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Story [Avatar: The Last Airbender] Elemental (50 Sentence Challenge - February) -- Set IV, 2/27

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  1. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Author: NYCitygurl
    Title: Elemental
    Characters: Everyone!
    Timeframe: All over the place.
    Summary: Sometimes one sentence says it all.
    Notes: Written for the February 50 Sentence Challenge. This story covers all four February sets.


    all of the strange, strange creatures


    01. Journey

    It would take a long time to get to the North Pole, but if Katara could learn from a real waterbending master, it would all be worth it.


    02. Eccentric

    Bumi had always been a little nuts, and Aang was glad to see that after a hundred years, some things hadn?t changed.


    03. Array

    Sokka wasn?t happy about the Fire Nation ships arrayed against them, but they didn?t have a choice?they had to run the blockade and get Aang to the Temple before the Solstice.


    04. Abide

    The medicine woman abided in a solitary place with only her pet for company?which Aang thought was a mistake.


    05. Regenerate

    Aang was his own person, not quite the same as Roku or Kyoshi or any of the others who had come before him?but even though they were all different people, the Avatar spirit was reborn in all of them.


    06. Ramble

    It was a good thing she was around, Katara thought?if not, Sokka would go on and on and get everyone in trouble.


    07. Pseudo

    Zuko claimed that he was the Fire Lord?s heir to prove his power and protect Lee, but he knew the old man was right?he was a traitor and a fake.


    08. Tardy

    Aang was a hundred years late to the war, but he was determined to restore the balance and end the conflict.


    09. Drumbeats

    The festival?s drumbeats were enticing, but Katara tried to urge caution?the Avatar was here is disguise, after all.


    10. Schism

    The world was divided, the Fire Nation against the others?a schism that the Avatar had to end.


    11. Last

    Aang put off learning firebending because it was hard to find a friendly teacher . . . and because he was scared of hurting someone he loved again.


    12. Innumerable

    Iroh and countless Fire Nation soldiers laid siege to Ba Sing Se for 600 days, but it was Azula alone (and Mai and Ty Lee) who finally captured the city.


    13. Temp

    The Northern Water Tribe was a cold place, but Katara and Sokka felt right at home . . . sort of.


    14. Archaic

    Katara hated Pakku for insisting he wouldn?t teach her waterbending because she was a girl.


    15. Save

    Katara was glad she had been interrupted before she could use the spirit oasis water to heal Zuko?s scar?because she used it to save Aang?s life.


    16. Ephemeral

    The girl in white giggled and ducked away, and Aang followed, determined to find out who she was.


    17. Parenthesis

    (Mai would never admit to anyone that she?d had a crush on Zuko since the first day she?d met him . . . but she was going to take advantage of having him now.)


    18. Footnote

    If Azula had her way, Zuko would be little more than a footnote in Fire Nation history, a mention of how NOT to do anything.


    19. Skip

    Aang tried to skip ahead to the actual firebending, but in doing so, hurt his best friend badly?and that was when he learned to take the lessons in proper order.


    20. Sonic

    The air reverberated as the assassin shot off a bolt of blasting energy?from his forehead!


    21. Hopscotch

    Sokka didn?t approve of Aang delaying their mission to play games with Fire Nation students, but Aang knew that what he learned here would be invaluable . . . and what they learned from him could change their lives.


    22. Fob

    Toph fobbed wealthy Fire Nation people . . . until the one last prank turned into something deadly.


    23. Epoch

    The defeat of Fire Lord Ozai and the end of the war ushered in a new era of peace and prosperity for the whole world.


    24. Apparel

    Sokk
     
  2. mrjop2

    mrjop2 Jedi Knight star 4

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    Nicely done!
     
  3. Idrelle_Miocovani

    Idrelle_Miocovani Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    AVATAR!!!! [face_love] [face_love] [face_love]

    You've really captured the fun of the series, and the wonderful balance between the characters. Love it! :D
     
  4. Mira_Jade

    Mira_Jade The (FavoriteTM) Fanfic Mod With the Cape star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    Oh, YES! I am so glad to see you tackling Avatar for this month. :D


    Eccentric: A little nuts is putting it nicely. [face_laugh]

    Regenerate: An awesome look at the whole concept of the Avatar! Very nice. :D

    Ramble: [face_laugh]

    Parenthesis: Nice way of handling the prompt! :D

    Apparel: Of course he did. [face_laugh]

    Companion: Zuko and Iroh is one of the best relationships explored in the series, and I loved the way you handled that here. [face_love]

    Parallel: Very nice! :D

    Twist: I am in love with your Zuko sentences. He had an amazing amount of character growth and exploration in a cartoon that a lot of live action films find wanting, and you capture that perfectly. :D

    Cracks: And her madness at the end was showcased wonderfully here, as well. :(

    Minutes: [face_laugh] Loved the vaguely shipper references. [face_mischief] :p

    Decutient: [face_laugh]!!


    Wonderful sentences! =D=


    ~MJ @};-
     
  5. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    mrjop2: Thanks!!

    Idri: :D Thanks!! Glad you enjoyed :)

    Mira: Thanks!! Well, after the awesome prompts, how could I not? :D I love Zuko [face_love] I think he grows the most throughout the series?plus, he just so dang fun to write :D Thanks!!!


    bend these to the beat of me


    01. Earth

    The earth was a part of her; she could sense it, feel it, move it in ways she couldn?t do with her own life.


    02. Air

    Aang loved nothing more than being up high, flying through the air under his own power or Appa?s; though the Avatar was a master of all four elements, air was his first and would always be first in his heart.


    03. Fire

    Fire burned?but it was also heat, and light, and love, even though it took Zuko three years and physical and emotional pain to learn that.


    04. Water

    Katara had always felt as though water was an intrinsic part of her makeup?and then discovered, one full-mooned night, that it really was?and that it could be controlled.


    05. Energy

    Aang had learned the four elements, but commanding another?s energy was the hardest thing yet.


    06. Awaited

    The Avatar had disappeared a hundred years ago, but Katara couldn?t help hoping that he would choose now to return and save the world.


    07. Bond

    Appa was Aang?s very first real friend, and they had a bond that would keep them going, even through their trials.


    08. Gifted

    Katara had talent, even Pakku could see it?and he knew that he would be a fool to turn her away.


    09. Pursuit

    Zuko would follow the Avatar to the ends of the earth?capturing him was the only way the prince could restore his honor.


    10. Grasp

    Aang knew earth was the opposite of his natural element, but he just couldn?t grasp how to control it?until Sokka needed him, and he had no choice.


    11. Raze

    Iroh razed the outer wall of Ba Sing Se?and then, years later, finally took the city?back from the Fire Nation.


    12. Flood

    The wave stood high above the walls of the Northern Water Tribe, then crashed down upon the Fire Nation Fleet, leaving few to tell the tale.


    13. Armada

    Zhang thought that the largest armada in the world would do the trick?and he didn?t live long enough to realize quite how wrong he was.


    14. Avarice

    Sozin?s desire for power plunged the world into a devastating war that would last a hundred years and end with his name as a curse upon his own peoples? lips.


    15. Outcry

    After Azula took Ba Sing Se, there was no public protest, no outcry of dismay?Long Feng and his ilk controlled the emotions of the city far too well.


    16. Lighten

    The comet?named after Sozin, who had once used it to wipe out a nation?light the sky, and firebenders around the world felt its terrible and awesome power.


    17. Conflict

    Aang wasn?t sure what to do: follow the advice of his past lives, or remain true to his own conscious.


    18. Ameliorate

    Zuko knew it would take years to undo the damage his ancestors had caused, but he was determined to make the world a better place.


    19. Scars

    Half his face bore evidence of his father?s cruelty, but no one else could see the scars Ozai had left on Zuko?s soul.


    20. Tea

    There was nothing Iroh liked more than a nice cup of jasmine tea?except maybe a good game of pai sho.


    21. Avail

    Iroh would not fight his brother for his own sake, but would stand up to him to protect Zuko?to no avail.


    22. Bend

    As the Avatars before and the Avatars to come, Aang could bend earth, fire, water, and air?but unlike the other incarnations of himself, he could also bend one thing more: energy.


    23. War-torn

    The Earth Kingdom, more than anywhere else (except the Air Temples, perhaps, who lost everything in one well-timed attack) suffered the most, and as Zuko traveled alone through the war-torn country, he began to regret the damage his people had inflicted.
     
  6. Mira_Jade

    Mira_Jade The (FavoriteTM) Fanfic Mod With the Cape star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    These are so lovely! I have a serious need to go rewatch a certain series now. [face_love]


    Fire: Yes! THIS! This little inner battle was a core of Zuko's struggles, I think - and even with Aang's fear of harming others with fire. [face_love] All of your sentences pairing up element to bender were splendid. :)

    Raze: I love'd the contrast of the change in Iroh here. [face_love] Another dear character. :)

    Armada: I seriously fought the urge to stick my tongue out at the end of that one. Ha! :p

    Scars: This one made a queasy feeling deep inside of me. No child should have to go through that - Ozai's character truly was demonic, and you captured that in so few words here. :(

    Tea: Iroh is awesome. [face_love]

    Tutor: [face_laugh] You captured the light and beautiful group interaction here, alongside the more heavier sentences that were here. :D

    Battle_line: Oh . . . Ow, ow, ow . . . :( :_|

    Favor: So much complicated royal play touched upon, in just a few words. :oops:

    Moon: [face_love]

    Familial: Wonderful job capturing their relationship! :)

    Unity: And a perfect wrap. =D=


    ~MJ @};-
     
  7. redder

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  8. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Mira: Thanks!! I love Zuko (and I love how easy it is to give him some drama :p ). Poor kid has been through a lot :( Zhang . . . is just an idiot :p And I agree, Iroh is awesome :D Glad you enjoyed!!

    redder: Thanks!



    be mine, my funny Valentine


    01. Miracle

    The water from the spirit oasis had saved Aang?and Katara didn?t care that he had blocked his chakra; she was happy to have her friend back.


    02. Dearly

    Ursa knew she shouldn?t have favorites, but Azula was distant, and Zuko was so carefree and loving; she couldn?t help thinking of him as her dear little one.


    03. Push

    Push and pull, in and out?waterbending followed the tides.


    04. Between

    Mai never thought she would have to choose between Zuko and Azula; Azula knew, but she had never thought that Mai would betray her.


    05. Knowing

    The monks knew much and saw much, but they didn?t predict the devastation Sozin would bring to their kind.


    06. Coax

    Iroh had to coax Zuko little by little to open up and become the man he was meant to be.


    07. Unlikely

    The Avatar and the Fire Lord?an unlikely combination, yet best friends.


    08. Flatter

    It was Sokka?s way to flatter and woo, but Suki loved him best when he put aside his shell and was just himself.


    09. Court

    Sokka knew he wasn?t good enough to court a princess, but he couldn?t help falling for Yue?and he thought that maybe, just maybe, she wanted him, too.


    10. Worthy

    Zhang didn?t think Zuko was a worthy opponent?but he had to learn, over and over again, that the prince was more than he appeared.


    11. Hesitant

    Toph wasn?t sure she wanted to spend the day getting mud and makeup splashed on her at will, but after some gentle coaxing from Katara, she agreed to visit the spa.


    12. Yield

    Ozai?defeated, powerless, a mere shell of his former self?had no choice but to yield to the Avatar, even though it cost him everything he had left.


    13. Remember

    Kya had been killed when Katara was a little girl, but she never forgot her mother, especially when she became one herself.


    14. Familiarity

    It seemed that they spent half their time being chased across the world by Zuko?but when it was Azula chasing them instead, the gang longed for the familiar sight of the prince?s warship.


    15. Opposites

    She was water and he was fire, but they both raged?opposites, and yet more similar than either would admit.


    16. Tokens

    Kya?s necklace?which, Katara learned later, had been Gran-Gran?s?and the one Aang made kept Katara company when she felt afraid.


    17. Evoke

    Seeing Zuko?s flames evoked the memory of hurting Katara, and Aang was afraid to try.


    18. Ananke

    Zuko told his father that it was the Avatar?s destiny to take the Fire Lord down, but deep inside, he wondered if he said that only because he was afraid to face his father himself?afraid of what Ozai would do . . . or afraid of what he would.


    19. Temptation

    Sokka knew he shouldn?t drink the cactus juice, but he was so thirsty . . .


    20. Realization

    Aang saw the birth of Hope, and he knew that he had to give that to the world.


    21. Letters

    The letter from their father was tempting, but Katara and Sokka knew their duty was to see Aang to the North Pole.


    22. Accept

    Ozai couldn?t accept Zuko for who he was?but Iroh did, and Zuko loved him like a father.


    23. Fervid

    The gang search for Aang, looking everywhere they could, desperate to find him before the comet came.


    24. Awake

    Aang couldn?t sleep?the invasion was only a couple days away!


    25. Shine

    Azula was her father?s favorite, shining brightly in his eyes like the sun.


    26. Blush

    When the Ember Island Players re-enacted Katara and Zuko?s encounter beneath Ba Sing Se (how did they KNOW about that?), the two slide apart, avoiding ea
     
  9. Mira_Jade

    Mira_Jade The (FavoriteTM) Fanfic Mod With the Cape star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    I love seeing this updated so quickly. :D Yikes, but where has February come and gone to? 8-}



    Unlikely: One that's been more than once, it would seem. [face_love] I adored this sentence. :D

    Worthy: YES! A definite fist-punch moment to be able to read. :p

    Hessitant: I'm with Toph on this one - the spa is a whole exercise in discomfort. IMO. ;)

    Remember: Awwww. [face_love]

    Familiarity: [face_laugh] Too true! [face_laugh]

    Opposites: [face_love] This was up there for me in this set - not for any obvious reasons, or anything. :p

    Ananke: Chilling, beautiful sentence. [face_love] =D=

    Accept: Aaaaaaand I told myself I would stop faving all of the Zuko sentences, but that's proving to be difficult. :p I love Zuko and Iroh's relationship, and you perfectly explored that here. :D

    Dog-house: Classic! :D

    Endearment: Either way, Sokka is in for pain. :p

    Reconcile: [face_love] So many warm and happy feelings . . .

    Porcelain: The needles of doom are not to be triffled with. :p

    Devotion: Of course. :p


    Very nice job! Again. =D=


    ~MJ @};-

     
  10. NYCitygurl

    NYCitygurl Manager Emeritus star 9 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Mira: Hopefully Zuko and Aang will turn out better than Roku and Sozin :p Zhang is an idiot :p I take it you?re a Zutara shipper? :p I always thought that it was silly that Zuko didn?t take Ozai down in that moment when he could have?when he had his swords and Ozai was defenseless?but that it had to be that way more to save the storyline than anything . . . so I decided that Zuko was hesitating :p Go ahead and favor the Zuko sentences?I do :D


    Last set! This time (in an effort to explore other characters :p ) I actually only have a couple sentences with Zuko.



    muchly, on the subject of the letter 'm'


    01. Measure

    Sokka used his finger to measure distances on the map, trying to calculate the best time for breaks on their journey through the Fire Nation.


    02. Midnight

    It was the middle of day, but for the firebenders, it was worse than midnight?the sun, and their firebending, was totally blocked.


    03. Mild

    Katara looked like a mild-mannered young lady?until someone (usually Sokka) got her mad.


    04. Message

    Zhang closed the scroll with a snap?he was Admiral Zhang now, and he could now use the navy?s resources to capture the Avatar.


    05. Mock

    Sokka mocked Aunt Wu?s predictions, but no one?not even his own sister?would listen to him.


    06. Mischief

    Aang could be serious when the situation called for it, but he was capable of getting into all sorts of mischief.


    07. Murder

    Aang sobbed over Giatso?s skeleton?the Fire Nation had murdered him, and it was all Aang?s fault.


    08. Mull

    Sokka mulled over the situation, but Aang and Katara decided to just forge ahead and ignore him.


    09. Minion

    Mai and Ty Lee would never consider themselves Azula?s minions, but the princess, for all that the deadly duo were her best friends, did.


    10. Malevolence

    Azula was as beautiful as her mother, but her deadly powers and determined attitude gave her an air of malevolence that sometimes scared even Ursa.


    11. Melancholy

    Zuko was melancholy after he left Iroh?he didn?t know exactly why, but he knew tha things got better when he rejoined his uncle.


    12. Moniker

    Sokka tried a couple different names for the Fire Nation assassin before ?Combustion Man? stuck.


    13. Maintain

    Earth was his most difficult element; Aang worked hard to get to the day when he could maintain three pebbles spinning through the air.


    14. Muse

    Sokka considered beautiful women his muses; a room full of them inspired him to continue his haikus.


    15. Malady

    Katara wasn?t sure what had made Sokka sick, but he was already hallucinating?and it was getting on Katara?s nerves.


    16. Mettle

    Katara might look like a weak little girl, but she was made of pretty strong stuff?and she was a master waterbender, to boot.


    17. Mortuary

    The path through the mountains to Omashu served as a tomb for the two lovers who had struggled for peace.


    18. Malice

    There might have been a kind bone in Azula?s body, but it was buried deep?as far as anyone could tell, she was full of malice and fire.


    19. Mess

    Appa?s shedding was causing a mess?but, Katara learned quickly, it was worse than just giving the boys another way to fool around.


    20. Mediocrity

    Surrounded by all the powerful benders, Sokka felt just mediocre.


    21. Mimicry

    Azula and the girls could mimic the Kyoshi Warriors enough to fool the Earth King, but they knew they would never fool the Avatar and his friends.


    22. Majesty

    Aang never would have guessed that his crazy friend Bumi would one day become the King of Omashu.


    23. Mecca

    Ba Sing Se was the jewel of the Earth Kingdom, a mecca for craftspeople, artisans, and visitors from every corner of the kingdom.


    24. Moral

    Aang?s past lives were advising him to stop the Fire Lord in a very perman
     
  11. Mira_Jade

    Mira_Jade The (FavoriteTM) Fanfic Mod With the Cape star 5 Staff Member Manager

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    I do favor Zuko and Katara together [face_blush][face_love] - I started reading for Avatar before I watched the series, and the stories I read featured those two. [face_love] Personality wise, I think that they'd mesh seamlessly. But I do like Mai, and I could like Aang with Katara in a few years. I don't know . . . putting them together at the end of the series just felt wierd. Very wierd. o_O And that's a lot coming from me - it's hard to squick me out with pairings, I adore crack!shipping. :p


    Mild: There's nothing about that girl I would call mild. [face_laugh] But that's normally a provoked change from her, as you mentioned. ;)

    Minion: A nice look at a fascinating group dynamic. =D= I almost feel bad for Azula, in a way - that girl has some serious issues. :(

    Maintain: Very nice! I liked the more elemental feel with this one - Earth is Air's opposite, so it makes sense that he'd have a hard time mastering it. How ironic is it that Fire should be the easiest one for Aang to master after Air? :p [face_thinking]

    Muse: Best corny Sokka scene, FTW!

    Mediocricy: Oh, Sokka! [:D]

    Might: Very nice! =D=

    Meaning: A great 'face-palm' moment for Aang. [face_laugh] :p

    Masterpiece: And I think that that is the perfect way to end all four of these sets.


    Beautiful job with these! =D=


    ~MJ @};-
     
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