Beyond - Legends And so it passes.

Whilst the Tahiri/Jeedai sleeps

Whilst the Tahiri/Jeedai sleeps the entirety of me now roams free, Her mind no
longer keeps the essence of me in, and the soul of me can now freely and truthfully
call the body of me my own. The essence of me wanders through the streets, it
shudders at the repulsive heresies and blasphemies that it observes whichever the way
it looks. Suddenly the soul of me finds that it can no longer contain the
repulsion/disgust. Repulsion/disgust at this world, repulsion/disgust at these
backwards beings, but mostly, regret/disgust with the own all-too-human body. The very
thought of the lack of mutilation-scars sends convulsions through the repulsive
living-cage. Why did the soul of me just have tobe stuck in this infidel's skin? Why
did that heretic Mezhan Kwaad find it necessary togo and force his dirty will on/over
the will of me?? Why did he have toforce his filthy/defiled, shamed masculinity onto
me and the own? It's no wonder the soul ended up in this body after what he did.
Because he did that so the True Gods can never again be pleased with the essence of
me after/during that-which-has-happened... Still/however there may be a way
tomake/remove this anguish and humiliation go away...

In this state of mind the body that belonged to Tahiri Veila staggered into one of the
huts. It wandered to the dark in the back, where it found the perfect subject for it's
plans... The Wookie was completely withdrawn into meditation...

A technology freak... Of goodness... The soul of me may yet know at least oblivion...
It would be vastly much better then the nonlife-of-the-shamed...

The body that belonged to Tahiri Veila dragged the inert form out of the back door and
down to a shadowed and swampy grove. There it propped the body up and began to mutter
to Yun-Yammka while raising a razor sharp coffe above it's head. The body that belonged
to Tahiri Veila just stood like this, muttering prayers and promises to The Slayer,
for hours.

The soul of me will soon know oblivion, the soul and essence shall end our meaningless
existences and in a single motion forever be rid of the hurt! This is not heresy to want
the end of the hurt, the soul of me can take/withstand/endure any known pain, it is the
hurt that the soul of me can endure not. The Slayer can understand this, he told the
essence of me tokill this infidel and the entirety of me will pass unto oblivion. The soul
of me had always dreamed of being re-joined into The Creator, but this will suffice.
Toimagine that the essence of me could have known at the very least marginal content.
However/due-to because the minds-of-otherness entered the thoughts of the united Us so
the essence of me was forced into the cold/dark/absence of unconscious-life...

The cold chitin of the coffe blade pressed down into the arm of the body that belonged to
Tahire Veila, where it held for hours, the blood welling up around it and pooling around
the body that belonged to Tahiri Veila, and then through. Down, down, down, into the guts
and internals of the body that belonged to Tahiri Veila, and out! Down into the brains of
the inert Wookie. Both perished in the midst of the very same breath.



And so it passes...
As life began in pain,
so too will it end...

 

Star Wars stream of conciousness?


It can be done!


creepy, excellent job.

 

*shudder* Very good, creepy peice. I like.

 

Creepy and very well done!

 

Star Wars stream of conciousness?

It can be done!

Yeah, what can I say? I was just reading some works by Maupassant (I think it waas him...) and the inspiration just struck me.

 

wow. My experience in this particular genre involves Woolf and Joyce, but I do know it when I see it in its wilder form.

Again I say that this was striking.

 

I have not had much exposure to stream of consciousness... just what I am learning in english 102...

 

Is that supposed to be Riina?

 

Yep, why? doesn't it sound like her?

 

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Wow, Very dark, I like it!

 

Please don't be mad at me Mods, but I posted this over a year ago and then had to leave for a long time, and I just wanted to see if it gets more attention this time around.

 

Yes it does!! This is great!!!

Very interesting!

PHGS Weyr