Beyond Between Love and Hate I: What's a girl to do! ( Link to the sequel up) 6/12!!

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  1. Rose_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Yeah! i got a new reader! i got a new reader!

    *does the "i got a new reader" dance around the thread.
  2. Rose_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Elven Jedi Maiden- I'm glad you agree with writing of Zekk. I was so worried about that post. Thanks for reading!

    TJF- I know i took a little bit of angst from your story and turned it inot a post for mine. Its not like i can make it easy on Jaina, what fun would that be? [face_devil]

    Jaina Fel 06 Yeah, my Zekk has a backbone. As he should have in the NJO, and jaina did deserve it.

    soulwalker Zekk definatly told her how it was. Update ina minute...

    The hooded one- what don't think i can write a good post? :p

    sith priestess- thank you! Another person who likes my Zekk with a backbone. I'm so happy!

    sword of the jedi- Yeah you miss alot with no computer. I went without internet acess once and it killed me. Wow! someone knows my name! i'm like so awed by that.You've made my week!

    So i think this story needs a post! This one really doesn't do anything but set up character development. But have fun with it anyways. :p
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    post four

    Tenel Ka chume Djo stared out the window of her room, and sighed. The war was finally over, and the rebuilding had started, but she felt alone. He had not come to see her. It had been four months, and he had not come. She felt like throwing herself down on her bed and crying, but there was work to be done.

    ?Queen Mother Djo?? her attendant asked. She was a short blond woman, bright green eyes, and a pleasant smile. Tenel had begun to think of her as family.

    ?Yes, Anora?? she asked as she turned around to face her.

    ?Your two o?clock appointment is here. The newly elected officials from Agamar, remember??

    ?Yes, I remember. Please escort them to my office. Tell them I shall be there shortly.?

    ?Yes milady.? She bowed courtly and shuffled out of the room.

    Tenel turned back to the window. Maybe he didn?t love her. Maybe he had met someone better than her. Maybe she was just overthinking this. He does have a lot of Jedi to train, so surely he must be busy. How could she find out? She would have to mull it over later, as she had officials to meet. Picking up her crown and putting it lightly on her hair, she strolled out the room.
  3. Elven_Jedi_Maiden Jedi Master

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    Finally an update!!!! *does the new posty dance around the thread*

    And Tenel Ka's back!! *sigh* Jacen is so mean! How dare he not contact her for four months. :mad: :mad:

    Hee hee, great job. I can't wait for the next update. :D
  4. Soulwalker Jedi Master

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    Short update, but good nonetheless! :p

    Poor Tenel Ka...she deserves better then to have that scatter-brained Jacen romping around with Dimwit in Distress!
  5. CptCorranHorn Force Ghost

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    just got the posts, will beta them tomorrow, should be up soon after that, whenever Rose decides to put them up
  6. The_Hooded_One Jedi Master

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    Great Post!!!!

    No! You just hinted that it would be an evil post so I had prepared for worse.
  7. Rose_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Corran! your not supposed to tell them that you have posts in advance, then there going to want them up earlier! Or they'll nag you for hints. :p
  8. CptCorranHorn Force Ghost

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    I only told them that I had them, not that I've read them yet 8-}
  9. Sith_Priestess Jedi Master

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    Jacen! Get your butt to Hapes and I mean NOW!!

    ~Priestess
  10. Rose_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    yeah Jacen sort of owes Tenel Ka a visit. But that doesn't happen till much later [face_devil]
  11. Sith_Priestess Jedi Master

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    Out of curiosity....

    Will Tenel Ka beat him up for not contacting her?

    and

    When's the next post?

    and

    Is Jaina in it with Zekk?

    ~Priestess
  12. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    Yeah!!

    Have Tenel Ka beat up Jacen!!

    Yeah!!!

    :D

    I'm wondering how Jaina's going to prove to him that she loves him......

    Poor Zekk, even though he managed to do it, it still must have hurt like hell to hear the girl of his dreams say "I love you" and to know she doesn't mean it.

    If he was a weaker man he probably would have caved in and just kissed her, right or wrong.

    I'm betting that as soon as he cleared the room he broke down.

    Poor Zekk.............

    Poor Tenel Ka............

    Solo twins are REALLY being dumb right now.

    :mad:
  13. Sith_Priestess Jedi Master

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    They should all shoot the Solo kids....okay that's cruel. Just lock them in a room and punish them.

    ~Priestess
  14. Rose_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Yeah, the solo twins, have made a couple mistakes. But i promise it all will turn out right in the end. there just going to have some bumps and bruises along the way.

    How jaina convinces him.... i think you'll be surprised. :p

    Tenel doesn't beat him up...... hold on i can change that.
  15. Sith_Priestess Jedi Master

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    I vote for a massive Jacen beat down.

    *waves hand while using Jedi Mind Trick* You will have Tenel Ka beat up Jacen

    ~Priestess
  16. Rose_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    so okay, i'm back on some sort of posting schedule for now. Posts up tuesdays and sundays. That is if i get any reader feedback. So let me tahnk y'all and well get on to the next post.

    Elven Jedi Maiden- its sort of been more than 4 months, the war ended four months ago. He hasn't seen her in 5 years. So she has the right to be a little upset. Thanks!

    soulwalker- Yeah poor tenel, but jacen hasn't been with Danni, she's engaged to kyp.

    the hooded one- yeah well i promise its gonna get more evil before it gets better. But i'm no where near the angst of TJF.

    sith priestess-why do i feel the need to write a post with Tenel beating up jacen? any idea about that? The next post has neither Zekk or Jaina, we'll get back to them shortly though.

    agent jaid- Yeah zekk finally gets what he wants and he can't have it. But Zekk finally got the backbone he deserved. Don't worry, all turns out alright.
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    post five:

    Tahiri Velia stood in front of a grand chamber. Dozens of little Jedi padwans looked up at her with bright eyes as she retold the story of the Yuuzhan Vong war.

    ?And then Anakin, standing alone, bloody and near death, drew all the Force energy he could to him, and He told us all to leave. And even though we didn?t want to, we did because he knew what was best. And in his last Blaze of Glory, he became one with the Force and took out hundreds of Vong and saved all of us on the mission. So my little soon to be Jedi?s, what is the point of the story??

    A short little brunette girl of no more than six, raised her hand.

    ?Yes Leiana?? Tahiri motioned for her to stand up.

    ?Not to be selfish, but to do what is best for the cause and not what is best for yourself??

    ?Yes that is part of it. Does anyone else have anything to add?? Tahiri asked her class.

    ?That one person can make a difference?? a tiny blond boy named Tran spoke up.

    ?That is correct, my little Jedi.? She smiled for them.

    ?So what happened next Master Tahiri?? Joli Cantos asked. ?Yes, what happened next?? her class broke into.

    ?What happened to the rest of the team, did they make it out alive?? one little girl spoke up.

    ?I want to hear more about what happened to Raynur!? one of the boys shouted.

    ?Hush my little padwans,? Tahiri said as she motioned to them to be quiet.

    ?That will just have to wait for another day.? A strong male voice spoke up behind her.

    Tahiri twirled around, knowing all to well who the voice belonged too. ?Jacen!? she exclaimed, getting up to give the man a hug. Releasing her hold on the older Jedi she spoke to her class.

    ?Look who it is my students, it's Master Jacen.? They class squealed with excitement, having heard many stories about Master Jacen. ?But he is right, the rest of the story is to be continued tomorrow. Now off to lunch with you.? The students picked up their things quickly and left the room, leaving Tahiri and Jacen.

    ?How are you?? Jacen asked her.

    ?I?m fine, Jacen, stop older brothering me,? she joked.

    He pulled her into a headlock. ?What can I say, you?re my only younger sister. Care to take a walk with me?? he asked, letting go of her.

    ?Sure?


    Please review, my poor ego needs it
  17. Elven_Jedi_Maiden Jedi Master

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    Ohhhh, wonder what Jacen and Tahiri are going to talk about?

    ts sort of been more than 4 months, the war ended four months ago. He hasn't seen her in 5 years. So she has the right to be a little upset. Thanks!

    Ah, I should have picked up on that! Sorry!


    I'm betting that as soon as he cleared the room he broke down.

    *thinks about poor Zekkie crying all alone*
    :( :_| :_|
    Oh, it's so sad!!! Jaina has to show him that she loves him!
  18. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    Awww....

    How sweet.

    Thank you for not making Tahiri depressed!!!

    *sits down to wait for more*

    *thinks*

    How 'bout this, I post and then you post!

    :D
  19. Trickster_Jaina_Fel Jedi Grand Master

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    very sweet :D it's nice to see tahiri up and about on her own feet -- and telling the story of anakin's death without breaking down! :eek: that must have taken a lot of back bone :D *to Tahiri* i'm so proud of you girl...

    *in TJF's mind* I really need to write a Tahiri piece, don't i? hm..."Whisper" might be a good one to go with one of those...

    *cough* anyway...great job :D can't wait to see the next part :)

    ~TJF
  20. Elven_Jedi_Maiden Jedi Master

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    There's finally a Tahiri I didn't feel like strangling... [face_shocked] [face_shocked] Wow! Who'd have ever thought THAT could happen?
  21. Jaina_Fel_06 Force Ghost

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    *sings* Tahiri has a backbone, Tahiri has a backbone... :p

    I love how you give the... erm... well, possessors of less stiff backbones strength, Rose!! :p Tahiri, although she would be devastated by Anakin's death, should be able to go on. And she did, here. Great job! :D
  22. The_Hooded_One Jedi Master

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    Fantastic as always!





    And Tk should beat Jacen up! ;) :D
  23. Sith_Priestess Jedi Master

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    That as cute :)

    *waves hand in Jedi Mind Trick* You will not ask questions just write Tenel Ka beating up Jacen

    ~Priestess/color]
  24. Soulwalker Jedi Master

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    Hehehe, that was cute. :) I can just see Tahiri playing that role, too... :p
  25. CptCorranHorn Force Ghost

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    great job, whens the next post coming?


    oh, wait, I have to get it to you first 8-}
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