A second chance ( a Qui-Gon and obi-wan JA story, angst)

Ahhhh! Qui, help him!!! HELP THE POOR BOY!!!!

More soon please!

 

Post Soon!

 

POst! post! post!

 

Great start, glad to see you decided to keep to it, this is starting to get very interesting.

Can't wait for the next post.

 

HELP HIM

 

Cool! I'm a little confused right now at what's going on, but that aside, I think this is an awesome fic so far. Keep posting

 

*clears throat*

POST A LOT MORE RIGHT THIS INSTANT!!!!!!!

Don't make me start rocking back and forth DEMANDING a new post...

Sorry, slightly sugar high

 

AHHH!!!!!! OBI!!

GO AWAY, EVIL ONE!

Yoda in a thong....ummm...ok....heehee.

I like this, and I agree to get better you must write, you should see some of the crap i wrote when I started, it doesn't even belong in the same room with yours.

This reminds me of 5 deaths to die, or whatever it was called. I like, can't wait for more.

 

OK here's a small update...
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Qui-Gon walks out of the chambers. " Ob-wa-"
Qui-Gon doesn't finish his sentance as he looks to see that obi-wan isn't where he left him and the training bond has been cut.
"Master Yoda! What I said has come true... Obi-Wan is going to be killed again..."

"Qui-Gon, overreacting you are--"

"NO! I'm not overreacting! We have to help him! Is the council going to assist or not?!" Qui-gon shouts feeling like every second in a hour.

" basing your actions on a dream you are "

" It wasn't a Dream! I guess I'm going to save him myself I only hope I'm not too late.."

 

Is he too late?? Is he too late??

 

NO! DON'T BE TOO LATE QUI-GON!

And Yoda, will you shut up about the dreams thing?

 

<(>_<)>

HMPH! LISTEN TO MY WISDOM YOU SHOULD! LEARN MUCH YOU WILL! HMPH!

<(>_<)>

 

Wisdom? Hah!

It's called verbally dyslexic! Don't get them confused. Poor Jedi all think you're wise just cause you can't talk right!

LOL, alright so I'm joking, I like Yoda

 

NEXT POST!!!!
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Obi-Wan looks up at the dark figure in the shadows with clouded vision. " Who are you?" he manages to croke out.

"Shut up boy!" The man shouts and kicks Obi-Wan in the gut.

Obi-Wan's body is forced back by the power of the kick. " why are you doing this?..."

"You ruined my life now I'm going to destroy yours..." The man growls.

"What are you talking about?" Asks Obi-Wan as he trys to get the bond opened again.

"You know very well what I am talking about!" the man yells as he walks toward Obi-Wan.

"NO I don't.." replies Obi-Wan soon regreating it as another booted foot rams into his gut.

"Oh really? Do you remember a Xanatos (sp?) ?"

" Yes but I--" Obi-Wan doesn't get a chance to finish as the man pulls him up by his collar.

"He was my brother!" The man barks then throws Obi-Wan to the ground and slowly pulls out a blaster. " You and your master Killed him... now I will kill you and destroy your Master's life!"

"But we didn't kill him--" Obi-Wan studders as he looks at the blaster.

"LIES!" The man points the blaster at obi-wan's chest. " Prepare to die Jedi..."

 

Ack! Obi!

Qui, get your butt in there now!

 

*Kicks qui-gon in the arse to get him moving*

 

Oh no!
This look really bad!
*Shakes fist at Xanatos*
Get over yourself.....and get a hair cut you hippie!
More soon please!

 

Ohhh.... Xanatos's brother. hehe.

Good post. Hurry up Qui. Time to save your Padawan.

~Swede

 

Move it Qui!!

 

MORE, DARN IT!

 

I'm working on it sheesh

 

here's some more =============================================

Qui-Gon rushes downt he hall. The Bond has finally opened again. Qui-Gon uses the force to lead him to the gardens and he runs in and sees the dark figure about to pull the trigger. "NOOOOO!!!" Qui-Gon yells just as the man pulls the trigger.


TBC

 

That was all? Please tell me more is coming soon!!

 

Hey you can't kill him again! Noooooooo!!!

More please.

~Swede

 

Xanatos's brother!?
Whoops! That went right over my head!
What an intresting turn of events..