Beyond An Early Morning Return L/M one-shot

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  1. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    by Nyota's Heart Characters: L/M Disclaimer: Borrowing for fun.

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    Mara had returned early - very early - from her last run for Karrde. She found Luke sound asleep, his hair tousled, a soft smile tugging at his lips. As she entered their bedroom, a trickle of her Force aura made him stir.

    "Mara?" He murmured, opening one clear blue eye.

    "Go back to sleep." She whispered.

    His eyes snapped open. "Are you joking? And miss one second of your return? When'd you get back?"

    "Barely 15 minutes ago. I wanted it to be a surprise." She perched on the bed beside him.

    He grinned, showing his dimples to perfection. "A wonderful one! I was dreaming about you."

    Mara recalled the smile he'd been wearing before awakening. "You had better be!" She said with a mock scowl.

    He grabbed her, tickled her sides, and kissed her breathless.

    "Luke!" She said, "I haven't even showered yet!"

    "Lover," Luke winked, "Neither have I!"

    "Then I guess you can join me." Mara smirked, pretending to be doing just him a huge favor.

    "If you insist." He hopped out of bed. Luke was definitely a morning person, and there was nothing like a promise of having fun with his lovely Mara in the saniisteam to really get him moving.

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    LOL [face_mischief] @Hazel - [:D] Heard you needed this kinda thing in particular today. Don't we all [face_laugh]
  2. Hazel Force Ghost

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    Nice! Very very nice!! Thanks Ny [:D]
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  3. Demendora Jedi Grand Master

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    What a nice sweet morning! [face_love]
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  4. earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost

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    Lovely viggie to end the day for me
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  5. Jedi_Lover Force Ghost

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    Very nice. I needed some mush.
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  6. Falcon Chosen One

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    what a sweet morning indeed [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]
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  7. JediMaster_Jen Force Ghost

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    How did I miss this? I love Luke and Mara mush. :D What a way to start the morning. :p Well done. =D=
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  8. EmeraldJediFire Jedi Grand Master

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    So awesome..short and sweet. and so playful
  9. squir1y Force Ghost

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    I hope Luke bought her breakfast
  10. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    Thanks all @};- EJF, playful and sweet was just the tone I was striving for. :) Squirrel [face_laugh] hi, and woot! Just exactly the kind of thing he would do :*
  11. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    Sigh, reading this made me realize what I miss dearly since a month´s time, living about 560 kilometers away from my Dutch husband. But it was well written & humorous. Thanks for posting this! :)
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  12. serendipityaey Force Ghost

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    Oh lovely! Perfect descriptions of morning Luke and nothing better than a good wake up ;) Love! [:D]
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  13. DaenaBenjen42 Force Ghost

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    Fun in the shower... [face_love]
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  14. obsessedwithSW Force Ghost

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    Nothin' like a little SW lovin first thing in the morn. Gives you something to think about through your day.:p
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  15. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    Sure 'nuff. [face_mischief] :)
  16. Gemma Jedi Master

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    This just warms my heart. Simple and loving.
  17. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    @Gemma - thanks for the review! @};- (and at "I knew I Loved you.") :) I love! mush, anyway I can get it LOL Mara is the best and only for Luke--and their teasing, loving moments are always fun.
  18. Gemma Jedi Master

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    I couldn't agree more! Ditto!
  19. amidalachick Force Ghost

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    Any time is the right time for mush! [face_love] Lovely little viggie!
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