A Visit Gone Wrong (Kenobi Twin fanfic)

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I haven't read this in ages.. more pleaseeeee
I'm dying to find out what happens next

 

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I hope we will be getting more stories. hehe

 

Kadi you need to write more please.

 

'where you are' is done now
so doesn't that mean you should have more time to post? please?
btw, are the stories on fanfiction.net under the same name?

 

Yes. They're under the same names.

 

Chapter 36

Master Ava looked at the fallen Padawans.

Why hadn't they stayed hidden?

The life in Kadi's eyes began to fade away as they drifted shut. First Obi-Wan's, then Kadi's, breathing began to slow.

They were dying.

And it was all their fault.

The red tinge from the flashing lights seemed appropriate.

Red.

The color of death on some worlds.

Appropriate.

Tears came to Ava's eyes.

She was losing another one. First Jeal and now Kadi.

No Master should be forced to lose 2 Padawans.

But it didn't really matter now. No matter how much grief she was feeling, it would be over soon.

She knew they would be killed in a matter of minutes.

All she could do as she waited for the end was to mourn her fallen Padawan and hope to be reunited when she too became one with the Force.

 

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All right.. Now the question is will both Kadi and Obi survive?

Eagerly waiting for the next post!

 

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UP once again.

How come everytime I post everyone seems to disappear? *sigh*

Thanks for replying Fleet Admiral.

 

Kadi I love this you need to post more. I need to know that they are okay. Can't wait for the next part.

 

Yeah!! Kadi please post soon.. I want to know what will happen. What is Kadi-Wan's inner
strength suppose to be?

 

Thanks guys.
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Chapter 37

A slight movement interrupted the Master's thoughts.

It was Kadi!

She watched in amazement and hope as her Padawan's hand slowly moved and grasped her brother's hand.

'Come on Padawan. Open your eyes.' She prompted silently.

But no.

Once again, Kadi was still, her face peaceful in death, like she was sleeping.

If only....

Ava bowed her head in mourning, tears falling freely. All around the room, the Masters did the same in respect for the 2 who had tried so hard to free them.

The collar around her neck began to get warmer. It was almost time.

She looked at her Padawan one last time. Something caught her attention.

The twins were covered in a dim light, like they were glowing.

It had to be her eyes playing tricks on her.

It had to be.

Even as she tried to deny it, the light began to grow brighter.

It seemed to expand, all the while growing brighter by the second.

Then, all of the sudden, the light burst, like it had exploded, filling the whole room.

Another flash filled the room, blinding her. She reflexively lifted her hands to shield her eyes.

Wait a minute.

She opened her eyes slightly as the light faded to where it didn't hut her eyes. Ava looked down at her wrists. The chains were lying on the ground, as was the collar. Looking up, she saw the containment field was gone also.

Catiously, she took a step out of the cell, peering around for a trap. The others did the same.

Nothing.

No attack came.

She looked back at the light.

It was fading away.

Soon the Padawans were visible, but still had a glow surrounding them.

Qui-Gon and Ava rushed over to them, kneeling by them. Ava felt tears stream down her cheeks as she lay a hand on her fallen Padawan.

No heartbeat. She was truly dead.

Her shoulders began to shake as sobs began to rack her body.

For a moment she had hoped....

The other Jedi moved out of the room to give them some privacy. Soon it was only Adi, Mace, and the two mourning Jedi.

"I'm so sorry." Adi said, giving her shoulder a comforting squeeze. "We must go free the others. I promise we'll come back for them once we're finished." Ava nodded and stood up, carressing her Padawan's face one last time. She looked over to see Mace saying basically the same thing to Qui-Gon. Sadly, he also stood up.

Without another word, they began to walk out of the room.

 

Now that was cool!


What was that light? Some kind of force energy burst??
They cannot be dead!!!
Now Kadi... you really got me hook on this story!

 

yay! a post!

 

Just upping this.

 

You cannot leave us hanging there like that!!
Come on, More please!!!

 

My god!!! that was Awesome!!!!!! I was left speechless!!!!! Man!!!! that was.... wow! More soon!!!!

 

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OMG that was soo sad!! You have porr little me weeping all over the keyboard. PLEASE post some more soon. I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!

 

Merry X'mas to all..

Hey Kadi! Do not forget this story.

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I know Kadi and Obi are not dead!They aren't!!
Now please Kadi...Post more soon!I really hate cliffhangers...
Btw,great posts!

 

AWWW Mokee is so cute
I don't know why but I always imangined him blue... lol