Saga A Path Of Your Own Choosing - OT AU - L/H, L/M, OB1, Padme, more - On Hiatus

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by RedGold, Feb 4, 2005.

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  1. StarFighter5 Force Ghost

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    Jul 25, 2003
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    Your interpretaion of the cloud city fight is very entertaining. Luke falling is just as suspensful as its always has been for me.
  2. JadeLotus Force Ghost

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    Mar 27, 2005
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    Exciting update! Although poor Luke has lost his hand - at least he conquered his indecision. Although somehow I don't think Mara is going to be renewing her offer - a woman scorned and all that ;)
  3. penpadme Jedi Knight

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    Jul 12, 2006
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    I just found this and I have to say it is incredible. I love how you have ties everyone together and how they interact. I am hooked! Please update soon and could you please add me to your PM list? Thanks!
  4. Feng_Huang Jedi Knight

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    Apr 17, 2005
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    Great work with the scene, very gripping and tense. The line about paths was perfect.[face_love]=D=

    As for AG88 version... [face_laugh][face_love] surely that would have been the way to go. Mara forgot to take some classes at Palpy's school of romance
  5. MirandaFair Force Ghost

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    Jun 13, 2005
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    Better late, than never. ;) Sorry about that!

    Action-packed, suspenseful chapter, RedGold. The exchanges between Leia and Mara. Very exciting. I know I loved Leia's realization and connection between Luke and Mara's green eyes. Got to love plot!!! You've put a "bee" in Leia's bonnet.

    Luke loosing his hand is even more ironic with this twist of dueling Emperor's Hands. I was wondering how Luke would plummet through Cloud City, and I was on the edge of my seat. Mara really spoke her version of the truth; about power and destiny. But Luke isn't into that. Makes me think what way Mara will go about things if there is a next time. ;)

    Can't wait to see where this goes! =D=
  6. jade51999 Jedi Grand Master

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    Nov 5, 1999
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    Wasn't sure I said anything about the last post...
    So..i'll just say..can't wait for more!
  7. maramijade Jedi Master

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    Feb 17, 2000
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    mmmmm and down luke falls. . .

    :D
  8. tasujad Force Ghost

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    Jun 16, 2005
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  9. TnTornado Jedi Knight

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    Jun 10, 2006
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    JayCee, its been forever since you updated this, and its at a crucial point in the story!

    Please please PLEASE update!

    TnTornado
  10. tasujad Force Ghost

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    Jun 16, 2005
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    bumpady bump

    and still some update would be nice
    /*getting restless*/
  11. Darth_Kripp Jedi Master

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    Oct 12, 2005
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    Wow! Wonderful story! Please PM me when next chapter is ready.
  12. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    Aug 31, 2004
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    Let me add my shameless pleading too! :D ;)
    The story IS at a crucial point, but even if it weren't... I'd still want an update! [face_laugh] Besides L/M, I'm fascinated by the whole group of Darths. They work well as a team, but it wouldn't take much at all to set one against another. :D
  13. jaina_clan_solo Jedi Master

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    Dec 14, 2005
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    This is an amazing story so far :D I've loved every minute of it... and the way you tie in the classic lines and events into this Au is brilliant!

    Could I get a PM when you update please?

    jcs
  14. -DarkScorpion- Jedi Knight

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    Jun 22, 2006
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    This is GREAT!!!
    I powerread the entire thing in 2-3 days and am wanting MORE!!!
    AKA ... WE NEEED A UPDATE

    When you get back put me on the PM list

    -DarkScorpion-
  15. -DarkScorpion- Jedi Knight

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    Jun 22, 2006
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    This is GREAT!!!
    I powerread the entire thing in 2-3 days and am wanting MORE!!!
    AKA ... WE NEEED A UPDATE

    When you get back put me on the PM list

    -DarkScorpion-
  16. Jaded_Rose Jedi Knight

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    Nov 15, 2006
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    Wow... I am staring at my computer screen, completely awed. I love this! I read it all in these last two hours, and I don't think I've spent such a rewarding morning in a long time. Please, update soon? [face_praying] And add me to a PM list, if you keep one?

    J_Ro
  17. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    J_Ro's quickly becoming acclimated to excellence. :D RedGold and JadeLotus are what I like to call sizzle sensations. Their L/M love scenes generate a lot of ... steam! [face_laugh] :) That's why we need an update. 'Cause the L/M ... sexual tension is killing us out here! [face_laugh] [face_batting]
  18. TnTornado Jedi Knight

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    Jun 10, 2006
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    Cmon JayCee, I know your back from out of town ... wherever you went, so can we please have a couple updates here please????

    thanks,

    TnTornado
  19. NinjaSkywalker Jedi Knight

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    Oct 12, 2003
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    More Please?????

    I'm addicted to this story.
  20. DRS Jedi Knight

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    Dec 3, 2006
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    Hello! *Waves*

    I've read this whole story so far, and it was so good and exciting and -

    - then it's not finished. And worse, it's stopped at a cliff-hanger

    I HATE CLIFF-HANGERS!!!!!!!!!!

    Granted, it was more of a cliff-falling-off-of, but you get my point...

    Please, update soon!

    And could you please add me to your PM list? [face_praying]
    *Looks cute and does puppy dog eyes*

    .:}\DRS/{:.
  21. pat_skywalker39 Force Ghost

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    Jan 5, 2004
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  22. Jadie Jedi Master

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    Jan 9, 2005
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    Finally I'm catching up!

    You did an awesome job while I was away, Red!

    Now, give us an update!!! :D
  23. MistiWhitesun Jedi Knight

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    Aug 16, 2004
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    Yay! Caught up!

    Eh, Mara? Helping your [cough]'s sister, indeed? Trying to save him? Very glad that Vrees was frozen.

    [sighs] I realize this is disjointed, but I've basically just caught up on everything? Could I be added back to your PM'd when you update list?

    Thanks!

    -Misti
  24. MagnusPrimal Jedi Knight

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    Jan 9, 2006
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    Seconded!
  25. tasujad Force Ghost

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    Jun 16, 2005
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    Thirded
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