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Before - Legends A Story that needs a name. a story about Sifo-Dyas and Dooku

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Jayson_Son, Aug 17, 2005.

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  1. Jayson_Son

    Jayson_Son Jedi Youngling

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    May 3, 2005
    Title: N/A
    Author: Jayson_Son
    Summary: The story of the death of Sifo-Dyas, and how dooku was seduced to the Dark side
    Notes: I dunno if it works out in the time and everything but i think its a nice story. Feedback would be appreciated.
    Disclaimer: I own nothing

    Hope you enjoy!


    ~During the Start of the Battle of Naboo~

    Two Jedi trained in the temple, Count Dooku and Sifo-Dyas. They were sparing with each other. Lightsabers, the weapon of a Jedi. ?Dooku you?re pretty good.? ?You are too my friend? After a few more swings and clashes, Dooku was defeated. ?One day I will defeat you.? ?We?ll see? and with that Sifo-Dyas walked away.

    Dooku scanned the chamber. Younglings were being taught by Yoda. Dooku watched and remembered his old training.

    ~Flashback~
    ?Use the force, feel the force around you, and defect the bolts, you will.? Said Yoda. He did it perfectly. ?Very good, very good!?
    ~End of Flashback~

    ?Master Dooku? A Young Jedi stood before him. It was Obi-wan Kenobi, the padawan to his old apprentice, Qui-Gon Jinn. ?Master Dooku, the Jedi Council would like a word with you.? He said. ?Alright? he said, and with that Obi-Wan walked away to find his Master, for they were about to leave on a mission to Naboo, Qui-Gon was talking with his old friend Jedi Master Plo Koon.

    Dooku reached the High Council Chambers. ?Dooku? said Master Windu. ?Yes Master? ?Dooku we need you and Sifo-Dyas to investigate a possible threat to the republic.? said Windu. ?It is a space station around the south border of the Rishi Maze, before you go you may want to look it up in the Jedi archives and learn more about this.? ?You don?t believe it?s the Sith do you?? said Dooku. ?Impossible!? said Yaddle ?The Sith could not return with out this body knowing, know on your way Count Dooku? He left to find Sifo-Dyas and to tell him of there new assignment.

    ~ A few days later they were ready to go and left around the time of the death of Qui-Gon Jinn. They spent a lot of time reading in the archives, and were finally ready to go on there journey~

    They were almost there. When fighters from the space station were sent after them. Dooku fought and so did Sifo-Dyas, suddenly Sifo-Dyas was shot down to a blue looking planet. Dooku read the charts from it. ?Kamino? the machine said. ?Kamino a stormy ocean planet. Home to the Kaminoans.? I could have known that said Dooku and tried to avoid being hit and fall to the same fate as his friend. He was surrounded. ?Jedi, stop now or we will destroy your ship. We will escort you to Hayham, the space station. Dooku was lead to the station.

    ?Ah, Count Dooku, how pleasant for you to join us.? Said a dark hooded figure. ?Dooku, I am Darth Sidious, Lord of the Sith. Join me and we shall strike down the Jedi. See to talk about not very serious matters, often rapidly and at length and sometimes in an irritating way these men around you. They killed your friend Sifo-Dyas, kill them in return, tap into your anger.? Dooku winced, his anger was building, and there was sudden hum in the room. An ignited blue lightsaber was attacking the poor pilots. ? That?s right, kill them. Kill them all. They?re too dangerous to be kept alive. Kill them all of them? Soon they were dead. ?good very good? ?The Jedi weak, they work for the Republic. Under that Pompous Valorum, don?t you agree Dooku? Dooku was a political idealist, he strongly believed that the Jedi were weakened by working for the corrupt government of the republic. ?Let us show them who?s right from wrong. Join me and we will destroy the Jedi.? ?I will join with you? said Dooku. ?Good, you are now known as Darth Tyranus, and as a reward let us go find your friend Sifo-Dyas. I was wrong I sense that he is not dead. Yet?

    ~Meanwhile~

    Sifo-Dyas was zooming down towards Kamino. His ship was breaking apart. He saw a landing platform and steered toward it. Boom, he landed and his ship was a wreck. Kaminoans came out and greeted him. They took him in. He told him who they were and then he met Lama Su, Prime Minister of
     
  2. Jedi_Latin_Student

    Jedi_Latin_Student Jedi Master star 1

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    Mar 5, 2005
    Addressing- The Great, All Powerful Supreme Chancelor Jayson Keiy son son SON's story. Nobody but me is going to get the title, BUT anyway... I like the story, it explains quite a bit of what happend (or could have happend, anyway. But nobody has written a book on it. Yet.)
    Anyways, (I use that word a lot) Very nice.

    Latin Geek

    ~JLS~
     
  3. Palpy560

    Palpy560 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Feb 11, 2005
    Good! I like your Dooku Sidious stuff.[face_batting]
    However, I think it would be better if you posted this in the Saga board since it should take place within the 10 year gap of Episodes I and II presumably. I know it's tough to figure out where things should be posted. (I've done it many a time [face_batting] )
    [face_peace]
     
  4. Jayson_Son

    Jayson_Son Jedi Youngling

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    May 3, 2005
    Thanks Palpy560 I think i'll try that. and Jedi_Latin_Student i like your newest story. very good, very good.

    Thanks everybody whos read this. (Palpy560 and Jedi_Latin Student) I'm taking Palpy560'ss advice and moving it to the Saga.
     
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