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Beyond - Legends A story about special ops.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by rogue_wookiee, Apr 28, 2004.

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  1. rogue_wookiee

    rogue_wookiee Jedi Youngling star 6

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    NRSO: 5117 Set just before Before the Storm


    A Wookiee and a Corellian walked into a stormtrooper mess hall. A blue Twi?lek female was on the stage singing and dancing. They surveyed their surroundings. The off duty stormtroopers were too busy watching the singer to notice as they pulled out their weapons.

    Outside the mess hall a Shistavanen Wolfman crept toward the rear of the hall. His dark brown coloration made him nearly invisible. He slid around the corner and came up near two troopers guarding the door he needed to get through.
    ?Why did we get guard duty tonight of all nights.? one griped.
    ?Because we got off the last four times.? the other answered.
    ?Oh yeah. We get to watch some Ortolan jizz band who work for food and when they get a hot Twi?lek singer and dancer we get guard duty.?
    ?We?ll get off tomorrow nighhhhh.? the second gasped.
    The first guard cursed as he saw the Shistavanen drop his friend to the ground. He grabbed for his comlink to late as the Wolfman moved and slit his throat.

    A Klatooinian stood back stage waiting. The back door to the mess hall opened and the Shistavanen slid inside. ?Ready Ren??
    ?As Always Hak. Lets blow this installation and get home before the zoomball tournament starts.?

    The Twi?lek saw the Wookiee and man walk boldly in the mess hall. OK boys lets get this show on the road she thought as she dove for cover.

    The Wookiee watched as his friend dove for cover. He turned to his Corellian companion and nodded. ?{Now Garris.}? Garris hit a remote and pulled out a second blaster.

    A Sullustan sat on a ridge scanning the Imperial Remnant installation with his sniper rifle. ?[They?re late again]? he chittered to himself in his native language as he glanced at his chronometer. ?[Would it kill them to destroy one installation on time?]? BOOM! The mess hall exploded it?s middle. ?[Finally!]?

    Major Garris Sard watched as the middle half of the mess hall exploded. He turned his head as shrapnel flew by.

    I'll have more in a few days let me know if you liked it or not. I just started so the story will probably be edited and changed quite a bit yet.
     
  2. Lady_WinterCelchu

    Lady_WinterCelchu Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Interseting start. Carry on please.
     
  3. rogue_wookiee

    rogue_wookiee Jedi Youngling star 6

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    It is still a working progress and I just wrote this. I'll probably edit it and change some things.

    Major Garris Sard watched as the middle half of the mess hall exploded. He turned his head as shrapnel flew by. Here we go again he thought to himself as drew his custom made blaster.

    Hak and Ren moved over to the Remnant hanger using the cover of darkness. Ren covered Hak as the Shistavanen silently dispatched the guards covering the hanger entrance. Slipping into the hanger they saw their target. A prototype bomber for a bio-weapon being made by the Imperial Remnant. BOOM! The guards sitting near the bomber jumped up and started running toward the exit. Ren shot a grenade at their feet. BOOM! The guards went flying and Ren went in to plant explosives on the bomber.

    Colonel Chanblanec moved across to the right side of the half destroyed mess hall as Garris moved to the left. Stormtroopers came stumbling out of the wreckage as guards came running to help their fellows. A stormtrooper saw the massive black and silver Wookiee and started screaming to his friends. Chen silenced him with a bowcaster quarrel but the other troopers pulled their blasters and commenced firing.

    Lieutenant Jalus Niun sat on the ridge. Smiling to himself as he picked off guards running toward the smoking mess hall.

    Garris dove behind an upturned table as troopers noticed him. He pulled a thermal detonator from his belt and tossed it toward the troopers. He jumped out from behind the cover firing his twin pistols with devastating accuracy hitting the off duty troopers who only seconds before were drooling over Alana?s dance moves. Where is she? He thought to himself as he looked across at the entertainment platform. There she is. He saw her kicking a trooper in the head who was shooting at Chen. There he goes again. Chen had dropped his bowcaster in favor of his twin ryyk blades. The giant Wookiee was a blur as he chopped off heads and limbs. Garris?s blasters clicked as he drained their power packs. He ducked behind a table and pulled out two fresh pistols. Just another day at work.

    Lieutenant Renelada planted some timed charges on the ugly bomber and ran out of the hanger. He and Hak walked across to the barracks and planted some more timed charges at the base. Then walked over to the mess hall to see if the other three needed any help. He doubted it. After a year of destroying Remnant bases you become very efficient at killing. He thought to himself.

    Same as before I'm still working on it. Hope you like it. Also some stuff was supposed to be in italics and tabs but it didn't work on the board.
     
  4. Mistress_Renata

    Mistress_Renata Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Can't answer for the tabs, but for how to do italics & etc., look in the bar above and click on "Markup codes"
     
  5. rogue_wookiee

    rogue_wookiee Jedi Youngling star 6

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    Thanks. but what did you think of the concept?
     
  6. rogue_wookiee

    rogue_wookiee Jedi Youngling star 6

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    Colonel Chenblanec slashed at a trooper trying to shoot. Memories of his life before the Empire took his family flooded into his brain as he cut down stormtroopers without mercy. Memories of seeing the Empire kill his wife and young daughter during a slave raid. He kicked down a stormtrooper running toward the exit and beheaded him. Memories of his enslavement at the hands of the Imperials. He looked around his rage leaving him as he saw there were no more stormtroopers left alive to fight.

    Captain Alana Secura looked across the wrecked mess hall at a blood soaked Wookiee and a filthy Corellian pilot. Chen was wiping his blades clean of blood on a dead stormtrooper?s shirt. Garris was reloading his personally custom made blasters. ?You were late again? she scolded as she walked up to Garris ?I was running out of new songs and dance moves to keep your friends drooling.?
    ?You? Never.? Garris smoothly replied. ?So. Do you have any plans when we get back to Coruscant??
    ?Not with you.?
    ?Ouch. You?re getting cold.?
    ?You get sick of getting hit on after the what ... thirtieth time, Garr.?
    ?{Thirty third}? Garris and Alana turned and looked at the Wookiee.
    ?{Hak, Ren and Jalus have a little wager going. How many times he asks you out before you give in or he gives up.}?
    ?You?re kidding.? Alana had a shocked look on her face. Chen just grinned and went to find Ren and Hak.
    ?So??
    ?No.?
    ?Just one drink.?
    ?When was the last time you went out on a date had just one drink and no sex.?
    ?Ummm... Imperial flight academy.?
    ?And when was the last time you actually called a girl back.?
    ?That would be in flight academy also.?
    ?Tell you what Garr. You call every girl you didn?t call back after sex and apologize and then I?ll say yes.?
    ?Have two hundred awkward conversations for one date. I?ll think about it.?
    ?You do that.? Alana walked off as Garris stood there.
     
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