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A Visit Gone Wrong (Kenobi Twin fanfic)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by KADI-WAN_KENOBI, Sep 19, 2000.

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  1. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I imagined him blue, too

    up!
     
  2. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sorry it took so long.

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    *****

    *cough*

    Ava stopped for a moment. She could have sworn she heard something.

    *cough*

    There it was again. She turned to look back into the room.

    Nothing.

    "Ava, we must go help." Ava held a finger to her lips, listening.

    A movement caught her eyes. Looking closer, she saw Obi-Wan's hand twitch. Qui-Gon's eyes also saw it.

    They held their breaths.

    Suddenly, Kadi moved, coughing hard.

    Obi-Wan gasped, like he had been holding his breath, and opened his eyes.

    Ava and Qui-Gon race to their sides instantly.

    "Master?" Kadi whispered hoarsely, opening her eyes.

    Tears ran down Ava's face once again.

    Tears of joy.

    "Yes Padawan. It is I." She said.

    "What....happened?" Qui-Gon met her gaze.

    What had happened?

    "I really don't know."

    "I'm....so....tired." Kadi's eyes began to close.

    "Sleep, my Padawan." She said, using the Force to put her into a peaceful sleep.

     
  3. anya Skywalker

    anya Skywalker Jedi Master star 4

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    Yeay,Kadi is allrigth! :)
    Now let's just get out of there,save some people and run away from that plannet! ;)
    It's great to be reading this again!Good post Kadi! :)
     
  4. Uisceban

    Uisceban Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oct 14, 2000
    Wooohoooooo
    Great post.

    I finally remembered why I thougt Mokee was blue. remember the creature in the film Lost in Space? Everytime I thought of Mokee I thought of that.
     
  5. Calayka_Bele

    Calayka_Bele Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Cool. (sorry for the lack of originality, I'm still tired.) :)
     
  6. Buffynick60

    Buffynick60 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Jul 11, 2000
    awwww :) soooo sweet!!! there ok :) But wheres the cute elephant????
     
  7. Jedi_Borme

    Jedi_Borme Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jan 17, 2000
    Kadi you need to write more this story is so good. Please post more!!
     
  8. Fleet Admiral

    Fleet Admiral Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Yes they are ok!

    Now all they need to do is get Mokee and the others and get the hell off this planet!!

    Looking forward for a lot more cool posts!!
    (I am greedy aren't I?)
     
  9. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks guys. I should hopefully have more up later.

    By the way, cool site Borme. :)
     
  10. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sorry if its confusing. I had trouble with this part. Feedback always appreciated. :)

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Chapter 37

    I was standing in the strange, beautiful gardens again.

    "You've done well." I turned to see Master Quegrtan standing there.

    "The strength is within. I think I understand now." I said, smiling at my enlightenment.

    "And what is that strength?"

    "My love and caring for those those to me?" She said hesitantly.

    "Yes." He nodded. "It was so great between you and your brother that in that moment, your love joined as one and overcame the evil around you. In that moment, your connection was pure light and the Force flowed around you like never before."

    "kadi..." I looked around, confused.

    Who said that?

    "Your master is calling. It is time to go." Everything began to fade away.

    "Wait." I called. The garden focused once again.

    "Yes?"

    "Why?"

    "Why did I help you?"

    I nodded.

    "You and your twin are the only hope for the Jedi. A great darkness is descending on the order and will soon overwhelm it."

    "But....why us?"

    "Twins. Identical high counts of midichlorians. A bond stronger than any other. Never before has this happened."

    I frowned. What was he getting at?

    "I don't understand."

    "You both are special. Unique."

    "kadi..."

    "It is time for you to leave." The world began to fade away for the second time.

    This time though, I accepted it, falling into peaceful nothingness.
     
  11. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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    :D

    that made sense, btw

    up!
     
  12. anya Skywalker

    anya Skywalker Jedi Master star 4

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    Yeah,that made sence. :)

    Can i be greedy and ask for more soon,Kadi?I know that you're busy and all,but i would really like to read more...
    Oh well.Keep up the good work! :)
     
  13. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Thanks guys. :)

    UP!

    It might be awhile before the next post. I just can't get it right.
     
  14. jedi_master_gimpy

    jedi_master_gimpy Jedi Master star 4

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    We'll be waiting! :)
     
  15. Buffynick60

    Buffynick60 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    very nicely done!! nice plot development
     
  16. Buffynick60

    Buffynick60 Jedi Youngling star 1

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  17. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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  18. KADI-WAN_KENOBI

    KADI-WAN_KENOBI Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Well, I got it all written out and read it over and it stunk. So, I'm starting over and I just don't know what to do.

    Sorry this is taking so long.

     
  19. Jedi_Borme

    Jedi_Borme Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Please post more soon Kadi. I need to know what is happening. :)
     
  20. Jedi_Borme

    Jedi_Borme Jedi Youngling star 3

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  21. jedi_master_gimpy

    jedi_master_gimpy Jedi Master star 4

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    We'll still be here when you get it done, just hopefully it will be sometime in the near future! :)
     
  22. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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  23. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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  24. Fleet Admiral

    Fleet Admiral Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I do believe it is time for a post!!

    *rise*
     
  25. ForceFire_Jade

    ForceFire_Jade Jedi Youngling star 3

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    ROCKS KADI!! RIGHT HEAPS AND HEAPS !!!
     
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