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Beyond - Legends Anakin's Nightmare (Dark Tahiri vignette)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by NYCitygurl, Mar 25, 2005.

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  1. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Title: Anakin's Nightmare
    Author: NYCitygurl
    Timeframe: NJO AU
    Characters: Tahiri, mentions of Jaina and Anakin
    Summary: After Anakin's death, Tahiri turns to the Dark Side.
    Notes: This is an answer to The *NEW* Fan Fiction Challenge Thread


    Anakin's Nightmare

    ~~~~~~

    Anakin told me of his dream, once. The one he had on Yavin IV of me becoming a Yuuzhan Vong Dark Jedi. It scared me a little, but I knew that he would never let that happened to me.

    I was so innocent. So naïve.

    Because Anakin can?t protect me forever. I was young and stupid and in love, and I thought that the two of us would be okay as long as we were together. The thing is, he can?t do much to protect me when he?s dead.

    Because that?s what happened on Myrkr. He died. Jaina went totally ballistic, but I was too much in shock to do anything. If only I had joined her. Together the granddaughter of Darth Vader and I could have ruled the galaxy.

    Oh well. I can do it without her. Or kill them all. Or both.

    It took me a while to realize what I could do. I was too immersed in grief to do anything for a long time, and then my training kicked in. I had never feared the Dark Side, as Anakin had. I hadn?t thought about it much.

    But after he died, I embraced the anger, the pain. That is what Yuuzhan Vong do, is it not? And I am one of them, now. I have been since Yavin IV.

    But soon I will be the only Yuuzhan Vong. I will kill them all, just as they killed Anakin. They were given the first gift, birth, from the gods, though I curse that day. All through their lives, through their meeting with me, they were given pain, the second gift. I did and will give them the third gift: death. I am one of the gods, now. Embrace the pain, scarheads.

    And after that . . . I do not know. All I have is one goal: I will kill them all. What I shall do with the galaxy, I do not know. Perhaps I will rule them all. Perhaps I will die, and be with my Anakin again. Oh, my Anakin . . .

    They told me that he would not want this. They told me that he would want me to move on, not turn to the Dark Side. But he does not know. He is dead. And I will have my revenge.

    I have become Anakin?s nightmare.

    ~~~~~~

     
  2. Lady_Jedi_Carenix

    Lady_Jedi_Carenix Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Dec 6, 2001
    Wow. :eek: That's some pretty powerful stuff. I like it. :D
     
  3. MistiWhitesun

    MistiWhitesun Jedi Master star 3

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    Aug 16, 2004
    [shiver] That's creepy.

    She's so? uncaring about what will happen; what she'll do. She sounds almost like her old self?but she isn't.

    Yikes.

    Keep writing!
     
  4. CarrKicksDoor

    CarrKicksDoor Jedi Master star 3

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    Jan 16, 2005
    Whoa...that was great. Incredibly powerful, and really emotion envoking. Great job!

    ~Carr
     
  5. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrel Wrangler of Fun & Games star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    Very powerful as stated previously and sad as I wonder once she achives her goal of revenge if she'll find anything else to keep her going.

    Very nice challenge entry.
     
  6. Jek_Windu

    Jek_Windu Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jan 26, 2003
    Wow. This is the best Tahiri viggie I've ever read.
     
  7. YodaKenobi

    YodaKenobi Former TFN Books Staff star 6 VIP

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    May 27, 2003
    :eek:

    =D= That was great! Very chilling. I always wanted to see what would really happen if Anakin's vision came to pass. I'm going to add this to the A/T index if that's okay with you :)

    Great job!
     
  8. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Lady_Jedi_Carenix: Thanks!!! :D

    MistiWhitesun: [shiver] That's creepy.

    [face_devil]

    She's so? uncaring about what will happen; what she'll do. She sounds almost like her old self?but she isn't.

    Thanks :) I was aiming for that.

    Keep writing!

    Thanks!!! :D

    Carr: Thanks!!! :D

    Healer Leona: Very powerful as stated previously and sad as I wonder once she achives her goal of revenge if she'll find anything else to keep her going.

    Thanks!!! :D I don't think she would--she would probably die after having revenge to be with Anakin.

    Very nice challenge entry.

    Thanks!!! :D It'a a very fun challenge.

    Jek_Windu: Wow. This is the best Tahiri viggie I've ever read.

    Wow, thanks!!!! :D

    YodaKenobi: That was great!

    Thanks!!! :D

    I'm going to add this to the A/T index if that's okay with you

    Yeah, that's fine :)

    Great job!

    Thanks!!! :D
     
  9. Maggy

    Maggy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    :eek:

    Nat, wow!

    It turns more and more intense with each row, with each paragraph!

    Well done =D=

    ~Mag~
     
  10. RevaDurron

    RevaDurron Jedi Master star 5

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    Jan 27, 2005
    I love this, it's really good. [face_love]

    I don't know, lately I have become interested in Tahiri and I like this alot, a very dark Tahiri, she is a godess now.

    Whoa, this is completely great. :)

    ~Reva
     
  11. Jaina-Solo-1

    Jaina-Solo-1 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jan 21, 2005
    That was simply incredible. :)
    One of my fave viggies. Nice work! =D=
     
  12. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Mag: Thanks!!! :D

    Reva: I love this, it's really good.

    Thanks!!! :D

    I don't know, lately I have become interested in Tahiri and I like this alot, a very dark Tahiri, she is a godess now.

    She's a fun character to write, but I don't like what the NJO did to her :(

    Whoa, this is completely great.

    Thanks!!! :D

    Jaina-Solo-1: That was simply incredible.
    One of my fave viggies. Nice work!


    Thanks!!! :D
     
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