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Saga A Slight Disruption (Han A/P Luke Leia PT&OT) AU from RotS.*8th/Sep Author Replies and thanks.*

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Aiel, Jan 22, 2007.

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  1. Darth_Drachonus

    Darth_Drachonus Jedi Master star 3

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    I'm thinking I want added to the sequel as well, yeah, I most certainly do
     
  2. MiralukaJedi

    MiralukaJedi Jedi Knight star 4

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    Aiel, Where are you ?
     
  3. Aiel

    Aiel Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Sorry about leaving everyone hanging, I'm almost done! I completely re-wrote the thing again, I've been working on the sequel and switched some things around to fit in better, it should be up tonight for everyone below the equator, everyone above will have it some time in the morning tomorrow. ;)
     
  4. Aiel

    Aiel Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thank-you to everyone for being so patient, I can't believe the amount of interest I've had in this story and I'm very proud to bring you the final chapter and epilogue.:)

    To all my PM listers I hope you enjoyed your surprise and are all geared up for the sequel. [face_dancing]

    Here we go, thank-you one and all for tuning in and thinking that I should continue. [:D]




    [b]Chapter Nineteen: Hope anew.[/b]

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    [b]T[/b]hey were standing in the markets of Rwookrrorro looking through a small storefront filled with tiny mechanical items that Luke was studying with a careful eye, he knew Han had told him to buy absolutely anything he wanted but was still hesitant. What if they needed the money?

    Lando was leaning against the small store-hut?s doorframe, Obi-Wan stood beside him with Chewbacca, Kenobi?s arms folded as he watched Wookiees and travellers pass by with a watchful eye, Han stood over his brother?s shoulder as Luke hesitantly pointed to an item.

    ?Just that one kid?? Han reached over and picked up the T-16 skyhopper model, Luke looked it over and nodded enthusiastically.

    ?Yep, it will go great with my present from Chewie, the YT-1300 model of the [i]Falcon[/i],? he said with a happy smile, ?I don?t want anything else.?

    Han handed his brother the toy and ruffled the short-cut blond hair affectionately, ?all right kid, we should get back to the dinner and party Dewlanna will be whipping up for you at old Itchy?s place,? he turned to the Wookiee female and started haggling on the price as was expected.

    Luke started making swooshing noises as he moved the toy through the air, Obi-Wan smiled as he turned his head to see his Padawan, like his father Luke loved to fly and all mechanical things, it was for once a relief to see his shy apprentice act like any other child.

    Then the impact.

    A hundred cries suddenly flooded the Force and Kenobi gasped, falling on one knee to the wooden walkway floor, clutching his chest as he breathed heavily, Lando was by his side in an instant, a hand on the older man?s shoulder.

    ?Ben are you all right??

    Hearing Calrissian question Obi-Wan, Luke turned his head and bolted towards the doorway, ?Master? Mas?? the boy stopped mid-way through his second shout of concern when the same disturbance in the Force flooded his sensitive connection to it and he began to cry, falling to his knees.

    Han whipped around quickly as he passed the credits to the store-owner, rushing to his foster brother and kneeling beside him, ?Luke? Luke, what?s wrong little bro? C?mon,? he picked up the boy in his arms, carrying him over to where Obi-Wan was getting to his feet.

    ?Ben? What?s going on?? Han demanded.

    Obi-Wan looked up at Solo as Calrissian helped him steady himself, Chewbacca watching the scene with a soft wuff of concern, ?I felt a hundred of our Jedi brethren cry out in terror and they were violently brought down into silence, someone has attacked the Jedi sanctuary.?

    Han?s eyes widened, ?Vader? Vader is here?? He drew in a breath, ?I lead him here, he tracked me,? he swallowed hard, ?Bria, Mara?what have I done??

    Kenobi put his hand on Han?s arm, ?no, I feel something else is afoot, the darkside is difficult to trace but I can still feel Vader is on the move to here, Rwookrrorro, his emotions still betray him.? He sighed and rubbed a sobbing Luke?s back, ?we have to get to the sanctuary to see if there is anyone left alive that will need rescuing, hush my apprentice, control yourself little one.?

    Luke rubbed his eyes hard, ?he killed them all, Han, our father??

    ?Not our father, Luke, the monster who killed him killed our friends,? Solo said with a hushed undertone, ?we have to be brave, remember once I told you sometimes we have to face the bad, we will get through this.?

    Skywalker put his arms around Han?s neck, Lando swallowed hard at the expression on the younger man?s face, ?we?d better get back to Falcon now if the Imperials are coming, we?ll fly low, under the radar,? Calrissian informed them, Chewbacca nodded
     
  5. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I'm glad to see Obi-Wan survived [face_love] [face_love]

    If Vader had to move heaven, earth and the entire universe to get his son back, he would.

    Yes, he most definitely would and he wouldn't care about how much damage and destruction that caused

    :mad: :mad: :mad:

    Great job on t his story. I have enjoyed it from beginning to end and please PM me when the sequel begins.

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
  6. DarthVaderette

    DarthVaderette Jedi Master star 2

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    That was a great ending and please PM updates for the sequel

    Thanks :D
     
  7. TheOnlyJediPrincess

    TheOnlyJediPrincess Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Wow! My heart was up and down and torn apart with that chapter. Over all, what a great, captivating story! I can't wait for the sequel.
     
  8. voxynking

    voxynking Jedi Youngling star 1

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    great job. I definently want to be on the PM list please.
     
  9. MiralukaJedi

    MiralukaJedi Jedi Knight star 4

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    Very nice indeed. Definitely add me to your PM list for your sequel.
     
  10. alderaanprincess

    alderaanprincess Jedi Knight star 1

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    wow great ending! I'm glad to see that almost everyone survived. Poor Han though, losing Bria.:_| Can I be on the sequel's PM list?[face_batting] Oh and thanks for the surprise in the PM.
     
  11. dm1

    dm1 Jedi Master star 4

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    Wow, that's all I can say for now. Please PM me when the sequel comes up.
     
  12. Ocelotl_Nesto

    Ocelotl_Nesto Jedi Master star 4

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    Great ending of this episode. I look forward to seeing how you continue the journey. thanks for the PM
     
  13. dancing_star

    dancing_star Jedi Master star 4

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    Wow! What an awesome, stellar way to end this!!! [face_dancing]=D=@};-=D= [face_love]

    Han pretended not to have noticed the exchange between the two eldest occupants of the hut and instead went back to his thoughtful watching of Luke, it would still be many years before any prophecy about his little brother being a great Jedi Knight would come true. In the meantime there would be a lot of work to make sure he could reach that destiny.

    Luke turned around and smiled at his foster brother, Solo winked back at him and lowered his eyes with a determined smile, just let them try and stop this scruffy, former street kid, former Prince and current pilot-on-the-run from helping this kid.

    [face_love] Awww! I must say, you do a fabulous job writing the brother bond between Luke and Han. Completely adorable!

    [face_thinking] So many parts I could quote! I loved it! And DEFINITELY put me on the pm list for the sequel! [face_batting] I can't wait!!
    Thanks for sharing such a wonderful, beautiful fic with us!! I absolutely loved it!![:D]@};-
    =D= =D= =D= =D=

    EDIT: I forgot to say before that I love the cover art too!! Simply beautiful! :D
     
  14. randomangel22

    randomangel22 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm glad that you updated! [face_peace]

    Vader better be careful because he's not going to get Han and his family back that easily. [face_worried]

    I can't wait to see what happens in the sequel!

    Please keep me on the PM list!
     
  15. Darth_Drachonus

    Darth_Drachonus Jedi Master star 3

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    Bravo. Bravo. and yes, add me to the sequel please!
     
  16. Jedi_Liz

    Jedi_Liz Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    I'm sorry I lost track of this story. I'd like a PM when you start the sequel. And I'll go find what I missed of this story pretty soon.
     
  17. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Wow! I am quite impressed with this awesome finish, Aiel! :D What a ride it's been. Congrats on finish the fic, and I can't wait for the sequel to start. A PM would be received kindly. :D

    =D=
     
  18. The_Slilent_One

    The_Slilent_One Jedi Master star 3

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    Great ending :)

    Please add me to the sequel's pm list :D
     
  19. Tatooine_Ghost

    Tatooine_Ghost Jedi Padawan star 4

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    loved it. please add me to the sequel's pm list.
     
  20. ccp

    ccp Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Excellent ending!
    Can't wait for the next story to start.
     
  21. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    I really enjoyed your story. Please PM me when you do a sequel. Thanks for writing. =D=
     
  22. TizTiz

    TizTiz Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Wonderful conclusion =D=.

    The parts about Han losing Bria and Leia thinking she had been abandoned were so sad :_|.

    But the parts about the bond between Luke and Han were sweet :).

    Please can I be on the PM list for the sequel? :D.
     
  23. CommanderK23

    CommanderK23 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Excellent conclusion!

    I would like to be on the PM list for the next story.
     
  24. timerift22

    timerift22 Jedi Master star 1

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    well somehow i never got on the pm list for this story



    but i would please like to be included in the pm list for the sequel.

    pm list pllllllllllease


    Snow
     
  25. DanaeMariSkywalker

    DanaeMariSkywalker Jedi Youngling star 1

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    This was an awesome ending to an awesome story! =D= I can't wait for the sequel!! And let me guess...the sequel is going to be like the OT, but with some spins on it. Please put me on the PM List of the sequel. :-D Also, who did the pictures in this last chapter? They're really cool especially the one of Han, Chewbacca, Obi-Wan, and Luke.:D
     
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