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Beyond - Legends An Invitation to Stay. L/M, New post: Dec. 16!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by WarmNyota_SweetAyesha, Dec 8, 2012.

  1. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Master star 4

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    May 25, 2005
    She smirked. "You're a big sap." But she knew he meant it, and it amazed her.

    That he is. And I like that Luke always amazes her. [face_love]
     
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  2. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Aug 21, 2006
    Mara is better than Callista. Mara is a gorgeous Force sensitive
    Love how Luke was watching her
     
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  3. smash128

    smash128 Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Feb 9, 2008
    Bravo, the exchange between Luke and Mara. It speaks the truth about Luke :) I like how you're showing how their relationship is forming and how lasting it will be.
     
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  4. Gemma

    Gemma Jedi Master star 4

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    Dec 25, 2013
    This was yummy --- loved how you worked in the losing of the bathing suit top for Mara. It's always so nice to hear how Luke loves the whole package of Mara also.
     
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  5. JediMaster_Jen

    JediMaster_Jen Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Jun 3, 2002
    Beautiful!


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