Beta-Reader and plotbunny planning help needed... ^_^

Hello! This is my first post here, so I hope I'm doing this right. Anyway, I saw Episode III for the second time earlier this week and have been hit with a plot bunny so fierce and persistent, that I *have* to write it. Whether or not I post it depends on if I'm satisfied with the results.

But since it might contain spoiler-y info, I'll keep this brief. It takes place 10 years after Episode III, and for the moment in my wee brain, centers on Padme's older sister Sola Naberrie. I have about 4 pages written, the first "scene", but I still think it's missing something.

I need to know if a Beta thinks it's a good enough base to continue with. Not to mention Vader will have a very big, though probably brief part in it later, and trying to properly characterize my childhood idol on my own is a terrifying prospect.

So if anyone is up for the task of giving a few words of advice, or even helping out, I'd be eternally grateful. my AIM is mikachubakachan or you can just PM me. ^_^

Thank you very much.
Art.

 

Beta Reader Index

For beta help, you can go here. They will also help you with any plot line problems you run into It's good to have on board.

 

Yes, welcome! I suggest you follow Meg's advice and check out the Beta Reader Index. Another thread that might be helpful to you is the Fan Fiction Orientation Guide, as well as the Adoption Thread, where you can be adopted by someone and they show you around the boards, as well as acting as a beta-reader at times.


Edit: To add links for threads mentioned.

Adopt-A-Newbie Thread

Fan Fiction Orientation Guide

 

^_^ Thank you both very much. I've put up my little note on the cork-board of newbie-dom over at the adoption thread, and am just getting myself situated.

*waves* See ya'll around.

 

Sounds cool! I'll read it if you post it!

 

This is gonna be my last post in this thread, because I don't want it to go on and on and off-topic and such but... VadersMistress...

O.O Your icon makes me go 'wibble' in the knees.

*clunks over in puddle of drool*