Oh, I really loved that chapter. The description of Obi-Wan's vision was breathtaking. I could see with such clarity the ice-rimed face of Qui-Gon, the purple bruises, how Obi-Wan fell to shivering. What I found interesting was that it was Qui-Gon's steady, physical touch and presence that helped ground Obi-Wan back in reality, yet he seems so skiddish or uncomfortable about touching, especially when it comes to Touski. Just beautiful. Can't wait for more---so hurry the heck up!