a summery of my story(tell what you think)

Ok.Here goes:

Characters:
Adi Gallia-a human Jedi
Val-Jo Ranew-a human jedi, friend/love intrest to Adi
Kel-sa Cowor-Friend of adi,human,wife to Wilan,owns a family shop on coruscant,wealthy,kind
Wilan Cowor-husband of Kel-Sa,human,drinks a lot


Adi gets a letter from her long time friend, Kel-Sa Cowor. Kel-Sa's letter tells Adi that she wants to see Adi Gallia. From what Adi knows, Kel-sa lives in Coruscant with her husband.Adi goes to see Kel-Sa.Yoda told her that she must be accompanied by another jedi for saftey.Yoda randomly picks Val-Jo Ranew to go w/ Adi. Val-Jo and Adi had a thing for eac other growing up, but were forced to turn from there feelings by the rules of a jedi.After all these years adi thinks she might be falling for him again.Once again she has to fight with her feelings.Will she give in to them?What could be so important that kel-Sa asks to see Adi?
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Well...Should I make a story out it?I wasent sure if it would make a good story.

 

My best advice to you is to go ahead and write it. A good story isn't based on its summary. People can then judge you from there.

 

Go ahead and post it. It sounds great!

 

Yes please do post your story.

Darth Mu

 

Hmm. Not a bad idea, but I would make sure that the friend half of the plot has something to it. If that part of the story has no teeth, it's just an excuse for a long, maudlin feeling-wallow between Adi and this broken-up-but-never-was boyfriend. I'd also watch this idea that it isn't safe for Adi to travel around Coruscant alone. She's a Jedi master on the Council, and to watch Obi-Wan and Anakin handle themselves in the streets of Coruscant, I'd have a tough time imagining either of them unable to go out alone. Adi must certainly be capable of taking care of herself alone as well.

Not to say that it couldn't be a good story. But these are some pitfalls that occurred to me that you might be up against.

Good luck.