Beyond Bearing the Chosen - L/M - Romance/Angst - Complete April 03, 2006 - Author Thanks July 30, 2006

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by RedGold, Oct 3, 2005.

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  1. SWpants Force Ghost

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    Oct 28, 2004
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    1. I'm very very glad Mara's back
    2. I'm glad Luke was able to talk, at least a bit, to Corran. Force knows he needed to confide in someone, and Corran's awesome :D
    3. I hope there's a positive resolution
    4. Please tell me there will be lots of baby making and twins on the way and lots of love from Mara as well as Luke :p
  2. Valley_Lord Force Ghost

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    Dec 2, 2005
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    Luke talks about his problems to another man... sissy. Not his problem, not his business, should have punched Corran's lights out for asking.

    Gary(LeatherNeck) we don't need to know your wife's quirks(she might hurt you too.)
  3. jaina_clan_solo Jedi Master

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    Dec 14, 2005
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    I she really there? Luke has missed her terribly... and Devin too I'm sure.

    Luke's talk with Corran was great, sometimes just talking makes things a lot better

    Now that dream Luke was having made me a little nervous [face_worried].. of course he did say that mara wasn't sad... but what does it mean?

    Thanks again for the PM and I'm looking forward to more

    jcs
  4. KELIA Manager Emeritus

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    Jul 26, 2005
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    Oh good, Mara is back.

    I hope she has come to her senses!

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
  5. Maul Brady Jedi Master

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    Yes, Mara. Come to your senses... and to Luke's bed :*
  6. Vongchild Force Ghost

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    Apr 2, 2004
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    She's baack! Thank you, merciful author! :)

    Nice flashes of the kid's future, too. :)
  7. JadeLotus Force Ghost

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    Mar 27, 2005
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    Only a few more chapters? But I suppose that means there has to be some sort of resolution...right...right?

    I will take that fact that Mara got into Luke's bed as a good sign. I wonder just how long she was lying there until Luke rolled over ;)
  8. Lady_Jade Jedi Master

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    May 22, 2004
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    ooooooo, she's back!!!!


    ok, so not as evil as the previous cliffie....but still leaves us hanging.....



    please let her make the right choice, please let her make the right choice!!! [face_praying]
  9. Courtney_Solo Force Ghost

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    May 23, 2005
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    *whew* It's not TOO big of a cliffie. . . . :_| MOOOOOORRRREEE!!!

    [face_praying]

    C @};- S
  10. jade51999 Jedi Grand Master

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    Hey RG you seem to be on a roll!
    I can't believe we're at two chapters before the end..but it has to come sometime eh?

    Nice talk between Luke/Corran. And those flashbacks were intereseting.
  11. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    This looks promising; if Mara says they need to talk, then it must mean she's reconsidered. Otherwise, what would there be to talk about? :) Two more chapters? Argh! :( Hope there's a happy ending. :D
  12. Dont_Get_Cocky Jedi Padawan

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    Mar 1, 2006
    I'm overjoyed that Mara came back...but why'd ya have to end there----.

    Ahhh...what exactly does Mara want to talk about...you said it's almost over...you can't end this story bad...right? Right?

    Can't wait for more!
    --kt
    [face_chicken]
  13. maramijade Jedi Master

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    Yes Mara, you and Luke need to talk. . .

    Now get to it :: glares::
  14. SpiritofEowyn Jedi Master

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    RedGold, resolve the conflict before the very last post? That would be out of character. Plus, me thinks she's trying to retake her Evil Cliffe crown.


    So we are made to suffer.:_|


    What's she going to say? They have to get together right? It's a RedGold Fic, and it says romance angst.

    [face_praying]
  15. Killik_Twilight Jedi Master

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    Apr 6, 2005
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    Wow? great job, Red.

    Interesting to see Mara back. I wonder if she was picking up on Luke's thoughts? hmm?

    :D

    KT
  16. Jedi_Scooch Jedi Knight

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    Nov 29, 2001
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    Mara's back! Yes!! But what did she decide?

    Can't wait till the next post - even if it might be the last :(
  17. oldjedinurse Jedi Master

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    Loved Corran and Luke in this one.

    And, with Mara back, really can't wait for the next...

    oldj
  18. Daughterofflame Jedi Master

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    OOOOOOOOhhhhhhhh.

    That's such a mean ending. *scowls at RedGold* You are so evil, the word doesn't even define you.

    *laughs* Nice post, though. :)
  19. Fiana_Novarr Jedi Knight

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    Sep 4, 2001
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    Hi RG!

    Awww. Davin is so cute - I can actually imagine him being all wide-eyed about spending the night at a new place.

    And it's rather convinient that he happens to be away as his mother gets back, hu? Looks like she finally made up her mind - and I just hope you are not too evil with us now ...

    Great chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one!

    'nother update soon? (Yeah, that's whaty ou get for spoiling us ...)

    Fia
  20. AgiVega Jedi Padawan

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    Oct 29, 2005
    Interesting dreams to say the least... can't wait to find what they were about.
  21. divapilot Force Ghost

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    Nov 30, 2005
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    Ack! I missed a post.

    Without thought, and with some resistance from Mara, he grabbed her, one arm around her waist, the other her shoulders, and pulled her too him harshly, his lips descending. She did struggle at first, but soon melted into the kiss as he pressed her body to his, his tongue fighting entrance into her mouth.

    Oh, man. 'Nuff said.=P~


    I hope Gramma thwacked some sense into the girl. Mad props to Luke for putting up with her for so long.

    And Corran. Love love love Corran.

    Edited because my sense of humor is off at 5:30 am.
  22. academygrad88 Force Ghost

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    Apr 6, 2004
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    Need to talk?! You got a sexy, blue-eyed Jedi Master in your bed wearing just his boxer-briefs... you can talk later!!! I think we should have a bonus PM chapter right about now and then you can get back to talking. ;) :p

    I know, I am incorrigible.

    I am glad that you had Mara going to visit Grandma and that you had Luke know that she was there and was aware of Mara checking up on Devin. I think it would be cruel to Luke if you just had Mara disappear without a word.

    So you only have a few more posts? Ah, I will be sad, but then that means you have more time for the other fic your are posting on that other site. ;) That one is great also. :D

    Great job on this chapter!

    AG88
  23. jackyyy17 Force Ghost

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    Jan 12, 2006
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    Yea, Mara's back. And Luke is wearing nothing but breifs. [face_thinking] Hum, I think they shuld probably have a very intresting "talk". [face_mischief] I can't wait to see just exactly this is going. *happy ending, happy ending, make it a happy ending* [face_praying]

    Anyway, great update, and please make the next one soon.

    Good work,=D= even though it is coming to an end :_|

    jacky
  24. Jedi-2B Force Ghost

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    Nov 2, 2000
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    Corran was a good one to confide in, even though Luke didn't tell him the whole truth. I thought you'd let us take a peak at Mara and Grandma. But glad she's returned, and hope she has only welcomed things to say. :)
  25. VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus

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    Feb 5, 2004
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    Whew! Mara's back! [face_dancing]

    A great update, and I like the image of Luke. [face_love]

    =D=
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