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Beyond - Legends An Invitation to Stay. L/M, New post: Dec. 16!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by WarmNyota_SweetAyesha, Dec 8, 2012.

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  1. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    May 25, 2005
    She smirked. "You're a big sap." But she knew he meant it, and it amazed her.

    That he is. And I like that Luke always amazes her. [face_love]
     
    ginchy, Dec 16, 2012
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  2. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Aug 21, 2006
    Mara is better than Callista. Mara is a gorgeous Force sensitive
    Love how Luke was watching her
     
    earlybird-obi-wan, Dec 16, 2012
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  3. smash128

    smash128 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Feb 9, 2008
    Bravo, the exchange between Luke and Mara. It speaks the truth about Luke :) I like how you're showing how their relationship is forming and how lasting it will be.
     
    smash128, Dec 20, 2012
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  4. Gemma

    Gemma Jedi Master star 4

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    Dec 25, 2013
    This was yummy --- loved how you worked in the losing of the bathing suit top for Mara. It's always so nice to hear how Luke loves the whole package of Mara also.
     
    Gemma, Aug 21, 2014
    #29
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  5. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Force Ghost star 4

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    Jun 3, 2002
    Beautiful!


    Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk
     
    JediMaster_Jen, Aug 22, 2014
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