<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Geneva,Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Queen SabÃ©: CrescentJedi, why don't you post your story at the old place and include the explanation you gave us but also post it somewhere else. That way, more people will get to read you story! Let me assure, however, that the RHS knows how long you've been working on the SabÃ© rewrites and that it was an original idea of yours. [/B] Thank you for your vote of confidence! I did want to avoid any accusations of plaglarism. The worst part of it all was cutting out the Shara character. I had no idea what to do with "Choice" for awhile, since that left a big hole. After I discovered the Dark Woman in Star Wars Tales and researched her, she was the obvious choice as the mysterious Jedi who suggests to SabÃ© that she keep the baby. Now "Choice" has a cliffhanger ending! <G> Go see what you think and let me know!!