And Then There Was Light (the beginning of the Jedi, updated 12-21-04)

I second the request for Brock-burgers. Hold the onions.

Sorry I forgot to comment the first time I read it, but thank you for the update message.

It's great to see a longer post on this. The emotions of the characters are shown very well. Poor Jeredi, he always seems to be in situations where something horrible happens no matter what he does.

 

Great Posts Jade, Again, masterful work Is this going to be a stand alone story or are you planning sequals? p.s. as always, more more more

 

Yay!!! More replies! All you guys are great!


Grand_Admiral_Grant: Yay! A new reader! I am so glad that you found, and that you were so enthusiastic over it.

Tanith: After review your reply I have come to the conclusion that you are going to like what eventually happens to Brock.

Jauhzmynn: Ah, okay, I see where you're coming from now.

Kahara: Thanx for coming in. Yeah, horrible things do happen, but the story is meant to be angsty and dark. That was what I felt need to happen in a story like this.

StevioM: As far as this story goes, it ain't over till it's over. It'll be the longest story I have ever written so far.

Again, thank you for your wonderful comments everyone!! Love ya!

 

That was magnificent. I'm really inspired to write now, thanks Jade.

 

Up you go, gotta keep this jewel in the spot light.

 

Giving this wonderful story an up.

 

Okay, I suppose now is as good a time as any to tell you guys something. There are no longer going to be any posts to this story, at least not for another year and a half. I have been called to serve a mission, and I leave on Monday to go to the MIssionary Training Center in Provo Utah. As soon as I come home, I'll be sending all of you guys PM's to let you know I'm back, and I'l start re-posting it in the Before the Saga section. That way, we'll all have a refresher before we get going with the new posts. Don't worry, the year and a half will go by faster than we all think. Well, I'll see you then!

 

I just caught up and it is good reading...hehe hurry back

 

Put me on the PM list

 

HEY EVERYONE A NEW READER HERE. This is truly an awesome story, the best iv'e read this year. =D> I was refered to it by a good friend of mine who said it was realy good, and man was she right!!!

I cant believ you arent going to post for a nother year and a half!!!! =D>

*sets up tent and starts a campfire* whos up for a wennie roast?


I'll be waiting so make it quick

Ohh PM me when you get back please


GREAT STORY

 

*sighs*

She's right. It'll go fast.