Beyond - Legends Abiri [PilotFic Challenge #1]

Well, maybe I see Wes different, but don't any of you remember the darker side we saw, during Solo Command? When Wes was running down the hallway shooting anything that moved when they were nearly killed at that lab?

A different writing style than usual.

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When Wes Janson died, nobody really noticed.

I mean, by then, everybody had died, so who really cared?

Princess Leia Organa Solo was assassinated by Peace Brigaders.

It doesn?t matter that he had done a hell of a lot of heroic things during his life.

Appropriately, her husband died soon after, choking to death on his own vomit after a particularly long night of drinks.

?Cause after all, heroes are a dime a dozen nowadays, so if you?re gonna mourn, mourn for someone important.

Corran Horn died at the hands of a Sith cult, a month after he had permanently returned to Corellia. He died on the wastes of Dantooine, fighting Sith.

And really, he hadn?t done all that much. He was a good pilot, sure, and his pranks have been immortalized, but there are lots of good pilots.

Tycho and Winter Celchu faded away into the background, eventually disappearing altogether with the aid of some old Intelligence contacts.

And no, I didn?t know the man personally, but I heard he was a real jerk to his girlfriends.

Shalla Nelprin went home to her father.

Yeah, I know that Donos said he was a good guy, but Donos is mental. He had that breakdown, once?

Myn Donos went back to Corellia and served as a sharpshooter instructor for the Corellian military.

I never figured out why Klivian always hung with him ? they were complete opposites, you know?

Hobbie and the ground had one last fatal meeting.

He didn?t even show up at the Antilles funeral. Who could blame him, though? Everyone who did ?disappeared??

Wedge Antilles was executed for treason, executed by the same government he had midwifed.

Still ? I wonder how he died? He was in the obituaries section of the ?net, but there wasn?t a funeral?

Wes Janson attacked the chem/bio weapon laboratories on Ferunalo, killing a dozen guards and three scientists and successfully incapacitated the head scientist of the Beta Red project, Danni Quee. She left the project shortly thereafter, claiming unbearable stress.

Hey, I heard that Luke Skywalker?s status has changed from MIA to dead?

They say he was laughing when the blast took his head off.

 

Whoa...that just blew my mind.

 

*feels a little sick* Angst is like eating too much candy...it's bad for ya, but it tastes so good!

Awesome story, Elena. I was especially unnerved by--well, a lot of things, actually. Han's decidedly unheroic death. Wedge being executed for treason. Luke MIA or dead. *shivers* And of course, that last line. Stars! Good thing I'm not going to sleep any time soon.

 

WOW, Elena. I definitely remember that scene... It's part of what drives my way of writing Wes.

Wonderful job. As Leia said, quite unnerving... you kind of turn everything topsy-turvy.

Incredible job!!!

 

WOW...nice job...BUT GEEZ...excellent though! Nice work!

 

That was wow. Whoa. Just so well done and I really don't know what to say but whoa. Did everyone die!?!?!

I like that he was laughing. It seems fitting.

 

As I am famous for saying when a story really truly blows my mind....

Holy Crap Elena!!!!!!!!!!

And you out fiended Jes, you killed EVERYBODY!


That was......


Wow.........

Just........


WOW!

Awesome! (and so fitting for your terribly dark writing style... )

Great job!

 

WOW.

THEY ALL DIED!



Han drowned in puke, Wedge got executed (I'm picturing him and a guillotine), Luke is dead.....

And Wes went completely nuts! In a bad way!

My mind is effectively blown.

WOW.

 

Elena: It's... different...

I liked the way that the details and the conversation gradually parted company... I liked the way you killed everyone...

And I liked the way Wes died laughing...

Black, funny, and ambiguous. I'm even more impressed and intimidated than I normally am by your usual style of stuff...

- The Imperial Ewok

 

*de-lurks*

ROTFF-LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


You are somethin' else Elena

*re-lurks*

 

This is really powerful, Elena Very impressive!!

 

...

...yeah, that just about covers it.

That said, I couldn't resist:

'Brutal and well executed, Abiri is a 'fic that takes no prisoners...'

Sorry...

 

.....

o_o

Wow. So fitting.... ;_;

 

Urm, that was... unexpected.

I'll have one of whatever you're having.

 

Commander Conrad:

Whoa...that just blew my mind.

In a good way, I hope.

Leia:

*feels a little sick*

That bad, huh?

Angst is like eating too much candy...it's bad for ya, but it tastes so good!

Oh, well, that's alright...

Awesome story, Elena. I was especially unnerved by--well, a lot of things, actually. Han's decidedly unheroic death. Wedge being executed for treason. Luke MIA or dead. *shivers* And of course, that last line. Stars! Good thing I'm not going to sleep any time soon.

Thanks!

Jesina:

WOW, Elena. I definitely remember that scene... It's part of what drives my way of writing Wes.

Wonderful job. As Leia said, quite unnerving... you kind of turn everything topsy-turvy.

Incredible job!!!

Thanks! And some things look better topsy-turvy...

padawan lunetta:

WOW...nice job...BUT GEEZ...excellent though! Nice work!

Thanks!

Enelya Solo:

That was wow. Whoa. Just so well done and I really don't know what to say but whoa. Did everyone die!?!?!

I like that he was laughing. It seems fitting.

I thought so - and everyone did die. I just didn't mention them...

Rowan:

Uh, thanks?

(and so fitting for your terribly dark writing style... )

Apparently, you haven't read my comedy fic...

Shidakis:

Han drowned in puke

Well, yeah, pretty much - although it sounds better to say that he choked to death on his puke.

Wedge got executed (I'm picturing him and a guillotine)

Nah, more like a firing squad...

And Wes went completely nuts! In a bad way!

No, he was doing his duty as a law-abiding citizen...

Thrawn:

It's... different...

I liked the way that the details and the conversation gradually parted company... I liked the way you killed everyone...

I didn't kill everyone - just anyone who mattered...

And I liked the way Wes died laughing...

Black, funny, and ambiguous. I'm even more impressed and intimidated than I normally am by your usual style of stuff...

Y'know, you're the only one who got the funny bits - but I shouldn't be surprised at that, I guess.

preggers:

Thanks!

SweetPea:

Impressive, huh? *strikes a ridiculous pose*

Blended:

That said, I couldn't resist:

'Brutal and well executed, Abiri is a 'fic that takes no prisoners...'

*groans*

djcati:

Wow. So fitting.... ;_;

*grins*

Arin:

I'll have one of whatever you're having.

*pours him a cup of tea*

Elena

 

Elena: Y'know, you're the only one who got the funny bits - but I shouldn't be surprised at that, I guess.

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- The Imperial Ewok