main
side
curve
  1. Welcome to the new boards! Details here!

  2. Hey Fanficers! In fixing the prefixes something happened and now you can't edit titles. Don't panic! We're looking into what happened and trying to fix it.
  3. 2017 Fan Fiction Awards - Nominations

[AFD 2008] Onomatopoeia Workshop - Exercise One: Starting off with a BANG!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction and Writing Resource' started by The_Face, Mar 30, 2008.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. The_Face

    The_Face Ex-Manager star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Registered:
    Feb 22, 2003
    Hello, friend. Welcome to the Onomatopoeia Workshop, hosted by me, The_Face! In this workshop, we will be learning about that wonderful, but tricky, literary device... onomatopoeia.


    First, a definition:

    So, with that, let's start off with Exercise One. First list 5 of your favorite onomatopoeia. Once you've posted your 5 you can interpret what others' could be the sound of. No repeats, please!

    1. BLAM
    2. ZING
    3. WHOOOOOSH
    4. TSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOOPFFPOPBRRRRGHRATTATTATTATTATTAT
    5. snap-hiss
     
  2. Jedi Trace

    Jedi Trace SouthEast RSA star 6 Staff Member Manager

    Registered:
    Dec 15, 1999
    1. SHOOP
    2. twang
    3. ACK
    4. Mmmmmm

    And, my personal favorite:

    5. BOOM!


     
  3. The_Face

    The_Face Ex-Manager star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Registered:
    Feb 22, 2003
    Okay, I am going to say...

    1. The sound of a doo-wop band's backup singer
    2. The sound of a bow string being flicked
    3. The sound of the comic strip "Cathy" being awful
    4. The sound of eating a delicious pancake =P~
    5. The sound of a 'SPLOSION!! [face_love]
     
  4. dianethx

    dianethx Jedi Master star 6

    Registered:
    Mar 1, 2002
    1. a smashball against the side of a speeder
    2. 3PO's happy place
    3. Anakin falling through the traffic on Coruscant in AOTC
    4. a speeder hitting pavement
    5. the sound of Indy's whip

    Here's mine.

    1. CRASH
    2. POW
    3. Snerk
    4. ohyesohyesohhhhh
    5. vooomvooom
     
  5. HyperionRising

    HyperionRising Jedi Youngling star 2

    Registered:
    Sep 15, 2007
    1. Blorp
    2. heibeibi (all hail Gary Larson!)
    3. umpalumpa
    4. vwoosh
    5. kbibidbibidibang
     
  6. silverfighter

    silverfighter Jedi Knight star 4

    Registered:
    Apr 28, 2007
    1. A fish drowning
    2. Someone at a loss for words
    3. An Oompa Loompa trying to say "Oompa Loompa" with taffy it its mouth
    4. A door opening
    5. A piece of metal falling down a drain

    Here's mine...

    1. Waaaaaaaaaaaaa
    2. KAPOW
    3. wheeewhoooo
    4. ffffffffffftttt
    5. haaaggaahoooggarrrdaaaadeeeeeeeeeee
     
  7. ShrunkenJedi

    ShrunkenJedi Jedi Knight star 5

    Registered:
    Apr 26, 2003
    1. A stomach digesting vanilla pudding
    2. An over-eager foreign suitor trying to flirt in a bar
    3. The sound of chocolate being made!
    4. A quidditch player flying past
    5. A rubber-band slingshot going off

    *

    1. fwoosh
    2. zort
    3. zoink
    4. deeebeedeebe
    5. wawaaa
     
  8. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Jedi Grand Master star 9

    Registered:
    Mar 26, 2001
    1. Splash
    2. Splat
    3. Drip
    4. Screech
    5. Bang
     
  9. JediNemesis

    JediNemesis Jedi Padawan star 4

    Registered:
    Mar 27, 2003
    1. passing deadline
    2. alien flatulence
    3. "Game Over"
    4. fire alarm
    5. younger sibling
     
  10. JadeSolo

    JadeSolo Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Registered:
    Sep 20, 2002

    1. The sound of my GPA hitting the floor.
    2. The sound of a mobster making sure someone's sleepin' with the fishes.
    3. A person with nasal issues.
    4. Edit: Extremely inappropriate for a family-friendly forum.
    5. A motocross bike getting ready to make a jump.



    1. ChhgchhgchhgchhgVROOMBROOMVROOMBOOM
    2. Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
    3. Meh
    4. ififififififififif
    5. BLAMZOID!

     
  11. Jade_Pilot

    Jade_Pilot Jedi Master star 5

    Registered:
    Dec 10, 2005

    1. Sound of my dog trying to get in the room while the door is closed.
    2. Sound of a women's brain on chocolate.
    3. My overall opinion of my Fiction Writing teacher this semester.
    4. Faulty fish tank filter.
    5. Sound of an afternoon thunderstorm here in Florida.

    Here are my five sounds:

    1. waOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOga
    2. Uhuh
    3. Pfffffffffffffffft!
    4. isnotistoo
    5. wingywee
     
  12. The_Face

    The_Face Ex-Manager star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Registered:
    Feb 22, 2003

    1. The sound of a man's eyes bulging
    2. The sound of ignorance
    3. The sound of a basketball dying
    4. The sound of a session of Congress
    5. The sound of ultimate despair
     
  13. 1Yodimus_Prime

    1Yodimus_Prime Jedi Master star 4

    Registered:
    Mar 13, 2004



    1. blue raspberry
    2. wild watermelon
    3. orange crush
    4. rockin' cherry
    5. the bodacious mystery flavor!
    6. ...what was the question again?
     
  14. The_Face

    The_Face Ex-Manager star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Registered:
    Feb 22, 2003
    Don't worry, Yodimus, this is a workshop so we're here to help you out. :)

    Okay, so don't take this wrong, but the first mistake I notice with your list is that you posted 6 items instead of 5. This is an easy fix! All you have to do is delete one of them, or maybe change them to letters so nobody will bother to check how many there are. Soon you'll be hearing the sweet sound of onomatopoeia success!*



    *"brrrrlllghhptoo"
     
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.