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Beyond - Legends Between you and me - A J/J/K poem

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Elfsheen, Mar 18, 2003.

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  1. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Hi, here's another poem by me. just as the other it can be J/J or J/K or even Jaina Lowie if you wish ;) Tell me what you think, because this is what happens when I have a migraine

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    Between you and me


    The silence between us is the loneliest feeling I ever felt
    But when the silence is broken
    I am left alone falling deep into my misery
    There in a world of hurt where I am all alone


    The noise between us is the happiest feeling I ever felt
    But when the noise is stilled
    I am left alone with you I am completed
    There is a world of bliss together with you


    The echo between us is the hardest feeling I ever felt
    But when the feeling returns
    I am left alone with the silence you left behind
    There is world of love forever without you


    ~FIN~
     
  2. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    I've waited long enough. Now, I am convinced. Can I post your poems in my Jag/Jaina fanfic archive?

    ~aeryn
     
  3. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Thanks! Sure go ahead, I'd be honored! :)
     
  4. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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  5. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Thanks, I'll take a look.
     
  6. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Up up up I say ;)
     
  7. JainaDurron

    JainaDurron Jedi Master star 4

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    Aug 8, 2002
    Very nice. I'm not into poems usually, but I like this one. :)

    ~~Jilly
     
  8. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Thanks JD!
     
  9. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    I'd say it is about time for an UP!
     
  10. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    LOL this was on the last page almost at the bottom. Means this needs a desperate UP :D
     
  11. Stormsong

    Stormsong Jedi Youngling

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    Mar 2, 2003
    Milady wishes this up, so up this goes
     
  12. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    It's in need of a KICK again

    *kicks*
     
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