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Saga A Necessary Deception...AU/Romantic Intrigue...A/P...Completed 06/25/07

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Kelia-Lily, Jun 19, 2006.

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  1. Jedi_Kassandra

    Jedi_Kassandra Jedi Knight star 1

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    Wow, this is great! Could you add me to the pm list? Thanks

    ~kass
     
  2. Kelia-Lily

    Kelia-Lily Jedi Youngling star 1

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    michaellover: mmm..her personal feelings for Anakin are bringing her trouble in her investigation?? poor Padme!

    Yes, she definitely has to watch that.

    Gizzi1213: **CLUNK!!** That's the sound of that 2 x 4 hitting Padme over the head. She's turning over that data pad without having listened to the meeting between Anakin and Palpatine! At least that appears to be the case. However, I'm concerned over the fact that she left the data pad on her desk when she went out to meet with Anakin in her apartment, when he told her about Mon Mothma's supposed meeting with Senator Zar before his death. Sly didn't APPEAR to find anything suspicious with it the first time, but who knows? The way things have been going, that recording could now be altered too!

    Yes, who knows with Sly Moore on the case.

    But, you couldn't possibly be that evil to keep us in this suspense for much longer? Or could you...

    Not too much longer, we promise.

    WANNA-BE-JEDI-KNIGHT: Treading lightly. Padme really needs to watch her steps. Its bad enough liing to Anakin.

    Yes she does. [face_worried]

    Lea-El: Mon Mothma called before the council interesting.

    It's good they are going to listen to it before they destroy it. I just hope Ani doesn't get wind of the recording.


    Yes, it is a good thing.

    Good post

    Thank you!

    randomangel22: Uh-oh Padme you should've at least listened to the tape first .

    Yes, she should've.

    Padme better be careful she's letting her personal feelings get in the way of her investigation .

    Definitely.

    Great update .

    Thanks!

    ROTSFan: I have confidence the council will be fair to Mon, they always have a sense for who is a light sider and who isn't.

    Yes they do.

    Uh-oh! Poor Padme. She's trusting them to destroy the tape but I have a feeling it will come back to bite her anyway and threaten her and Anakin's trust.

    It just might. [face_worried]

    FitJedi: I agree with the aforementioned that Padme isn't thinking very straight right now and I have a feeling it will come to bite her in the butt later on. Very interesting that the council wants a private session with Mon Mothma, it will be interesting to see what is said and what the council does with that information.

    Yes it will be interesting what they decide to do.

    VA_Parky: Ooooh boy, things just keep getting more and more complicated! That's okay though - I love it when the plot thickens! Makes me wonder how everything is going to sort itself out!

    Don't worry, it will eventually.

    Mon Mothma was cool in this chapter - I love the way you portray her. So calm and collected - she's handling the stress a lot better than I would!

    Yes, she's a great character, isn't she?

    Congrats on another great chapter. You two are quite a team!

    Thank you very much!

    VaderLVR64: Uh oh. I wonder what will happen next. And I don't think Padme can keep this hidden from Anakin for very long.

    It defintely is something very hard to keep from a Jedi like Anakin.

    jedi_princess18: Uh oh. I get the feeling that the datapad is going to cause a lot of trouble....

    Who knows, it might. [face_worried]

    JadeSolo: Yeah right Anakin won't find out. Famous last words. I don't know whether to be excited or worried about the upcoming fireworks.

    Maybe a mixture of both would be your best bet.

    Whie and Scout! Nice to see them make an appearance. I don't think Mon Mothma has anything to worry about from the Council, but then you two might pull an evil surprise...

    We might...or we might not.

    Jedi_Master_Cazz: Oooh, yeah, thats what they all say, "Anakin won't find out!" *Hands Padme SW novel* Read it and weep, girlfriend!

    Good point. [face_laugh]

    G__Anakin: Sorry I'm so late!!!

    Great job!

    Nice insert there!


    We're so glad you enjoyed
     
  3. piratedreamer

    piratedreamer Jedi Youngling star 3

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

    and that is all I have to say on the matter. period. (well that and I'd like to borrow Gizzi1213's 2 x 4 to use on our overly-sentimental-and-slightly-stupid-but-lovable Padme)
     
  4. Kelia-Lily

    Kelia-Lily Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Chapter 34


    Mon Mothma gracefully strode into the Jedi Council chambers. With her shoulders squared, she stood regally before the twelve members, calmly waiting for the meeting to begin. She felt the eyes of everyone on her, but she didn?t waver one bit. So much was at stake here, and she only hoped they would listen to reason.

    ?Senator Mon Mothma,? Mace Windu began in a solemn tone. ?Do you know why we?ve requested your presence this afternoon??

    ?I would imagine it has something to do with my viewing the security tape of Senator Zar?s final afternoon.?

    Mace and Yoda exchanged knowing glances. And for some reason that gave her a small bit of comfort.

    ?Draw a conclusion from viewing the tape did you?? Yoda studied her carefully as he waited for her reply.

    ?Yes,? Mon Mothma said simply. She endured the awkward silence that followed by staring confidently ahead.

    ?Would you care to share them with us?? Ki-Adi-Mundi asked dryly.

    Mon Mothma thought silently for a moment. ?Might I inquire why the Jedi Council is interested in my observations??

    ?We seek only to confirm what we have learned,? Yoda replied in an amused tone, his ears twitching.

    ?I see.? Mon Mothma took a moment to glance around the room at each of the assembled Masters. She smiled in understanding when her eyes met Anakin?s.

    ?I believe the tape was altered before Knight Skywalker viewed it,? she announced confidently.

    ?Agree with you we do,? Yoda answered ominously.

    Mon Mothma blinked in surprise. ?However, I do not know who may have altered it or how,? she continued.

    ?We do,? Obi-Wan began. ?And?,?

    ?It was Sly Moore,? Anakin interrupted, ignoring the startled looks from the rest of the Council.

    ?I see.? Mon Mothma turned to face Yoda. ?Then perhaps you should have summoned her here instead of me.?

    ?We would have if we could prove it,? Obi-Wan sighed. ?But the Chancellor?s aide has been very successful in covering her tracks.?

    ?I don?t think I can help you obtain the proof,? Mon Mothma replied sadly.

    ?We know,? Mace interjected. ?That is why we have summoned you here.?

    Mon Mothma gazed at him in confusion. If she wasn?t here to receive judgment for her actions then why was she here exactly?

    ?We would like your assistance in setting a little trap for Ms. Moore.?

    Mon Mothma gasped. This was definitely not what she expected to hear, but she was pleased to know the Council had a plan in mind.

    ?I?m more than happy to help the Jedi in anyway I can,? she replied knowing if the Council was suspicious of Sly, it would only be a matter of time before they were equally suspicious of Palpatine. Having the Jedi as allies in exposing what was really going on in the Senate was just the sort of help she and her colleagues needed.

    ?There is some danger involved,? Kit Fisto warned.

    ?But we will protect you,? Anakin vowed, once again earning aggravated looks from the Masters.

    ?I am willing to accept the risks,? Mon Mothma assured them. ?If it means exposing corruption in the Senate. What exactly would you like me to do??

    She listened attentively as Mace carefully explained their plan.
    ?That will certainly get Sly?s attention,? she mused.

    ?We will have someone from the Council watching you both closely,? Mace continued. ?Your risk should be minimal.?

    ?Thank you,? Mon Mothma replied. ?When would you like to begin??

    ?Tomorrow,? Mace declared firmly. ?The sooner we expose Ms. Moore, the safer we will all be.?

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

    Padme palmed open the door to Chancellor Palpatine?s office, hoping the office would still be empty. Palpatine was supposed to be in meetings all afternoon and all she wanted to do was pick up the data pad and get it safely home before it caused anymore trouble.

    She stepped inside, freezing at the sight of Sly Moore working quietly at Palpatine?s desk. Feeling a sense of dread, she slowly walked into the room.

    ?Good Afternoon, Sly,? Padme greeted, swallowing the lump in her throat a
     
  5. Gizzi1213

    Gizzi1213 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    **Hands piratedreamer the 2 x 4** Just don't shatter it over her stubborn noggin!

    Edited to add:

    Piratedreamer, you're gonna have to share the 2 x 4! Goodness Padme! Could you draw any more attention to that data pad with a neon sign???

    **heads to lumberyard for more 2 x 4s - or perhaps a railroad tie? Hmmmm....**
     
  6. Daenarrah

    Daenarrah Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Hm...[face_thinking] What is it that the council are going to have Mothma do? I love the vagueness so we have to wait and find out. Good to see Anakin knows who to investigate.

    Now Padme. I can understand how Sly makes her uncomfortable but she really needs to be more careful because now Sly is suspicious of what's on her desk. Not good.

    This was quite the intriguing chapter. You now have me dying to find out what this plan is. Great job here.
     
  7. VaderLVR64

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    ?That won?t be necessary,? Sly interrupted, making her way around the desk. ?The Chancellor has an errand for you.?

    Padme stopped, whirling around in surprise. ?An errand??

    ?Yes. Queen Breha is scheduled to arrive at the Chancellor?s private landing dock within the hour. He would like you to be there to greet her and escort her to the MedCenter to see her husband.?

    ?I?d be happy to,? Padme smiled, relief washing over her. ?I just need to?,?

    ?You have another personal task?? Sly sneered indignantly, frowning in annoyance.

    Padme gulped, icy shivers traveling down her spine. She glanced quickly at the data pad lying in the center of the desk.

    ?Really Miss Naberrie if you can?t handle the being the Chancellor?s personal assistant?,?

    ?I?ll go right away,? Padme interjected, starting toward her desk, ?I just need to pick up?,? she paused at the glare Sly threw her way. ?Never mind, it can wait.? She turned back around, walking as quickly as she could from the room.


    Okay, now I'm worried. Well, MORE worried. [face_worried]

    Great update. =D=
     
  8. WANNA-BE-JEDI-KNIGHT

    WANNA-BE-JEDI-KNIGHT Jedi Master star 3

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    So if Mon Mothma is in on this does that mean that Padme's role is receding?
     
  9. VA_Parky

    VA_Parky Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yikes! [face_worried] Sly is somehow becoming more and more evil with every passing post. As soon as I see her name appear, I feel like I need to pull on my winter jacket. She's just so cold... She has definitely inspired several cases of the heebie jeebies.

    I'm so excited that the Council is going to be setting a trap for Sly. Now we just have to hope that she waltzes right into it. And three cheers for Mon Mothma for being so willing to help - she's such a neat character and you two write her so well. @};-

    Bravo! =D=
     
  10. Lea-El

    Lea-El Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Things are starting to get exciting. A trap for Sly and maybe one for Padme.

    Can't wait to see how this turns out.

    Good work
    =D==D==D=
     
  11. FitJedi

    FitJedi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oh Padme.. always trying to figure a way out but I think she may have given herself away this time. Here's hoping for the best, and also for being very interested to see what the council will have Mon Mothma do to set up Sly.
     
  12. Jedi_Kassandra

    Jedi_Kassandra Jedi Knight star 1

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    Sly watched her leave, a suspicious frown on her face before turning her attention to Padme?s desk. ?What was so important on that desk??


    Hmmm...Sly better not find out about the datapad! Nasty things would be happening then...

    ~kass
     
  13. piratedreamer

    piratedreamer Jedi Youngling star 3

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    *goes off to help Gizzi1213 find that railroad tie* oh Padme, Padme, Padme! you really need to work on your subtleness... And I hope Mon Mothma can help without jeprodizing (sp?) Padme's position...And why do I get the feeling that this "errand" of the emperor's might not be just a little 'ole innocent errand? [face_worried]
     
  14. ROTSFan

    ROTSFan Jedi Master star 4

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    I wonder if this is a legitimate errand or another trap for Padme. Hopefully Anakin's protective senses where she's concerned are up. [face_worried]

    Good characterization of Mon, she's an excellent Senator as she is cool under pressure. Too bad Padme isn't as quick a thinker. [face_shame_on_you] If she would have just shown disgust with Sly's attitude and picked up the datapad on her way out she probably wouldn't have aroused any suspicion. Sly knows she's a brat :p
     
  15. AnakinLuver

    AnakinLuver Jedi Padawan star 4

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    [face_shame_on_you]

    Rachel Rose
     
  16. Jedi_Master_Cazz

    Jedi_Master_Cazz Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Uh oh! Run Padme!!! Short post! Too short! More!

    Cheers_Cazza@};-
     
  17. randomangel22

    randomangel22 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    OK is it just me or is Padme more trouble than she's worth o_O??

    But I'm glad that the Council and Anakin figured out that Sly's behind everything and maybe soon they'll see that Palps is too [face_worried]...
     
  18. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Author Announcement: Due to DRL issues on my end :(:(, the next update won't be until 3/19/07. I apologize for the delay and I hope everyone will stick around for the explosive updates yet to come...


    ~Kelia~
     
  19. FitJedi

    FitJedi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sorry to hear that DRL has interferred with this wonderful fic but never fear we will all be here when you update-- take your time and I hope life treats you kindly.
     
  20. Gizzi1213

    Gizzi1213 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Ah...thanks for the heads up. Hope DRL lets up on you soon!
     
  21. jedi_princess18

    jedi_princess18 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Another great update! Unfortunately Sly is going to be suspicious of the data pad now.....
     
  22. ObiWans_Gurl86

    ObiWans_Gurl86 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Hello, I just found this story and I just caught up...oh the plot is soooo thick!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that evil Palpatine can be brought DOWN!!!!! Can I be added to the Pm list please? Wonderful job can't wait for more =D=
     
  23. Star_Angel

    Star_Angel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I can understand why Padmé was worried. I would be to but since it wasn?t an accident in the first place, I wonder if it will happen again. And I?m also glad that the Council have something in mind. Amazing updates, I love this story.
     
  24. Kelia-Lily

    Kelia-Lily Jedi Youngling star 1

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    VaderLVR64: Okay, now I'm worried. Well, MORE worried.

    With good reason.

    Great update.

    Thank you!

    WANNA-BE-JEDI-KNIGHT: So if Mon Mothma is in on this does that mean that Padme's role is receding?

    Possibly, but we're not through with her yet.

    VA_Parky: Yikes! Sly is somehow becoming more and more evil with every passing post. As soon as I see her name appear, I feel like I need to pull on my winter jacket. She's just so cold... She has definitely inspired several cases of the heebie jeebies.

    Yeah, she definitely a nasty piece of work, isn't she?

    I'm so excited that the Council is going to be setting a trap for Sly. Now we just have to hope that she waltzes right into it. And three cheers for Mon Mothma for being so willing to help - she's such a neat character and you two write her so well.

    We're so happy you like the way we write Mon.

    Bravo!

    Thank you!

    Lea-El: Things are starting to get exciting. A trap for Sly and maybe one for Padme.

    Yeah, something's happening that's for sure.

    Can't wait to see how this turns out.

    Good work


    Thank you very much!

    FitJedi: Oh Padme.. always trying to figure a way out but I think she may have given herself away this time. Here's hoping for the best, and also for being very interested to see what the council will have Mon Mothma do to set up Sly.

    She very well might've, or not. [face_thinking]

    Sorry to hear that DRL has interferred with this wonderful fic but never fear we will all be here when you update-- take your time and I hope life treats you kindly.

    Thank you for understanding. [:D]

    Jedi_Kassandra: Hmmm...Sly better not find out about the datapad! Nasty things would be happening then...

    That's for sure. [face_worried]

    piratedreamer: *goes off to help Gizzi1213 find that railroad tie* oh Padme, Padme, Padme! you really need to work on your subtleness... And I hope Mon Mothma can help without jeprodizing (sp?) Padme's position...And why do I get the feeling that this "errand" of the emperor's might not be just a little 'ole innocent errand?

    Padme is definitely not doing much to help herself right now. And who knows what Palpatine could be up to.

    ROTSFan: I wonder if this is a legitimate errand or another trap for Padme. Hopefully Anakin's protective senses where she's concerned are up.

    Yeah definitely.

    Good characterization of Mon, she's an excellent Senator as she is cool under pressure. Too bad Padme isn't as quick a thinker. If she would have just shown disgust with Sly's attitude and picked up the datapad on her way out she probably wouldn't have aroused any suspicion. Sly knows she's a brat

    Yeah, it's unfortunate that Padme did rouse Sly's suspicions.

    AnakinLuver: [face_shame_on_you]

    [face_worried]

    Jedi_Master_Cazz: Uh oh! Run Padme!!! Short post! Too short! More!

    More is coming soon, we promise.

    randomangel22: OK is it just me or is Padme more trouble than she's worth ??

    Well she does have somewhat of an excuse.

    But I'm glad that the Council and Anakin figured out that Sly's behind everything and maybe soon they'll see that Palps is too ...

    Maybe they will...Or maybe not.

    Gizzi1213:Ah...thanks for the heads up. Hope DRL lets up on you soon!

    We appreciate it.

    jedi_princess18: Another great update! Unfortunately Sly is going to be suspicious of the data pad now.....

    Thank you very much!

    ObiWans_Gurl86: Hello, I just found this story and I just caught up...oh the plot is soooo thick!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that evil Palpatine can be brought DOWN!!!!! Can I be added to the Pm list please? Wonderful job can't wait for more
    We're so glad you found and are enjoying this story! And we would be happy to add you to the pm list. :D

    Star_
     
  25. DarthSilious

    DarthSilious Jedi Youngling star 1

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    That's ok, just gives us time to build up our sense of anticipation. Can't wait to see what the next update brings - and hope that Sly Moore gets her come upppance!
     
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