A new Vader fic (As yet to be titled)

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  1. sabrelight Force Ghost

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    Synopses

    Ten years after turning to the dark side, Vader who is now 31, is frantically searching for his wife and child. He has commissioned hundreds of agents and promised millions in rewards. Though his search has yielded only wrong calls thus far.



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    Darth Vader strode hurriedly through the white corridors of his flagship, ?The devastator.? Though not exactly famous for his fine moods, to the crew working round the ship, he seemed extra tetchy as he stormed past this time. They did well to keep clear of him-it could be a matter of life and death.

    ?What?s eating at the Bad Boss today?? One of the young officers whispered to his friend. But they all knew who or what could be responsible for these bad moods of the unforgiving Sith. It was either the rebellion or that accursed Jedi Knight Kenobi. ?Why can?t they just surrender and make our lives less miserable?? The other whispered back. ?Someone?s going to pay for those brigands? actions.?

    ?My Lord!? A thin tall man stepped before Vader as he turned the corner to his quarters. Vader stopped short suddenly, his cape whirling around him as the Sith ground to a halt.

    ?I have good news for you?? The man said with a thin smile, his anticipation of the forth-coming reward was all too manifest in his small beady eyes.

    ?It better be her or you shall pay dearly if you disappoint me this time, Agent Thawar!? Vader said in a thick voice muffled by his black hideous mask.

    ?Milord, I?m am certain it is her, or, it could be her twin for no other could resemble her so closely.?

    ?She did not have a twin,? Vader reiterated angrily. ?Thawar, I must warn you that I am in no mood for assumptions.? The dark Lord said as he lifted the imperial agent off his feet. ?Sir??

    ?Show her to me,? He hissed as he dumped the agent back unceremoniously on the floor.

    The agent hurriedly scurried to his feet and led the way as the Sith followed.

    Thawar stood before the door of a stateroom. A big smile graced his face as he reached for the open switch.

    ?You brought her to my private quarters?? Vader hissed and pushed the man away from the door.

    ?Sir, I think you?d want that for her.? The conviction in the man?s voice made him curious.

    The door slid open and Vader stepped in hastily.

    A young woman sitting on the bed jumped to her feet, her hands clutched at her breasts as she back peddled slowly to the far wall. She stared at the dark imposing figure before her, the blood left her cheeks and Vader thought she might faint.

    ?P?Padme!? Vader stuttered in a hoarse voice, heavy with disbelief.

    "No...No I'm not Padme." The girl said haltingly. "My...name...is...Ryoo."

  2. stacysatrip Jedi Master

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    OOH, that's good! I love Vadey/Padme encounters!
  3. Floorfiller1618 Jedi Knight

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    Awesome start. I love Padme/Vader fics... hope you keep this one going
  4. Monica_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    :eek: Wow, I love it so far!! :D

    I can't wait for more!
  5. Hippety_Hopper Jedi Knight

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    Wonderful start! Keep it UP! :)
  6. sabrelight Force Ghost

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    Thanks. BTW I'm doing another vader fic,'Knight of darkness' its in my sig if you guys are interested.
  7. debeautimous Jedi Master

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    Whoa her niece??? Intrigueing! :D
  8. Sara_Kenobi Force Ghost

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    Oh, I do like this one. :D




    *Adds to list of bookmarks*



  9. Jedi_Mastre_Kris Jedi Master

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    Sabre! *looks accusingly at her* another one? you just might give Meredith a run for her money! [face_laugh]

    but really, this, like all yur other fics :p is dragging me in yet again!

    ... :eek: and I can't believe he captured RYOO!!!! Padmé's niece!! *gasp*

    ~UP!!!!!!!
  10. sabrelight Force Ghost

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    Kris, don't compare Meredith to me, she's a real writer(One of my favorites) Me, I just stitch the words and do my best to change the pictures in my head into words.

    As for Ryoo, who else would resemble Padme so closely but her niece.
  11. Dally Force Ghost

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    I like it! Will Vader find the real Padme?
  12. kithana Jedi Knight

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    upage to find later :D


    Kithana
  13. kithana Jedi Knight

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    Oh look its Ryoo.... and Vader called her Padme..... thats not right [face_curious]. WANT MORE.

    Well sabrelight lets try and post frequently on this fic huh ;) .

    Kithana
  14. sabrelight Force Ghost

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    Vader thinks its Padme because this young woman looks like her. Remember VAder is 31 and since he's round 13 years older(She was 6 when he was 19) than Ryoo is about 20 years.

    As for posting on a regular basis, keep your fingers crossed. Posted another installment of "Flames'
  15. Jedi_Suzuran Jedi Grand Master

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    Ooh, you've intrigued me now, sabre. :D

    Vader and Ryoo? :eek:

    I like it!
  16. sabrelight Force Ghost

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    Yep Vader and the beautiful dark eyed Ryoo.
  17. kithana Jedi Knight

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    SABRELIGHT FICS:

    [yoda voice] Knight of Darkness and FLAMES you must read [/yoda voice] :p

    SO wiat Sabrelight your telling me that this is a R/V fic not a V/P fic.....*shrugs* not that i really care please write more just make it soon okay :D .

    Kithana :D
  18. sabrelight Force Ghost

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    Kithana, you know how stingy I am with giving away plot lines. So you'll have to wait.I'm working on KOD for the moment.
  19. Shezan Jedi Knight

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    Hmmm, that's a promising one.

    [grabbing popcorn & hitting the ATN switch...]

    :D
  20. Jesus_The_Hut Jedi Knight

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    HI sabrelight it took me a while but were i am! :cool:
    btw Shezan can i have some popcorn? :D
  21. kithana Jedi Knight

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    Kithana, you know how stingy I am with giving away plot lines. So you'll have to wait.I'm working on KOD for the moment.

    Gah its a power thing isn't it some of you writers love the power you have over your readers :mad: you want ot torment us and tease us with little posts and just want us to beg for another post.....*grins darkly as she realises she wouldn't mind being in sabrelights position*

    *shrugs* I WANT ANOTHER POST :_| :_| :_| please O:).

    Kithana
  22. Hippety_Hopper Jedi Knight

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    Wonderful!

    More soon, plase!

    *joins Kithana with angel face*
  23. sabrelight Force Ghost

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    I'm working on flames, next will be this fic, meanwhile enjoy the popcorn.


    Kithana, I hate to make my readers wait, I know how frustrating it is, but there is nothing I can do about it. On a more positive note I've got a few days off, and I hope to update all my fics. Fingers crossed.
  24. Jedi_Mastre_Kris Jedi Master

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    yay! new post soon! *does a little dance*


    UP!
  25. Jesus_The_Hut Jedi Knight

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    hey i`m out of popcorn does anybody have some? :)
    UP!
    Ps: cookies are okay too! :D lol
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