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Saga Because we're of two worlds--An Anakin/Padme songfic

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by DarthIshtar, Feb 9, 2006.

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  1. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    This is my third of seven Valentine's vignettes.

    This is a song by Selena called "Amor Prohibido"--Forbidden Love--that seemed very appropriate to this couple for obvious reasons. The translation is my own, but if you're interested, here are the original lyrics and the translation unseparated.

    Con unas ansias locas
    With crazy hope
    Quiero verte hoy
    I want to see you today
    Espero ese momento
    I wait for the moment
    En que escuche tu voz
    When I'll hear your voice

    Y cuando al fin
    And when in the end
    Estemos juntos los dos
    We two are together

    Que importa que diran
    What does it matter what they'll say?
    Tu padre y tu mama
    Your mother and your father
    Aqui solo importa nuestro amor
    Here the only thing that matters is our love
    Te quiero
    I love you

    (coro)
    Amor prohibido murmuran por
    Forbidden love they whisper in
    Las calles
    The streets
    Porque somos de distintas
    Because we're of two different
    Sociedades
    Societies (or worlds)
    Amor prohibido nos dice todo
    El mundo
    Forbidden love the whole world
    tells us

    El dinero no importa
    The money's not important
    En ti y en mi
    Between you and I
    Ni en el corazon
    Nor in our heart

    Aunque soy pobre
    Even though I'm poor
    Todo esto que te doy
    All of this that I give you
    Vale mas que el dinero
    Is worth more than money
    Porque si es amor
    Because it is love
    Y cuando al fin
    And when at the end
    Estemos juntos los dos
    The two of us are together
    Que importa que dira
    What does it matter what they'll say
    Tambien la sociedad
    Also in the world
    Aqui solo importa nuestro amor
    Here the only thing that matters is our love
    Te quiero
    I love you
    *****
    With crazy hope
    I want to see you today


    The Order had been promising a Jedi briefing for three days now and still the Jedi in question were delayed by the fighting. It wouldn't have been so bad if Anakin weren't one of those that she was expecting.

    There had been too many messages, wrought with frustration that she could fully understand as he reported that they would arrive as soon as the war permitted, but she recognized that his eyes flicked to her, noting with relief that she was waiting just as anxiously as he for the moment in which he could breathe the same air as her.

    Perhaps that was the only reason why there was regret in his voice when he asked for them to be patient with the delays.

    I wait for the moment
    When I'll hear your voice


    That apologetic tone was probably the only reason why she was able to forgive him for making excuses instead of making his way home, but it was almost enough to have him call every day. It was almost a comfort to have his low voice rumbling in her ears and keeping time with her heart.

    And when in the end
    We two are together


    Today, however, there was no message from him and she thought for a breathless moment that he might be in transit to deliver his apologies in person.

    When her comm rang, therefore, she answered it in an unforgiving mood.

    "Senator Amidala," Anakin greeted with a hint of pleading in his voice, "I have just arrived on Coruscant and will be briefing the Senate tomorrow morning."

    Immediately, her heart leapt into her throat so that it was difficult to get the words out. For a long moment, she let her quickened breathing answer his statement.

    "Senator Amidala?" there was a little more humor in his voice as he recognized her sentimental side.

    "Knight Skywalker," she greeted with more formality than she'd have ever liked, "I was hoping you would join me at my personal office to go over the details of your briefing."

    "As milady commands," he said graciously.

    "How soon can you be here?"

    "Right now," Anakin's voice called from the veranda.

    She ran to him without even bothering to slap off the comm, hands finding the lines of his jaw immediately so she could pull him into a kiss that had passion and intensity competing for top priority.

    What does it matter what they'll say?
    Your mother and your father
    Here the only thing that matters is our love
    I want you


    His hands mo
     
  2. Jazz_Skywalker

    Jazz_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oh, how beautiful. I like the end - it's so hopeful, despite what really happened. And the beginning as well, where she thought that the only reason he was patient, etc, was because of her. Lovely!

    jazz

    post - 151 days until death? Wow, the year is coming to an end quickly... Well, maybe not for you. ;)
     
  3. leia_naberrie

    leia_naberrie Jedi Master star 4

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    Sep 10, 2002
    He was not given enough information to chastise them into chastity.

    :) . Lovely little fic. Well done.
     
  4. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Heehee, I liked that alliterative comparison. Thank you!

    Glad you liked the hopeful end and the patient beginning. I hope the middle was nice as well. :) Thanks! And yes, it's over half-over.
     
  5. Daenarrah

    Daenarrah Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Nov 12, 2005
    I love this. It's so beautiful.

    it was his compulsion rather than his duty and it had gone far beyond protection.

    I love this line. The whole section it comes from is gorgeous but that line sticks out the most for me.
     
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