Beyond An Invitation to Stay. L/M, New post: Dec. 16!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Nyota's Heart, Dec 8, 2012.

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  1. ginchy Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    May 25, 2005
    star 4
    She smirked. "You're a big sap." But she knew he meant it, and it amazed her.

    That he is. And I like that Luke always amazes her. [face_love]
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  2. earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost

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    Aug 21, 2006
    star 6
    Mara is better than Callista. Mara is a gorgeous Force sensitive
    Love how Luke was watching her
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  3. smash128 Jedi Master

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    Feb 9, 2008
    star 2
    Bravo, the exchange between Luke and Mara. It speaks the truth about Luke :) I like how you're showing how their relationship is forming and how lasting it will be.
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