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Beyond - Legends Anakin and Tahari verses the greatest evil

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Arina_Jaylin, May 26, 2003.

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  1. Arina_Jaylin

    Arina_Jaylin Jedi Youngling star 2

    Apr 17, 2003
    The matter of the story is: Rumors of an evil beast are coming from planets across the rims, Luke sends Anakin and Tahari after it

    The Hunt

    Anakin and Tahari followed the messy trail of fish bones from Naboo to the their current position and they still hadn't tracked down the evily famous nameless beast.

    "I wonder what it could be?"

    Tahari spoke wonderingly.

    "Yeah, it sounds creepy and." A sensor button bleeped and flashed wildly, Anakin flew to it to work his magic.

    "It appears to be a hyperdrive trail from it's ship."

    Anakin paused as he glanced nervously at the readings.

    "It appears that that Hut Slime of a creature has crash landed on Endor."

    "I guess it was so dumb it couldn't land a ship."

    "Tahari this is no time for jokes."

    "Well we might as well land near it and investigate." Tahari was sullen now, Anakin nodded at her idea.

    Ten minutes later Anakin and Tahari had landed the ship on the jungle moon, they both were wearing survival gear and were armed with Trank guns and thermal dentonators.

    As they scanned the forest they ran into an Ewok running at top speeds away from the Ewok village.

    "What's wrong?" Tahari questioned him.

    The Ewok stopped and looked at them nervously. It started to mutter something they didn't understand and continued running at a greater pace.

    "That was weird," muttered Anakin, "maybe he was insane?"

    Then Anakin and Tahari stopped as a few bushes crunched, a figure loomed in the distant bushes as it uttered two words that have been burned in the memories of all who have heard it

    "Mesa Back."

    Arina grins, So what'd you think of that, I know you'll kill me later so do it now. :) comments apreciated
  2. Jaina_Solo_15

    Jaina_Solo_15 Jedi Master star 6

    Dec 5, 2002
    Oh no it's the evil Jar-jar creature. Run, run it's worse than Darth Vader. I kinda feel sorry for poor Anakin and Tahiri though, Lol.
  3. Spike2002

    Spike2002 Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Feb 4, 2002
    I hope "The Hunt" references everyones desire to kill and eat Jar Jar Binks!
  4. JediMasterJaina

    JediMasterJaina Jedi Padawan star 4

    May 19, 2003
    NOOOOOO!!!! ANYTHING BUT JAR-JAR!!!! Oh sweet Force, did it have to be Jar-Jar? Please tell me they're going to kill him.....or at least seriously injure him.....I'll settle for a good maiming..... :D

    ~Jedi Master Jaina
  5. Jedi_jainafel

    Jedi_jainafel Jedi Padawan star 4

    Aug 5, 2002
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!Run for the hills, its the jar-jar binks!!!

    *curls up in small ball*

    And here i was thinking nothing could disturb me anymore....


  6. Agent_Jaid

    Agent_Jaid Jedi Master star 5

    Feb 21, 2003
    You're right!

    I'm going to hate this!!!

    DIE JAR_JAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    *grabs lightsabers and chase's after him, eyes glowing brighter then bluewhite supernova's*
  7. Amidala_Skywalker

    Amidala_Skywalker Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Jul 4, 2001
    Arina_Jaylin, I recommend you put the title of your story -- "The Hunt" -- and the characters it deals with -- Anakin and Tahiri? -- in the subject bar of this thread. To do this, you have to edit your original post. You might pick up a few new readers along the way :).

    EDIT: If you have any problems, you're free to contact me via PM.
  8. Arina_Jaylin

    Arina_Jaylin Jedi Youngling star 2

    Apr 17, 2003
    I was going to change the title, but my computer booted me last night, and now I can't edit it at all. :(
  9. Aunecah_Skywalker

    Aunecah_Skywalker Jedi Knight star 5

    Mar 25, 2002
    Jaylin - You can. :) Just go to your first post and click on the "Edit message" link. There, if you change the "Subject" part of your post, the title of your story will change. :)

  10. Arina_Jaylin

    Arina_Jaylin Jedi Youngling star 2

    Apr 17, 2003

    "Oh no, it's it's." Anakin was interupted by the creature.

    "Mesa Jar Jar Binks, Mesa want to be your friend."

    "No!!!" Tahari screamed.

    "Oh but mesa want to be yousa's friend."
    The pathetic creature ran to give her a hug.

    "Anakin help me!!!" Tahari screamed in panic and an admited fear.

    "Alright that's it no more Mister nice Jedi, die evil Sith Spawn die!!!" Anakin let hatred overtake himself, that evil creature had to be stopped.

    "No, but mesa want's to be yousa's friend!!!!" The evil beast screamed loudly.

    Anakin ran after him lightsaber swinging this didn't look good for Jar Jar not at all.

    "Anakin don't forget the thermal dentonators."

    Well is this the end of Jar Jar, most likely, I hate him anyway and figured that I should be evil and do this. :)
  11. Agent_Jaid

    Agent_Jaid Jedi Master star 5

    Feb 21, 2003
    *falls over laughing*

    *hits head*

    *ADD will never be finished*


    *how sad*


    *laughs and laughs and laughs and lau.....*

  12. Arina_Jaylin

    Arina_Jaylin Jedi Youngling star 2

    Apr 17, 2003
    It was late at night,the vile creature had fled screaming, mesa your friend! As Anakin threw thermal detonators, half of the forest was burning.

    In Anakin a great hatred had sprung, in Tahari a great fear, this guy was evil and must be stopped.

    Tahari walked behind Anakin slowly, trembling, and her eyes were dialated.

    "Anakin, do you think were alowed to kill it?" Tahari questioned nervously.

    "We better or else I'm going rogue!"

    "Anakin, no, please don't." Tahari pleaded, puppy dog eyes and all.

    "I have to, this is the greatest evil this galaxy has ever known, it must be stopped."
    Vengance sprung in his eyes like two hot coals.
    "And it needs to be fried into a thousand Gugan niblets!!" He screamed.

    "But mesa want to be yousa's friend." The creature shrieked pitfully.

    It backed into a corner as Anakin circled it, thermal detonator in hand.

    "No!!! Ani!!!" The creature screamed.

    "How do you know my name vile scum!" Anakin barked.

    "Yousa look like Ani, Ani was mesa's friend."

    "I doubt anything like you would have a friend foul creature." As he spoke Anakin moved forward and ignited his purple lightsaber it moved closer and closer...

    hehehehe, now you'll just have to wait till next week, how many ways can you chop a Gungan (just kidding) I'll try not to make it too gruesome. Comments are loved,

  13. Agent_Jaid

    Agent_Jaid Jedi Master star 5

    Feb 21, 2003

    Just have Ani mind-trick the moron into eating the thermal detonater!!! [face_mischief]

    I'm SERIOUS!!!!!!!!

  14. Arina_Jaylin

    Arina_Jaylin Jedi Youngling star 2

    Apr 17, 2003
    I'll see what I can do.
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