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A Thousand Rainy Days (Ani/Ami AU) Complete! 7/9

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Anakin's Angel, Jul 11, 2000.

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  1. aninonymous

    aninonymous Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I lift you up where you belong... :D
     
  2. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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  3. McCord

    McCord Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Go Ani! Stop her!

    Glad to see you writing this again, AA :)
     
  4. Maul Brady

    Maul Brady Jedi Padawan star 4

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    EVERYBODY CAN CAN CAAAAAAAAAANNNN!!!!!! WOOOOO!!!

    Ohhhh I loooove that song from the M. Rouge Soundtrack!! It makes me step up and dance like a drunken bohemian bufoon!!

    Maaan, I always miss the posts!! Great posts, though!!

    A kiss on the hand may be quite continetal, but Diamonds are a girl's best friend! Oh yeah, they are MY best friends ;)
     
  5. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Let's give her some of the cupcakes that I gave Renton!

    (They are special ones that make them post!)
     
  6. Jedi-Jae

    Jedi-Jae Jedi Master star 4

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    AA, are you lost in AAEFA?
     
  7. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    What is AAEFA? And where is it too?
     
  8. Yorthen

    Yorthen Jedi Youngling star 3

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    AAEF = Anakin and Amidala Erotic Fiction or somethin like that.
    It can be found on groups.yahoo.com
     
  9. ShannonAmidala

    ShannonAmidala Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Commmeee what mayyyyy!! ;)
     
  10. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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  11. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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  12. Maul Brady

    Maul Brady Jedi Padawan star 4

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  13. Yorthen

    Yorthen Jedi Youngling star 3

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  14. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    It's comfier reading fan fiction when in your pajamas- even if it is 7:38pm! Lol!
     
  15. Yorthen

    Yorthen Jedi Youngling star 3

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  16. ThatJediGirl

    ThatJediGirl Jedi Padawan star 4

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    UP- I can't let a good fic die! Not that it is, cuz it hasn't!
     
  17. Yorthen

    Yorthen Jedi Youngling star 3

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  18. Maul Brady

    Maul Brady Jedi Padawan star 4

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  19. Yorthen

    Yorthen Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Give us a post. Please!
     
  20. Anakin's Angel

    Anakin's Angel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Okay, with some bugging from you guys (which I'll need) I am going to finish this story by the 11th! That's when it was started last year (11 July 2000) So, here's the beginning of the end, I suppose ;)

    The **** indicate flashbacks.

    ...

    "Master!" Anakin exclaimed, throwing open the doors. What he found inside would remain with him as long as he lived.

    Lira, pale and shaking, holding her lightsabre against her own heart. "Don't you come near me, Jedi." She spat, distraught.

    That could have been Obi-Wan... "Lira? You don't have to-"

    "I don't have to what?" She walked around the room nervously, lightsabre still in place. "Be pulled in a thousand different directions? Be manipulated, and disfigured? Too late for that, Jedi."

    She sounded so defeated, so scared. So like me.. There was a huge missing factor here, however; He'd had Obi-Wan and Padme to help him through it.

    Lira didn't have anyone.

    //Oh, Force.//

    "Save your pity, Jedi." Lira hissed, snapping him back to reality. The blood red blade of her lightsabre illuminated the room.

    In an instant, Anakin's own sabre flashed to life. He did not want to fight her, not here. Not with Obi-Wan helpless and unconscious beside them. "Put your weapon down, Lira." He whispered, with more than just a subtle push of the Force. "I know what it's like to be controlled by him."

    That gave Lira pause. "Then you know why I have to do this!" She screamed, advancing on Obi-Wan again.

    Anakin tossed her across the room, ready to defend his Master. "Do you honestly think you will be able to kill my Master?" He growled.

    Lira's red blade crackled as it collided with Anakin's. "He's weak, he can't even feel the Force! Some Master!"

    Easily blocking her sloppy strike, Anakin slowly backed her up towards the door. It slid open, revealing the forms of Mace, Yoda, Brynna...and a small band of healers.

    Anakin's breath caught, as the onslaught of memories filled his mind.

    ****
    "Please..no more...I can't take it"

    "You will take it, Jedi. You will."

    "No, I...yes, I will do anything you want"

    "Very well, Skywalker. We will meet again, I'm afraid."

    "That makes two of us"
    ****

    He watched as Brynna walked towards Lira, a hydrospray in her hand. If they were going to attempt sedation, it wouldn't be before he found out where Padmé was.

    Lira backed up, her face revealing a mixture of fear, confusion and torment. Yoda reached out to her with the Force, trying to calm the torrent in her mind. "Help you, we will, young one."

    "No! Nooooonononono! Just stay away from me! My Master...my Master...he..." She looked up, locking eyes with Anakin.

    The images she projected made him shiver. Burning, pain, fear, anger, death. It was hard to believe that Lira was only 13 standard years old, with all that she had been forced to endure these few months.

    He was able to call her sabre to him, placing it deep inside his robe. Without her weapon, the inexperienced Padawan struck out at him with her bare hands.

    Reacting the opposite of what she expected, Anakin pulled her tightly into an embrace. She thrashed around, and only stopped when Anakin placed a hand on her forehead.

    Lira? We will help you, I promise. If I can do it, if I can break free of the darkness, so can you.

    It hurts, Anakin. I'm so tired...

    I know you are, Lira.

    ....you can call the ship back to the Temple. Take the comunit from my robe. She is alive.

    "Thank you, Lira." He said, aloud. Brynna stepped forward then, effectively sedating her.

    The process of healing had begun, it seemed; For Obi-Wan had just awakened.


    ...

    well, that kinda sucked...I'm sorry

    More later...keep bugging me guys! Whatever it takes!

    aa :)

     
  21. Ashamaphone

    Ashamaphone Jedi Padawan star 4

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    That did not suck!!!

    Consider yourself offically bugged!! :D
     
  22. starwarsfan1000

    starwarsfan1000 Jedi Padawan star 4

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  23. Jedi-Jae

    Jedi-Jae Jedi Master star 4

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    Yay! A post! <<passes out>>

    Nothing wrong with that, AA! I just hope Lira's capture doesn't mean this is ending soon....
     
  24. Pushing Up The Daisies

    Pushing Up The Daisies Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Great post, aa!

    bugbugbugbugbugbugbugbug

    You know, I had this feeling that you were aiming to end it on the 11th. I almost posted a message to hint at it...but decided not to pressure you into it. :D I guess it wouldn't have hurt if I had!

    So.

    bugbugbugbugbugbugbugbug
     
  25. padawan lunetta

    padawan lunetta Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Wow, awesome post Angel!!!
     
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