~~Assassin~~ (JA, minor Obi-torture)

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  1. TheFallen Jedi Master

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    Yah know, I haven't figured it out yet. But you know what? I'm just going to wait for the next post.
  2. Cow_Girl Chapter Rep Niagara ON, CA

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    A hah!

    Of course! I would have figured this out until this little post, but no I get and it is getting very intresting!

    Keep going!
  3. Sticks-Solo Jedi Knight

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  4. Abbi_Cee Jedi Master

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    Ahhh... I think I am on the right track. ;) Now, if we can only see that name. :)
  5. SiriGallia Jedi Master

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    Aah! My clever readers ;)

    Don't worry TheFallen, I have a hard time with guessing things too ;)

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    The night went without incident, the next morning Qui-Gon hurried to talk to the Jedi Council. Obi-Wan had the vague feeling that his master was hiding something from him, but he got dressed and went along with Qui-Gon. The council saw them immediately after they got there.

    "Assume we do that about Obi-Wan this is?" Yoda asked solemnly.

    "Yes," Qui-Gon said. "Masters, I think it would be wise to put Obi-Wan in a protective hiding place here in the Temple until we defuse the threat."

    "What?!" Obi-Wan couldn't control his shock. "But Master I--"

    "Agree with you on this the council does Qui-Gon." Yoda nodded.

    "This could mean your life Obi-Wan." Mace Windu pointed out. "We don't want to risk you against this." Obi-Wan shook his head.

    "She'll just go after Qui-Gon if I'm not there to kill instead, then she'll come and kill me. So hiding me really won't help. There is no way to convince her not to kill me."

    "No, I do not think so Padawan." Qui-Gon said quietly. "There may be a way."

    "How?" Obi-Wan wanted to know, but Qui-Gon said nothing.

    "Protect you we wish to," Yoda agreed. "Thus hide you for now we will."

    "Where do you suggest?" Qui-Gon asked.

    "For that answer we will need Healer An-Paj's confirmation, An-Paj?" As Mace Windu spoke, Obi-Wan suddenly realized that the healer was standing right behind him.

    "There is a small storage room by the construction site for the new addition to the Healer's wing. If this Assassin tried to get to you, she would arouse whomever is on night shift."

    "But that puts Lina and Leona in danger!" Obi-Wan protested.

    "We have no other options at this time." Plo Koon said softly.

    *** *** ***

    "You have everything Padawan?" Qui-Gon asked. Obi-Wan surveyed the small storage space along with his bed, table, chair and cabinet.

    "I guess."

    Qui-Gon studied the boy. "All right, well, I'm going to go out for a little while before I go to bed. You have your comlink?"

    Obi-Wan held up the small comlink in his hand. "Right here."

    "Good." He moved out of the room. Qui-Gon slid the door closed, he had one hour before she arrived. If she arrived.
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    :D ;) :)
  6. SiriGallia Jedi Master

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    VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
  7. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    Great post! I haven't figured it out yet, either... :(

    Anyway, more soon please! :D
  8. TwilightKat Jedi Knight

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    Merry Christmas!

    :)

    I'm pretty sure I've figured it out too. The bit about being able to convince her clinched it. Great idea; looking forward to more! ;) [a not too subtle hint!]
  9. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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    OK I DON'T KNOW IF IT IS JUST ME OR DO YOU GUYS HATE IT WHEN QUIGON KEEPS THING'S FROM OBIWAN LIKE HE IS NOW?????? OR IS IT JUST ME HEHEHEHEHHEE
  10. SiriGallia Jedi Master

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    Oh I hate it too that's why I do it ;)
  11. Cow_Girl Chapter Rep Niagara ON, CA

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    Horray for posts!

    I hope that Santa was good to everybody!

    Only 364 day until Christmas! ;)
  12. Jenn-Kenobi Jedi Knight

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    frowns

    That didn't say much.

    Hiding Obi will not help, he will just looking for trouble anyway. :D
  13. SiriGallia Jedi Master

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    Well, here you go! The answer to the question:

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    Chapter 9

    Rochal looked at the message posted on Obi-Wan's former window frame. She pulled it down and slid down to her tunnel. She sat on the edge and opened the message.

    Rochal,

    I need to speak with you about Obi-Wan. Please come at midnight to the lightsaber training room. I promise you that I mean you no harm, I simply wish to inquire on your grievances on Obi-Wan.

    --Qui-Gon Jinn


    Rochal stared at the pad, the man had to be joking! Of coarse she wouldn't be so foolish. On the other hand this Jedi apparently knew her name.

    "Who knows what else he knows." She murmured. "Fine, Qui-Gon Jinn." She sneered. "You can talk about the 'grievences' I have against that boy. If it will make you happy." Inside Deca's office, Rochal sheathed a dagger in her boot.

    "Were are you going, Rochal?"

    "I have a job to do." Rochal snapped.

    "I see, so the boy will be dead by tonight." Deca confirmed. "I can't have him around any longer." Rochal nodded, her eyes firm.

    "It will be done." She slipped out of the room.

    *** *** ***

    Qui-Gon paced the training room, he's thoughts were torn. He wasn't sure what he would say to Rochal. If she arrived. He checked the chrono on the wall, it was ten after midnight. Suddenly he sensed a presence behind him. He turned to see a young woman leaning against the entrance to the room.

    "Rochal?" She nodded. Qui-Gon knew she was trying to intimidate him by not speaking, so he didn't speak either. For a full five minutes they just stared at each other.

    "Well," She said finally. "What is it you wanted."

    "I came to speak with you, you are trying to kill a personal friend of mine, and I want to know why." She snorted at his comment.

    "I don't care if he's a friend of yours Jinn, he's my target, my victim, I don't care about who his friends are."

    "Who is your employer?" Qui-Gon asked, knowing perfectly well that she wouldn't tell him, he wasn't disappointed. Rochal pushed away from the wall.

    "The Chancellor." She said, her voice dripping sarcasm.

    "I don't suppose you realize that you are trying to kill an innocent boy. He did nothing wrong, certainly nothing to deserve his murder."

    "I told you already, Jinn, I don't care." Rochal stared at him for a long moment. Qui-Gon looked into her strange eyes.

    The eyes, the slight accent. He was certain of it now.

    "Now, what all do you know about me?"

    "Enough." Qui-Gon said placidly. She nodded.

    "Right, well, as much as I would love to talk to you, I have a mission to complete." Qui-Gon felt desperate, he knew Rochal would hunt Obi-Wan, she would track him down, she would kill him. Suddenly Qui-Gon grabbed the woman's arm.

    "Rochal." She turned and tried to pull her arm away, but Qui-Gon had a firm grip. "That baby brother you lost all those years ago, that was Obi-Wan." Her eyes suddenly went rigged.

    "Impossible!" she snapped. "That's impossible! He was kidnapped! These men came, they took my brother away!"

    "That was the Jedi, they didn't kidnap him, they just took him here! I read it in your disappearance record, your parents tried to find you after you disappeared. You are Rochal Kenobi! You have to believe me!"

    "No!" She jerked her arm away. "I am going to kill Obi-Wan! And if you try to get in my way, you'll get your piece of it, Jedi!" She left the room at a run.
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    Is that what y'all guessed? :) ;)
  14. Jenn-Kenobi Jedi Knight

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    yeah, for a fleeting second I did, but I wasn't so sure, for one Obi-Wan as a youger brouther, named Owen

    So now Rochal can't kill her brother now can she?
  15. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    Oooooooooooo! Wow!!! Now how can she kill her own brother??

    More soon please! :D
  16. Cow_Girl Chapter Rep Niagara ON, CA

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    I kind of guessed that she was Obi's sis, but I kind of kept it to myself ;)

    Great post, that was very intresting Qui-gon better get going before it is to late...
  17. TheFallen Jedi Master

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    Oh, she'll certainly TRY to still kill him. Of course! This is the utter climax of the story!! YEEE!!
  18. Abbi_Cee Jedi Master

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    Yes, that's what I was thinking. Now, is Rochal as hard as she acts or is it just an act? :)
  19. SiriGallia Jedi Master

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    Sounds like you (almost) all had it figured out!!! How am I going to keep secrets from you? ;)

    Well, here's another post!

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    Rochal ran down to the catwalks, she ran into Deca's office and fell into a chair.

    "Is he dead?" Deca asked from across the room.

    "Not yet!" Rochal snapped. "I was doing something else."

    "You listen!" Deca exclaimed. "I need that boy dead! You kill him, you hear me?"

    "Don't tell me what to do!" Rochal retorted. "What did he do Brun?" She asked suddenly.

    "It is of no consequence. I told you that he destroyed my chances of ruling Gala."

    "How?! Why?!" Rochal jumped up. "I want answers!" Deca finally conceded. He knelt next to the chair as she sat back down.

    "He stole my chances by figuring out that another man, Xanatos, was assisting me to make Gala a more profitable place." He patted Rochal on the boot. "That good enough for you?"

    "Yes," She murmured.

    "Now, are you going to kill that boy?"

    "Later," Rochal stood up quickly. "I'm busy now." She stocked out of the room.

    Chapter 10

    Obi-Wan was drifting off to sleep, he felt so tired and lonesome, as much as he felt safe, he still wasn't sure if that assassin, Rochal, Qui-Gon said her name was. Rochal would probably go after Qui-Gon. Suddenly Obi-Wan sensed the danger. He sat up as the door slid open. Suddenly he felt as though he was in a dream, the man in the door way looked farmiliar. Suddenly he matched the face and gasped.

    "Deca Brun?"

    "You remember?" Deca sounded pleased. "We never actually met."

    "What are you doing here?" Obi-Wan asked tensely.

    "My assassin hasn't been doing her job, so I decided to get you myself." Obi-Wan grabbed up his lightsaber. "No, Jedi, you don't want to use that." Suddenly Deca pulled another figure into view.

    "Lina?" Lina bit her lip as Deca pressed a blaster against the girl's head.

    "I'm sorry." Lina murmured.

    "Oh she had no choice in the matter," Deca smiled. "She was in my way, now you will come with me. Obi-Wan stood shakily and handed the man his lightsaber. Deca grabbed him by the shoulder and shoved Lina into the storage room and shut and locked the door. "Come on Kenobi." Deca roughly yanked Obi-Wan around the corner.

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    ...or maybe that'll happen ;)
  20. Jenn-Kenobi Jedi Knight

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    Why I am not surpised?

    I just knew something like that was going to happen.
  21. Jacinta_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Erk.....good post...bad cliffie...
  22. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    Ahhh! I hate cliffies!!!!!!

    More soon please! :D
  23. TheFallen Jedi Master

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  24. Tahiri Jedi Master

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    Ahhhhhhhh nooo update NOW!!! This is a really great story!!!
  25. blueangel Jedi Knight

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    I just found this fic,it´s really good!!!!
    Go on ;)
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