Before - Legends A Plea (Poem. AU. [Obi-Wan])

TITLE: A Plea
AUTHOR: jacen200015
STATUS: complete
CATEGORY: Poem, AU
SPOILERS: In The Shadows series
TIMEFRAME: Obi-Wan's Journal. During his captivity under the Sith
SUMMARY: Obi-Wan?s plea

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Falling,
falling into an endless void,
so black,
so cold.

He wants me,
he?s waiting,
his eyes so dark,
so icy.

Catch me,
find me,
help me,
save me.

His skin is pale,
black bumps dot his skin,
i feel his rough hands,
cold, so cold.

Catch me,
find me,
help me,
save me.

Darkness swirls around him,
threatening to choke me,
to devour me from the inside out,
i feel tendrils of darkness as they touch my mind.

Gone,
all those who could have help me,
gone,
my mentor who saved me.

Catch me,
find me,
help me,
save me.

I will continue fighting,
even as my strength wanes,
my hope sinks,
my mind grows weary.

Catch me,
find me,
help me,
save me.

I?m all alone,
fear gnaws on my mind,
despair gnaws on my heart,
darkness gnaws at my soul.

Catch me,
find me,
help me,
save me.

A trap,
a trap for those who find me,
I will not let that happen,
I must disappear.

Catch me,
find me,
help me,
save me.

The darkness comes.

 

Oh that was great!! Loved it especially these lines:

I?m all alone,
fear gnaws on my mind,
despair gnaws on my heart,
darkness gnaws at my soul.

Awesome work!

 

Kynstar: Oh that was great!! Loved it especially these lines:

I?m all alone,
fear gnaws on my mind,
despair gnaws on my heart,
darkness gnaws at my soul.

Awesome work! Thank you.

 

Top notch work. I really loved it. You really had me tearing up.

 

Very nicely done! Thanks for sharing

 

VadersMistress: Top notch work. I really loved it. You really had me tearing up. Thanks *hands over some tissues*

LadyPadme: Very nicely done! Thanks for sharing Your welcome and thank you

 

Absolutly beautiful I loved it!

Excellant job-

-may the force be with you--

 

Very intense. I LOVE it!! Very good writeing for Obi.

 

Beautifully done!

 

I will continue fighting,
even as my strength wanes,
my hope sinks,
my mind grows weary.

Excellent poem. I especially felt an impact from the part above.

 

Healer_Leona: Wow, those pleas really tear at one. Execellent poem jacen200015. Thanks

kenobiwanobi: Absolutly beautiful I loved it!

Excellant job-

-may the force be with you-- Thank you

Genimay: Very intense. I LOVE it!! Very good writeing for Obi. I'm glad you enjoyed it

VaderLVR64: Beautifully done! Thank you

Jetta: I will continue fighting,
even as my strength wanes,
my hope sinks,
my mind grows weary.

Excellent poem. I especially felt an impact from the part above. Ah yes. That part is powerful. Thanks for reviewing

 

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Beautiful, dark and angsty. What more can you want? Excellent poem.

 

to devour me from the inside out,

Loved that! Chilling poem!

 

___Sithspawn___: Beautiful, dark and angsty. What more can you want? Excellent poem. Thank you

JadeSolo: to devour me from the inside out,

Loved that! Chilling poem! Thank you I've been thinking that maybe I should put this inside Obi-Wan's journal.