Oh, I really enjoyed the latest chapter! Mara and Jaina have such a nice relationship. It's so depressing that none of the books ever explored it further. But that's why we have fanfic, right? Your dialogue flowed really well and I like your characterizations of both Mara and Jaina. Jaina seems like a normal 15-year-old and Mara seems exactly as she would be after being married for awhile but still with her same old spunk. "You've never heard of Han Solo?" "Should I have?" "He's the pilot that made the Kessel run in less than twelve parsecs!"