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Edmonton After watching AOTC again yesterday, I was inspired to write a quick short story...

Discussion in 'Canada Discussion Boards' started by Indigo_Jade, Jun 9, 2002.

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  1. Indigo_Jade

    Indigo_Jade Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    You can check it out at this link:

    Sands of the Past

    I hope you like it, and let me know what you think!!!

    May the Force be with you all,

    Indy
     
  2. fingthething

    fingthething Jedi Master star 4

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    Wow, thats deep. Anakin gives Owen one dirty look and you made all that. Its a very good story, i enjoyed it. And the last part of that is interesting, nice twist. Although i don't know if your story is going to hold up after Ep.3, its still great now.

    Keep it up
     
  3. Indigo_Jade

    Indigo_Jade Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Thanks!!!

    As the story took shape, a few things that I could "kinda" count on came to mind...

    - there won't be much happening at the Lars homestead in EP III, as GL has already filmed the scenes for it when he was there for EP II... I would assume that it will be Obi-Wan dropping Luke off or something quick...

    - I remember reading years ago that in their final battle, Obi-Wan dumped Anakin in a molten pit... it was an interview with GL years ago... who knows if he will still use that or not :)

    And I am very glad you enjoyed it... :D

    May the Force be with you all,

    Indy
     
  4. Indigo_Jade

    Indigo_Jade Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Come on folks, let me know what you thought of it!!!

    This is one of the only pieces of writing that I have let other people read (other than family) so I want some input!!! :)

    Good/Bad/Ugly/Whatever!!!

    May the Force be with you all,

    Indy
     
  5. major_jedi_failure

    major_jedi_failure Jedi Youngling star 1

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    it's excellent.

    very creative, and definitely not boring like that barbara hambly crap...
     
  6. General_Tekno

    General_Tekno Jedi Youngling star 1

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    It's pretty good literature. I like the story, and how you build on Episode 2 elements.
     
  7. Indigo_Jade

    Indigo_Jade Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Thanks guys...

    And thank the Maker I'm not as boring as Barbara Hambly... although she has gotten paid for her work... :D

    Guess I gotta keep plugging away...

    Indy
     
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