Saga Balance To The Force (post-TPM AU, Obi-Wan, Palpy, Yoda, Mace, Qui-Gon, bit of Siriwan) COMPLETE!

Awesome ending, with a great explanation. And I liked the cover art. Great job, though its a bummer that this is the end. Get better soon!

Raptor517

 

Nice ending!
But I'm a bit sad that the story is already finished, I loved it!

 

Agh, I love a happy ending!!

How wonderful Obi-Wan made it out and was welcomed back to the Jedi Order by everyone.

Loved how Siri ran to him - very sweet.

I loved this story from beginning to end. Great job!!

 

Beautiful ending to a fantastic story.

Hope you're feeling better soon.

 

It ended too soon. But that means that you can write more once you recover. Feel better very soon.

 

Aww! Fabulous ending. I'm glad the Jedi understood about balance in this universe.

 

Absolutely lovely!

?Oh no, Obi-Wan,? interjected Mace Windu. ?You did your duty. There is no forgiveness to ask or be bestowed upon. Yoda and I decided it was best to keep Qui-Gon and the other Jedi ignorant about your mission. If someone has to ask for forgiveness it is us, not you. Never you, Obi-Wan.? The korum master reached out with his hand and the young Jedi took it.

Obi-Wan stood up and turned toward Siri. His face was still covered with dust and blood, and his yellow left eye gave him a strange expression, but there was no mistaking in the happy smile on his lips or in the serenity pouring out of him.

Siri smiled back and putting her hands on her hips looked sternly at him and exclaimed, ?All right Kenobi, I think it is about time you go home and take a bath!?

The four other Jedi laughed or smiled and then the group turned around and directed to their ship, as around them the Force swirled and pulsed, once again perfectly balanced.

And I loved the cover!

 

Awesome ending!!!

 

Woah!

What an excellent finale!

Bravo on the work, Lincoln!

And this is KrystalBlaze, btw.

-Krystal

 

Nice story, though Mace is a Korun, not "korum," but thanks for trying on that one! (The planet is Haruun Kal, if that helps you remember. I happen to own a copy of Shatterpoint.)

A bit more Siriwan would've been nice, but you're the writer of this story, not me.



-Mist

 

Nice ending-- two different eye colors eh? I assume the clone order will be cancelled now.

 

I just read the entire story (when I should be sleeping ) It was very good. I enjoyed it a lot. I have to add that I love Obi-Wan as the Chosen One stories. The fact that his eye color changed in his left eye is kind of freaky. I'm imagining it right now and I think seeing it would be very unsettling for me. I understand why you did it though. I loved how you killed Sidious. Part of would have liked to have seen a lightsaber battle, but him being destroyed by Light...kind of poetic.

I have enjoyed all the stories by you I've already read and I'm eager to read more. Once I get some sleep.