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"Across The Stars" Episode II/III Poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Dantana Skywalker, Jul 25, 2002.

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  1. Dantana Skywalker

    Dantana Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    This is a poem I wrote while listening to "Across The Stars". Copyright 2002 by me.

    "Across The Stars"

    Across the stars
    Two lovers wait
    For the gift of chance
    And a twist of fate

    Time drags by
    With simple power
    And snatches the blooms
    Of the lovers' bower

    Power corrupts
    With words to sate
    In the search for strength
    One's love turns to hate

    Hope breaths its last
    In a dark tower
    The battle is lost
    In the final hour

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    So? What do you guys think?

    Dantana
     
  2. Dantana Skywalker

    Dantana Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Shamelessly bumping my own poem. :)

    Dana
     
  3. Heather_Skywalker

    Heather_Skywalker Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jul 13, 2002
    I think it's beautiful. Hopefully there are more poems in that brain of yours :D I'd love to read them :)
     
  4. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Hope breaths its last
    In a dark tower
    The battle is lost
    In the final hour


    i love the last stanza! i hop you write more; i've just been bitten by the poetry bug this year and started my own collection :D
     
  5. TheBiggerFish

    TheBiggerFish Jedi Master star 4

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    Mar 26, 2001
    that was simple, yet powerful and eloquent. Well done! I'd happily read more, just so long as they weren't extolling the virtues of the Kyp/Jaina relationship *shudders* :p
     
  6. Master_Jaina1011

    Master_Jaina1011 Jedi Master star 4

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    May 20, 2002
    I loved it . . . really did. its simple yet powerful!
     
  7. Amithyst_Blade

    Amithyst_Blade Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Nov 14, 2001
    awy... that was great :'( keep it up Dana!
     
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