At What Price ( Yet another JA Story)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Eryce, Jan 3, 1999.

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  1. Kaylla Norn Jedi Knight

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    Is the mind seeker a snake creature? Obi should jussst hiss back. Great post. Just a tad to short though. Maybe that means we won't have to wait to long? tongue.gif

    [This message has been edited by Kaylla Norn (edited 05-23-2000).]
  2. Kaylla Norn Jedi Knight

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    Mar 2, 2000
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    "Obi-Wan fought the urge to scream."

    Poor Obi, but he's not the only one fighting the urge to scream. Please tell me we won't have to wait for weeks and weeks and weeks again. Please. Please tell me there wil be a wonderful post tonight, Friday May 26, 2000 Please.

    redface.gif redface.gif

  3. Eryce Jedi Knight

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    Feb 29, 2000
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    Sigh. The last time I posted, 3 people read it.

    But no fear, just for you loyal fans out there(if there actually are any), new post tonight... on all 3 threads...
  4. Obi the Kid Jedi Master

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    I read it !! I read it !!! Just didnt post anything afterwards....more please...
  5. HealerLeona Jedi Master

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    Jan 18, 2000
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    All three threads??? Honest? I'll make a point of checking later.
  6. Eryce Jedi Knight

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    I did say the next part would be longer right? Right. *Cough* Well, it is.. sorta, just that it's broken into smaller parts and errmm... *weak laughter*

    ***
    He was meditating when he heard it, Master!, jolting him out of the tranquil state with his heart pounding. Disorientated, he had to take a moment to center himself before his brain finally processed?

    Padawan!

    The silence that greeted him when he tried to reach Obi-Wan through the bond propelled him to his feet. He started running along the corridors past startled Jedi towards the gardens, a faint taste of something in his mouth. Adrenaline pumped through his veins, forcing his body to move faster. Obi-Wan's all right. He's all right. Qui-Gon chanted like a mantra, willing it to true even as he tried to tame the panic that was flaring out of control. Even as that special part of his soul remind muted.

    As he neared the gardens, he mentally braced himself. Not knowing what he may find made things much worse. His Padawan could be hurt or .. worse. His mind skittered away from the thought. Please let him be all right, Qui-Gon prayed silently to whatever Gods that might have been listening. Something caught his eye and he skidded to a halt abruptly, panting from the exertion. There were no obvious signs of struggle. No blood. No Padawan.

    There was only a rock.

    It was an ordinary looking rock. It was black and shiny. It had deep red streaks running across its smooth surface. It belonged to Obi-Wan.

    Nothing could have prepared him for this. This wild surge of emotion which threatened to paralyze him and steal away every thought. A detached part of himself deduced that only the use of force would have separated the boy with this rock. The other part was consumed with anguish and despair.

    Qui-Gon finally recognized the taste in his mouth that had been plaguing him ever since the desperate cry for help seared into his mind. It was the bitter taste of fear.


    [This message has been edited by Eryce (edited 05-26-2000).]
  7. JediKnight-Obi-Wan Force Ghost

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    Yikes I'm reading, I'm reading!!!
    And they are great post to. Way to short though
  8. Jane Jinn Jedi Grand Master

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    Jan 12, 2000
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    Oh, no, Obi-Wan's lost his rock! How can he survive without it? What will help him resist the Mind Seeker?

    What IS the Mind Seeker anyway? Why does Obi-Wan start screaming at the sight of him? I can't wait to find out!
  9. HealerLeona Jedi Master

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    Jan 18, 2000
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    I'm sure the taste of fear was something Qui-Gon normally was quite use to surpressing. Now he has to find Obi-Wan and save him quickly.
  10. padawan3 Jedi Master

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    You got to hand it to the both of them. Ob-Wan with getting tourtured. Then with Qui-Gon always going through emotional termoil when Obi-Wan does.
    Oh well. We want more story.
  11. Sith_Terminator Jedi Knight

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    May 8, 2000
    MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!

    so say all the masters on the council and me!!!
  12. padawan3 Jedi Master

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    Please post again. Just one more yime.
  13. Jessica Kenobi Jedi Knight

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    Geese! how come every one has to pick on poor Obi-Wan? Wow, this post was great! I still am dying to know about the mind seeker, so post soon!
  14. Kelly Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Mar 23, 2000
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    How did I miss this update!!!! I usually jump when I see a Eryce update, oh well. This continues to be a great story. Very well written, but then again every story by Eryce has been very well written. I hope we get more soon, on all of your threads!!!!!!!!
  15. The Gatherer Jedi Youngling

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    I believe the context of the original argument that the novels continually placed references and flashbacks from the Original Trilogy. I am glad to see this trend changing now, with more flashbacks from the expanded universe, such as the Dark Tide duology has shown, it makes the universe seem more internally consistent!
  16. The Gatherer Jedi Youngling

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    I believe the context of the original argument that the novels continually placed references and flashbacks from the Original Trilogy. I am glad to see this trend changing now, with more flashbacks from the expanded universe, such as the Dark Tide duology has shown, it makes the universe seem more internally consistent!
  17. Stranded in space Jedi Master

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  18. padawan3 Jedi Master

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    With a story this good there should be more updates.
  19. Eryce Jedi Knight

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  20. padawan3 Jedi Master

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    Eryce why don't you up it with more story. Even if it is short. Short post is better then no post.
  21. Eryce Jedi Knight

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    Umm.. this is weird. I have posts from another thread in this one and ... even weirder... this thread suddenly went up to 10 pages???? I can't find my first page.. can anyone help me here?
  22. padawan3 Jedi Master

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    The first page is in the middle of the seventh page. How odd.
  23. Keyla_Kenobi Jedi Knight

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    May 24, 2000
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    One thing to say..... POST pleaseeeeee!!!!
  24. Stranded in space Jedi Master

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    It starts on the 7th page. You mihjy want to start the thread over.
    To The Top!!!!!
  25. Stranded in space Jedi Master

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