Story [Avatar: The Last Airbender] Someday (Zuko poem)

Discussion in 'Non Star Wars Fan Fiction' started by smuggler_vola, Feb 14, 2013.

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  1. smuggler_vola Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Oct 13, 2012
    star 1
    Someday
    Author: smuggler_vola (known as Epic Duck on fanfiction.net)
    Characters: Zuko, Ursa (indirectly)
    Summary: Across the stars, across the sea. I will find you, just have faith in me

    The stars in the sky
    Not one shown that night
    You vowed to never come back
    As father watched you disappear from sight

    No one stopped you
    No one dared to try
    But did you really have to leave
    Without even saying goodbye

    I was left alone
    No one to calm my fears
    With "father" and Azula
    No one to dry my tears

    I guess that isn't true
    Uncle was always there for me
    And he really did care
    Though I was too stubborn to see

    I don't know if you've heard
    I'm the Fire Lord now
    I have to unite the nations
    But I'm not really sure I know how

    A lot of work is left to do
    All night and through the day
    But I will find time to search for you
    I'll find you someday
    Teegirloo and Alexis_Wingstar like this.
  2. Blue Ice Cream Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Aug 9, 2006
    star 5
    Hi smuggler_vola. :)

    I found this poem both bittersweet and beautiful. The rhyming scheme seems to work perfectly here. Stanzas 1 & 3 were emotionally charged for me, and I especially liked the line 'Not one shown that night'. Thanks for sharing.

    Well done. =D=
  3. NYCitygurl NSWFF Manager

    Manager
    Member Since:
    Jul 20, 2002
    star 9
    This is so beautiful! I love it, especially the last two lines [face_love] Great job! I hope you continue writing more in this world!
  4. Teegirloo Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    May 26, 2005
    star 6
    Very nice i liked it.
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