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Beyond - Legends A series of A/T vigs... **COMPLETED WITH A HAPPY ENDING***

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Courtney_Solo, Jun 6, 2005.

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  1. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Title: If Only...
    Author(s): Courtney_Solo
    Summary: Tahiri after SbS
    Disclaimer: I don't own any of the charachters but I do own everything I write! :D
    Notes: I've never done any vigs before so please be nice! :)
    Genre: Wishful thinking... :)
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    If Only...

    You Had never accepted the Myrkr Mission.

    If Only...

    I had said 'no' to instead of 'yes' to helping Alema.

    If Only...

    I had kissed you instead of holding back.

    If Only...

    You'd had more sense.

    If Only...

    You were alive, then I wouldn't be dying of Despair.

    If Only...

    You were here for me.

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    How was it? There's more if anyone wants it! :) Courtney
     
  2. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    I'm Sorry... Anakin's response to If Only...
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    I'm Sorry...

    I'm sorry I died.

    I'm Sorry...

    I'm sorry I'm not there for you.

    I'm Sorry...

    I'm sorry I forced you to leave me, when I really needed you.

    I'm Sorry...

    I'm sorry I never REALLY confessed how much I love you.

    I'm Sorry...

    I'm sorry I left you behind.

    But I'm Coming Back...

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    Again Good? Bad? :D
     
  3. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    OK here's the Sequel to I'm Sorry...
    It's called "I'll find a Way."
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    I'll find a way...

    Don't worry, I'm coming, I'll find a way.

    I'll find a way...

    I won't leave you alone.

    I'll find a way...

    Just wait for me.

    I'll find a way...

    Don't worry...

    I'll find a way.

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    There is another respose by Tahiri to this if anyone wants to see it... :) .
     
  4. flowerbee

    flowerbee Jedi Knight star 5

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    You might try condensing these into a single viggie. As is, it's rather confusing. :p
     
  5. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    I waited, And I'm still waiting...

    Tahiri's response to 'I'll find a way.'
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    I waited...

    Every day, I waited.

    I waited...

    Right where you told me to.

    I waited...

    But you never came.

    I waited...

    Until I couldn't wait anymore.

    I waited...

    Until it paid off.

    I waited...

    Until you found a way and came back to me.

    And now I'm still waiting...

    You won't let me in the 'fresher.

    --------------------------------------------

    Was anyone expecting that? No.... :D .
     
  6. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Yes Master... *makes it sound as if she's a slave.* :D
    J/K.
     
  7. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    A little late but just a reminder... It's ONLY Anakin and Tahiri going back and forth with little poems. :D
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    Almost...

    Anakin's reponse to I'm waiting.

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    Almost...

    I almost died on Myrkr.

    Almost...

    But our Love pulled me through.

    Almost...

    You almost gave up hope that I'd ever return like I said I would.

    Almost...

    I'm almost done...

    Almost...

    Can't you wait 5 more minutes?

    "NO!!!"

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    Hehe... thought i'd out a little comic relief in there. :D How'd you like?
     
  8. ZebulaNebula

    ZebulaNebula Jedi Master star 5

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    Feb 10, 2005
    Comic relief is right. What a pun, intended or no. Nice.
     
  9. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks! I'm looking for my master have you seen her? :D
     
  10. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    This is not a poem part of my series of vigs. It's just a vig... that will most likely have a sequel. :D
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    Anakin finished up his turn in the 'fresher with a twist of a knob. "Your turn!" He called out a little too loudly since Tahiri was waiting right outside.

    "Ani! My ears!" His new wife shrieked.

    He laughed. "Sorry, Princess."

    "Your such a Dummy." She muttered as she stumbled into the 'fresher holding her ears in protection.

    "I'll see you in bed. I have a long night ahead of me so I'll probably stumble into the room right when you are about to fall asleep." Even though he couldn't see her he swore she smirked. The force helped him make that conclusion.

    "As long as you don't purposely wake me up I'm fine."
    She finished up exactly 5 minutes and 2.03 seconds sooner than he did. He MUST have been taunting her. No man takes about 10 minutes just to rinse off.

    They kissed each other good-bye and stalked off to their assignments in a good natured way.


    Luke was emerging from a room somewhere on the temple campus. Anakin walked over to him.

    "Well?"

    "She went through delivery fine, the baby is healthy, but she is complaining about how tired she feels." Luke replied joyfully.

    "That's Tahiri, always full of energy, isn't really accustomed to not being full of it." Anakin was stating the obvious...again.
    Thought Tahiri. Wait...Pregnant? This isn't real, it's a vision!

    Tahiri awoke from her vision with a start.

    Whoa...that's the first time I've ever realized it was a vision even before I wake up... learn something everyday.

    Tahiri recalled the vision again.

    Pregnant?

    She and Anakin had agreed to no babies until after all the fighting was over. They had sworn to each other. Anakin had come so close to dying on Myrkr, that they didn't want anyone else being killed or kidnapped, especially if that person would be their own child.

    What changed our minds?
     
  11. DathomiranAuthor

    DathomiranAuthor Jedi Knight star 3

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    Cute collection so far. :D

    edit: Tahiri not being full of energy...hard to imagine, isn't it? Lol. I like.
     
  12. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    LOL. Thanks! I really appriciate you responding. Yeah Tahiri never lacks energy. :D Courtney
     
  13. Draconarius

    Draconarius Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Very cute. Looking forward to more.
     
  14. Jem907

    Jem907 Jedi Youngling

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    I love the A/T interaction... would love to see more. So far its really great!
     
  15. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    *bows to audience* Thanks You, Thank you... let's see what else I have here... *searches brainwaves for ideas...* hmmm..... Ooh! Got it. :D
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    Tahiri in response to her vision


    What Happened?

    What happened to change our minds?


    What Happened?

    Why did we break our oath?


    What Happened?

    Were we afraid of the future?


    What Happened?

    Will life ever be the same?

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    This is basically Tahiri's whirl of thought after she 'wakes' up from her vision. She doesn't know if she should tell Anakin about it or not. Sorry if it's confuzzling! I just thought it needed to be said. :) Courtney_Solo
     
  16. Dev_Binks

    Dev_Binks Jedi Knight star 6

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    This actually makes since. And is very interesting. I can't wait for the next part.
     
  17. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Dev_Binks

    Thanks!

    This actually makes since. And is very interesting

    Yeah, I was hoping it would make sense to someone besides me. ;)

    Jem907

    I love the A/T interaction

    Thank you once again! :) I try to get more interaction, the comedy is another story... ;)

    Draconarius

    Very cute. Looking forward to more

    There is more...^^^ Right there! I need more time to meditate on the next few...stuff. :D

     
  18. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Anakin's thoughts as Beginning another Mission

    Goodbye...

    I may never see you again.


    Goodbye...

    We may never have a complete life.


    Goodbye...

    I will miss you.


    Goodbye...

    I will count the seconds until my return.


    Goodbye...

    We may never have children...but please know you have made me the happiest man in the galaxy.


    Goodbye...

    How come I sense another lifeform standing with you on the docking bay?


    Goodbye Anakin. Tahiri thought at him.


    Please come back.

     
  19. ZebulaNebula

    ZebulaNebula Jedi Master star 5

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    Nice. I'm lovin' this.
     
  20. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanx! I like ur icon Zeb. I'm a HUGE LOTR freak. You should see my walls. They are covered in Legolas Posters! :D
     
  21. ZebulaNebula

    ZebulaNebula Jedi Master star 5

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    Cool, do you also see the same dichotomy in the Solo brothers that is apparent in the sons of Denethor?
     
  22. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Yeah, separation and arguement, they both want to please their father...hmmm....I wonder if Star Wars is stealing from LOTR or vice versa. :D
     
  23. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    He Knows...

    Tahiri's thoughts after bidding Anakin Goodbye
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    He Knows...

    He knows that I'm pregnant.


    He Knows...

    He knows that something happened.


    He Knows...

    He knows, and I have no clue.
     
  24. Courtney_Solo

    Courtney_Solo Jedi Master star 4

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    Whoa! Extremely short. Hmmm....maybe i can lengthen it. From the appearance it looks as if Tahiri is as thoughtless as I am! :D
     
  25. ZebulaNebula

    ZebulaNebula Jedi Master star 5

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    It's good the way it is.
     
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