they look to closly they surly will!!!!!!

    Once again Cassia is doing a fantastic job.

    Keep them posts comin'!!!!!
  17. naw ibo Force Ghost

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    Can't wait for the next addition to this one!
  18. Bastet Jedi Master

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    Just had to say, this story is awesome!! Obijeena... hahahaha!
    I eagerly await more!
  19. JediObi-Wan Jedi Master

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    LOL everytime I think of Obi-Ewan as a girl I crack up. LOL
  20. The Butler Jedi Master

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    (Echoing others) I wonder how the men will torture Obi-Wan when they discover he's not a girl. I also wander what the Princess would do to him.

    (The prospect of more torture for the poor kid looms nearer.)
  21. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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    Ummmmmmmmmmmmm I dont have the next part yet, but just dropping in for feedback.

    Kim B
  22. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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    well................. I still dont have the next part. I will post as soon as I get it.

    Kim B
  23. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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  24. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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    Qui-gon is on his way to rescue Obijeena
  25. Kim-kenobi Jedi Knight

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