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Saga A Necessary Deception...AU/Romantic Intrigue...A/P...Completed 06/25/07

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Kelia-Lily, Jun 19, 2006.

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  1. lady_sapphire

    lady_sapphire Jedi Youngling star 3

    Feb 12, 2005
    Hmmm..,Palpatine seems a little too happy about everything. Definitely not a good sign. Anyways, I like the tension between Anakin and Padme even though I have feeling things are going to get really complicated from here.

    Thanks for the PM!
  2. JediLara

    JediLara Jedi Youngling

    Oct 19, 2005
    ?Can I take you home?? Anakin offered.

    :eek: [face_laugh] =P~

    Padme, just say yes dear!

    I loved Ani's akwardness at the end.

    Nice update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
  3. Across_The_Stars-24

    Across_The_Stars-24 Jedi Youngling star 1

    Oct 27, 2005
    Thanks for the pm. The chapter was great.

    Anakin & Padme were sweet together. Way Anakin took his time with Padme was great. He was worried about her safety. Anakin was all to willing to see Padme tomorrow at her apartment.

    Palpatine is trying to push Anakin & Padme together. Wonder what he is up to. I wounder is he trying to cover his tracks or push them together...

    Hopefully Anakin & Padme will find out he is a sith lord soon.
  4. TnTornado

    TnTornado Jedi Knight star 3

    Jun 10, 2006
    Hmm, I'm puzzled at this point as to Anakins intentions - is he dark or light or grey at this point? Which way is he leaning?

    Great update btw,

  5. jedi_princess18

    jedi_princess18 Jedi Youngling star 3

    Jun 7, 2005
    Palpatine is so crafty- he obviously wants Padme out of the way for some reason. Perhaps he has something to hide? [face_thinking]

    Well, it looks like Anakin and Padme will be missing their dinner- at least they will see each other tomorrow. [face_love]
  6. Amidala66

    Amidala66 Jedi Padawan star 4

    Jul 14, 2005
    what a cute exchange between our couple[face_love]

    nice update:)
  7. michaellover

    michaellover Jedi Youngling star 3

    May 30, 2005
    oh man, this is getting nasty :oops: she is going to have to lie to Ani, because wherever he knows it or not, he is a bigger pawn is Palpatine's game than she is
  8. Daenarrah

    Daenarrah Jedi Youngling star 3

    Nov 12, 2005
    Padmé finds herself in a real sticky situation with Anakin leading the investigation. I hope it doesn't cause trouble for them. Though, I have a feeling Palpatine will make sure it does.

    It was so sweet how Anakin was concerned for her and wanted to comfort her, and hold off until later to question her. She should have agreed to that. Then he sticks his foor in his mouth. Poor guy. He was only trying to help, but it came out all wrong.

    Another great chapter here. I'm really enjoying this.
  9. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Feb 5, 2004
    Poor Anakin got flustered. [face_laugh] A lovely chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

    Padme sighed in defeat. She had been hoping to question some of the other Senators tonight but with Palpatine?s insistence she go home, there was no way she could pull it off. Not without making the Chancellor suspicious and that was the last thing she wanted.

    ?I?ll be off then,? she said heading towards the door.

    ?Can I take you home?? Anakin offered.

    Padme shot him a startled look; 'did he actually say that?'

    ?Why did I say just say that?? Anakin groaned. ?Um?I..uh?I meant escort you home??

    ?Um?no, thank you,? Padme replied, a slight blush forming on her cheeks. ?It?s?I?I?only live a few blocks away.? She turned and hastily left the office.

    He could take ME home! ;)
  10. JediKaris

    JediKaris Jedi Youngling star 1

    Oct 19, 2005
    Awww...Anakin is so sweet to offer to question Padme later and then offer to take her home.

    [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    I can't wait to see how the morning goes in her apartment.

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
  11. FitJedi

    FitJedi Jedi Padawan star 4

    Jan 14, 2006
    hmm... very interesting. Nice to see Anakin so worried about Padme during his interrogation. Can't wait for more.
  12. JadeSolo

    JadeSolo Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Sep 20, 2002
    ?Can I take you home?? Anakin offered.

    You bet your pretty blue eyes you can! :*

    I bet Palpatine's shooing her off so he can clean up after himself - I mean, the assassin. [face_mischief] And no doubt he's delighted that she and Anakin are throwing sparks at each other. The more distracted they are, the easier he can slip his nefarious doings by them. Another great post, ladies!
  13. QueenSith

    QueenSith Jedi Youngling star 1

    Oct 15, 2005
    I love the Ani - Padme interaction!

    [face_love] [face_love]

    Hmmm....Palpatine suggesting the questioning continue in Padme's apartment?
    He's up to something, I just know it.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
  14. Jedi_Master_Cazz

    Jedi_Master_Cazz Jedi Master star 4

    Sep 13, 2005
    :eek: :eek: :eek: ... She refused?

    Why, would anyone refuse an offer to be escorted home by Anakin?

    It's insane.

  15. RyooNaberrie

    RyooNaberrie Jedi Knight star 1

    Feb 1, 2006
    That was so sweet... "Can I take you home?"..... pure brilliance!

  16. delta-7starfighter

    delta-7starfighter Jedi Master star 4

    Nov 12, 2005
    Palpatine frowned. ?I think you?ve been through enough for one evening,? he replied looking pointedly at Anakin. ?Might I suggest the rest of your questions wait until tomorrow??

    As much as I agree that it should have- Palpy didn't have to snap about it.[face_frustrated]

    Aw, she refused his lovely offer.:( Why does it have to be this way?:_|

    Great update!
    Thanks for the PM!
  17. Kelia-Lily

    Kelia-Lily Jedi Youngling star 1

    Jun 5, 2006
    G__Anakin:Great chapter thanks for the PM

    Thank you and you're most welcome.

    VA_Parky:Hee! I love Flustered!Padme! And Anakin certainly isn't making matters any easier, is he? I just adore those two together!

    Poor Padme, but she DOES have Anakin falling for her.

    I must know - what in the world is Palpatine up to? And why does it seem that he is pushing Padme and Anakin together? Surely he must realize that Anakin is going to become fiercely protective of her... oh dear - several plot possibilities just opened up and none of them appear very good for Padme!

    You're VERY right.

    Looking forward to the next chapter. Well done!!

    Thank you!!

    randomangel22:loved the awkardness between the two it was hilarious!!! "Can I take you home?" i would die if anakin asked me that then i would wake up and say yes !!!

    I think we all would.[face_love]

    Lea-El: Take you home- Did he leave 'with me' off that question??

    Perhaps ;)

    Padme is so smart, she's starting to distrust Palpatine.

    Of course.

    Now if they can keep their hormones in check long enough to put two and two together, they will maybe have a better outcome.

    Good work

    Thank you!!

    PS nice vacation??

    Lily:Yes it was good despite spraining my ankle and getting a ton of bug bites. :D

    MoAngel: I like this angle your taking. Of course the interaction between Anakin and Padme is the heart of the story and shows there's still a spark there, that will hopefully turn into a raging inferno very soon. Can I be added to your PM list?

    Things certainly are starting to blossum between Ani and Padme. We would be happy to add you to the pm list, thanks for reading!

    Star_Angel :Yeah, I bet, Ani you love sick puppy, well, he is my love sick puppy but still .

    Yes, isn't he cute?

    Oh, evil way to end this, well, I think so anyway, hmm, I wonder if Anakin was right when he thought that whoever did killed the Senator might be after Padmé now.

    He might be right...or he might not.

    Hmm, well, two amazing update and thanks for the pm, I just can?t wait to read more.

    Thank you, more is on the way.

    anakin_luver:I definitely think Palps has a plan going on...and it has to involve Padme and Anakin ending up together...But are they going to help him, or does he want something from their relationship?...that is what I must figure out!

    Palpatine does have a plan but what exactly it is will be revealed at a later date.

    Yes, very evil way to end this...we need more!

    More coming soon.

    Anakin at Padme's apartment...I smell romance

    Great chap!


    AnakinLuver: awwww... the awkwardness between those two is so adorable!! I love it!

    Glad you like it.

    Anakin is so sweet and such a gentlemen... I want him!

    We all do. =P~

    Palpatine has something up his sleeve... as always...

    Yes he does.

    I think Anakin is right in saying she needs someone to escort her home... I think something bad is going to happen to her...

    You'll see.

    great update... post soon!

    Thanks, will do.

    lady_sapphire:Hmmm..,Palpatine seems a little too happy about everything. Definitely not a good sign. Anyways, I like the tension between Anakin and Padme even though I have feeling things are going to get really complicated from here.

    We will promise there will be comlications of some sort.

    Thanks for the PM!

    You're welcome.

    JediLara: Padme, just say yes dear!

    I loved Ani's akwardness at the end.

    Nice update

    So glad you enjoyed it.:)


    Thanks for the pm. The chapter was great.

    Thank you!!

    Anakin & Padme were sweet together. Way Anakin took his time with Padme was great. He was worried about her safety. Anakin wa
  18. Kelia-Lily

    Kelia-Lily Jedi Youngling star 1

    Jun 5, 2006
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    Chapter 7

    Padme shut the door to the Chancellor?s office and let out a deep breath of disappointment. Her head was spinning with the events of the evening and the frustration of being sent home when she was eager to begin her looking into Fang Zar?s death. ?I?m not some helpless little girl who can?t handle reality,? she thought angrily.

    The memory of seeing such an appalling display continued to haunt her and Padme was determined to discover if Palpatine was in fact responsible. If he was she knew that proving such a thing would be even more difficult. Should the assassin catch her, the consequences would be severe indeed.

    It didn?t help that Anakin was heading up the Jedi?s investigation. ?How am I supposed to discretely investigate the very same crime as a Jedi?? she moaned. A Senatorial investigator would have been easy enough to work around, it wouldn?t have even been a problem to wean information out of the investigator on the pretense of keeping the Chancellor informed but Anakin reported directly to Palpatine. He wouldn?t be so easily charmed.

    ?How did things become so complicated so fast?? she moaned wearily. ?Enough complaining, Padme,? she scolded herself, annoyed at her defeatist attitude. She would somehow find a way to investigate Fang Zar?s death and keep it from Anakin? ?I know I can do it,? she declared firmly. ?I will not allow my growing attraction to Anakin to interfere with my duty.?

    Padme sighed when her thoughts started to turn to Anakin again. ?How can he keep my attention like this when I?m not even in the same room?? she wondered briefly. She couldn?t deny that she was captivated by him, but this mission was more important. She couldn?t let others meet Fang Zar?s fate.

    ?Miss Naberrie.? Bail Organa approached her slowly accompanied by several of his staff. ?I heard you were the one to discover Senator Zar this evening.? He took her hands into his. ?I?m very sorry for your experience and I hope you are coping all right.?

    Padme felt the distinct pressure of a holo recorder being pressed into her palm. ?I?m fine, thank you Senator Organa.? She smiled warmly at him curling her fingers around the recorder as he released her hands. Vaguely she wondered why he was trying to communicate to her using a different method.

    ?I?m glad to hear that,? he replied. ?And I certainly hope you don?t let this evening?s unfortunate incident deter you from continuing your duties as the Chancellor?s aide. Good evening.? He nodded at her slightly and continued down the corridor.

    ~ *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

    Padme rushed to her small apartment as quickly as she could. Whatever information was contained on the holo recorder, it had to be vitally important for Bail to risk passing it to her in the heavily monitored Senate hallway. Settling into a comfortable chair, she turned on the recorder and watched intently as Bail?s image appeared.

    ?Padme.? His voice was grave, his face lined with grief. ?I apologize for contacting you this way instead of our agreed upon method but I?ve come across some information that leads me to believe Senator Zar was murdered and I would like you to do what you can to look into the events leading up to his death.?

    ?So I?m not the only one suspicious,? Padme thought.

    ?Last night, I contacted Senator Zar and asked him to meet with Senator Haiken to warn him about Palpatine?s plan to meet with all the Senators who opposed his latest legislation,? he paused, frowning. ?Zar met with him this afternoon.?

    ?So that?s why I couldn?t get in touch with him.? Padme braced herself, preparing for the rest of B
  19. G__Anakin

    G__Anakin Jedi Master star 4

    Apr 2, 2006
    Great Chapter thanks for the PM
  20. Across_The_Stars-24

    Across_The_Stars-24 Jedi Youngling star 1

    Oct 27, 2005
    Thanks for the pm. The chapter was great.

    Padme does not like Palpatine coddling her. She had a great respect for the murdered senator. I thought it was cute that she would not let her attraction to Anakin stand in her way heed investigation. She is really worried about the jedi investigation in her way to heed her investigation.

    Bail is now starting to get desperate since the murdered senator changed his vote that morning.

    I think Palpatine ordered his murder by his henchmen. He doesn't seem the typed to sullen his hands with the dirty work.

    I guess we'll see.
  21. AnakinLuver

    AnakinLuver Jedi Padawan star 4

    Feb 13, 2006
    Oooh! Things are about to get very interesting indeed!

    I love Padme's internal battles... and she is very worried about Anakin leading the investigation... something is going to happen isn't it?

    and Bail's beginning to suspect things as well as Padme...

    I hope nothing happens to Bail... that would be awful...

    Senator Haiken doesn't seem respectable anymore... or is it really him?

    Rachel Rose@};-
  22. Lea-El

    Lea-El Jedi Master star 4

    Aug 13, 2005
    Thanks for the pm.@};-

    Intriguing post ...if I change my mindyou'll know something wrong hum![face_thinking]

    Good work
  23. Star_Angel

    Star_Angel Jedi Padawan star 4

    Jan 18, 2006
    Interesting and amazing update.

    ?How can he keep my attention like this when I?m not even in the same room??

    Well, he is Ani so it?s not as shocking as one might think.

    Thanks for the pm.
  24. MoAngel

    MoAngel Jedi Youngling star 2

    Jul 13, 2005
    Ahh, the intrigue knows no bounds. Very good chapter, well except for the no Anakin part!

  25. lady_sapphire

    lady_sapphire Jedi Youngling star 3

    Feb 12, 2005
    Well...I told you. Things are going to get very interesting on all fronts now I guess.

    Thanks for the PM!
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