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Saga A New Life ( Oc's, Jedi Purge, viggie)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Force-sensitiveLyn23, Sep 25, 2005.

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  1. Force-sensitiveLyn23

    Force-sensitiveLyn23 Jedi Master star 1

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    I walk around aimlessly, looking at the tragedy before me. Diners and Shops are closed, never to be reopened. There is blood on the streets. The air hangs heavily with the smell of smoke and burning flesh.

    There is the scent of no hope.

    Dressed in my tattered rags, i look like a citizen who belongs on the lowest level of Coruscant. I see a lone surivior. But then, there is a sound, it penetrates the eerie silence, and the Survivor falls. Like so many others.

    I have to get our of here. It's not safe. I must be disguised.

    i finger my braid, if only my master was here to cut it off, it would be alrights. Sort of. I hold the polished hilt of my lightsaber in my hand. Aching to activate it, but knowing it is not safe. Then I hear footsteps.

    I cut off the braid with the saber, being carefull not to cut myself.

    Then i walk away from the temple to start a new life.

    A single tear falls from my eye.
     
  2. KylieKenobi

    KylieKenobi Jedi Master star 1

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    Sep 25, 2005
    yay. You posted this. Jazzie would be soo proud......

    Why isnt anyone else replying to this wonderfull story?????????????????????
     
  3. KylieKenobi

    KylieKenobi Jedi Master star 1

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    Sep 25, 2005
    boo hoo nobody appreciates you
     
  4. KylieKenobi

    KylieKenobi Jedi Master star 1

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    master, will u read her story?

    its good and she has noo replies!
     
  5. whiskers

    whiskers Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    May 19, 2005
    Nice little vignette here. It's short, but it really doesn't need to be any longer. Good job!
     
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