Saga All in a Day's Work (ARC, Omega/Delta) - Update 12/29 Chapter 67

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  1. Revian Jedi Knight

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    *Insert sounds of random explosions*

    ...Because Bumps are so overrated these days.

    Still working hard, vode?

    Revvy :D
  2. CLONE4EVA Jedi Knight

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    *rolls in dramatically while firing imaginary clone carbine at imaginary droids in short bursts* take that! and that!
  3. Antilles2001 Jedi Master

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    Why, of course we're working. [face_whistling]
  4. CLONE4EVA Jedi Knight

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    work fast*whelp!* that was my small yet existent sanity telling me to **** and be grateful....
  5. CLONE4EVA Jedi Knight

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  6. Antilles2001 Jedi Master

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  7. Kudzu Jedi Grand Master

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    Definitely sorry for the stagnation these past couple months, guys. Antilles and I have both been oober-busy.

    We'll get back to this, rest assured. We have been planning some stuff. ;)
  8. Revian Jedi Knight

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    "Planning some stuff" eh? Well, I'm cool with that. ;) And I've heard about the uber-business from Antilles so I totally understand. But good to hear from you nonetheless, Kudzu.

    Revvy :D
  9. Antilles2001 Jedi Master

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    Chapter 68

    A-51's visor cracked as his head was violently smashed into a wall. He reflexively coughed and a few speckles of blood speckled onto the interior of his battered helmet.

    "Who... Who are you?" was all he could manage before his attacker threw him into the murky water of the flooded Minscinius street.

    "One of your authors felt guilty," the other armored warrior said gruffly, grabbing the clone's neck and hauling him up. "So he decided to write an 'up' with more substance."

    With his lungs aching for air, A-51 gagged out, "What the hell is an 'up'?"

    "Nothing."

    The taller man loosened his grip on the helpless ARC trooper and let him splash pathetically onto his rear. A-51 gazed up at his opponent who had effortlessly bested him. "You didn't answer my question," he said with apprehension, despite his loss. "Who are you?"

    "Spartan-117."

    "You're--"

    "Yes. This is my second cameo in the story."

    "...I'm in a story? And why are you appearing again?"

    "The same author who felt guilty is also a shameless Halo fan and knows it annoys his partner."

    "Wait, so the two guys that decide what happens to me are...?"

    "No. Writing partners."

    "Oh, okay."
  10. Revian Jedi Knight

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    LMAO.

    That is all.

    Revvy :D
  11. CLONE4EVA Jedi Knight

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    *is trying to breath but can not because laughing is too violent*
  12. correllian_ale Jedi Master

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    "Wait, so the two guys that decide what happens to me are...?"

    "No. Writing partners."

    "Oh, okay."


    [face_blush] Oops! Call me embarassed, I made the same assumption myself....
  13. CLONE4EVA Jedi Knight

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    I think we all did. you are not alone my friend
  14. Antilles2001 Jedi Master

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  15. Revian Jedi Knight

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    No worries, Antilles. I still believe in you.

    Revvy :D
  16. CLONE4EVA Jedi Knight

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    *sigh*.....*pokes site link* *child voice* story....died
  17. Revian Jedi Knight

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    Nah, story didn't die. It just got delayed for a while.

    You can't keep a good clone down. And our boys are some of the best.

    Revvy :D
  18. Antilles2001 Jedi Master

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    Dead? We ain't dead. But we're not alive either...

    [face_skull]

    But seriously. To the few who still remember this thing exists, we're busy. :p

    Guilt Chapter 2

    Whiteness. Up, down, left, right--nothing but an overwhelmingly blank void. Regardless of this disorienting environment, Niner stayed resolute. A leader must be solid. A leader must be reassuring. And as much as he wanted to curl up into a fetal position and cry, it was unbecoming of a commander.

    "Stand fast, Omega."

    "Where are we, sir?" asked Darman, waving his Deece about. He suddenly fixed his aim on a figure floating towards them. "Oh, you gotta be kidding..."

    It was, again, Spartan-117. Such shameless crossovers were the work of crappy fangirl writers. This was unacceptable.

    "I am the Maste--"

    "Yeah, yeah, we know who you are..." Fi droned.

    The Spartan slowly turned to face the commando to ensure that Fi was staring at his reflection in his gold visor.

    "Don't you ever interrupt me. I'm a canon character, not some Expanded Universe loser like you."

    That stung. The entirety of Omega Squad collectively held back sniffles. Clearing his throat, Niner spoke first. "What are you doing here? Again?"

    "This place is the void in which characters must wait in while the author procrastinates and/or goes about his or her daily life. A sort of Purgatory if you will."

    "Oh... How long do you think we'll be here?"

    At that moment, the skeletal remains of A-51 drifted past them, trailing dust and lovingly ******* up continuity.

    Dramatically, the Chief stared into an imaginary camera. "I need a weapon."

    "You, uh, didn't answer my--"

    FINISH THE FIGHT
    2007
  19. Revian Jedi Knight

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    *Watches as the aforementioned remains of A-51 continue floating on by*

    Oh dear...

    *Breaks down in sobs*

    Revvy :D
  20. CLONE4EVA Jedi Knight

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    *moonwalks accross screen in very cool way*
  21. Antilles2001 Jedi Master

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    Study for SATs or... continue story about white-armored Temuera Morrison's shooting robots. Tough call. [face_laugh]

    But, sorry folks. Kudzu's kinda outta the game 'cause he got himself a new girlfriend.
  22. Antilles2001 Jedi Master

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    Got my scores back, folks. 1620 out of 2400. Not so good. [face_frustrated]

    And not surprisingly, I scored way higher on Critical Reading/Writing than I did for Math. Oy.
  23. Corran_Fett Jedi Master

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    Just FYI, FanFic Awards are in progress, and AIDW's still eligible for nomination, and I just did so. :D

    Let them get the award this time, alright? :D [face_peace]
  24. RC-1337 Jedi Knight

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    hi to all.
    as u can all see im a totl n00b @ this site
    ive been reading this fic up to here for two days straight
    just want to say that it is the most ownage fic i ever read (me being a clones fan and all)
    keep up the gd work
    hope too see another chapter here soon
  25. RC-1337 Jedi Knight

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    hey... get to work already. No wondor you got so poor if you're such a procrastinator!

    (Kidding)

    I might try my hand at writing up some if there isn't a chapter up here soon. An extremely painful option for all
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