Saga Bird dreams and more, drabbles 7th challenge week 20 (complete)

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  1. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    Great use of the prompts tying a past situation to the characters then moving into a restoration for refugees
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  2. Hazel Force Ghost

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    The Vong were a load of trouble. Very good use of the prompts!
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  3. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    A real treat, once more! [:D]
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  4. earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost

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    More is to be seen in the last set and thanks for reading them
    They were and in the next set you see more of Halfir and Jesin. Thanks again.
    Thank you and here is the last set



    96. Father

    Jesin Fialka smiled when he saw his friend Halfir Majeski – who had become like a father to him after the fateful day that ended his education as a Jedi apprentice – speaking the vows of marriage. For many years they had travelled through the galaxy in the faithful YT-1300 light freighter named Kerebuy Hawk until a visit to Lingala had revealed where the missing planet Moniron was. The odyssey of the Kerebuy Hawk had begun on Tatooine when the freighter was repaired by Halfir and Jesin and coordinates for Moniron revealed a void.
    That void was deliberately created by Darth Vader.


    97. Son

    Halfir Majeski felt the joy coming from his friend – who had become like a son to him – when he kissed his wife. He had been a bachelor by choice, leaving with his friend Ivano Arvedai his home-planet Moniron to see more of the galaxy. Fate had him meeting Jesin on Tatooine. He had to land the Kerebuy Hawk after a Jedi master – Jesin was her apprentice – commanded the self-destruct of her Jedi-cruiser and debris hit his freighter. Years of repair followed when credits had to be earned helping in the Eopie-stable of Gerrik Smith who have given both a sanctuary.


    98. Husband

    Hedo Menel beamed when he saw his sister Mikja riding on the beach with her husband. He never would have though that she – a quite independent girl stating that she loved to be a single and would never become a married woman with all the fuss of raising kids – would meet the love of her life. True, she had cared for patient Halfir Majeski for a long time in Noranan General Hospital. But this? Halfir had been the one – after waking up – to be the one to get his sister becoming interested in him telling her that he loved her.


    99. Brother

    Halla Majeski had seen more happy moments for her brother. Some of those moments were from long ago when her kid brother was with his friends going to kindergarten. Halfir – strong in the powers of the Dunai elder or as Kaagi Adin said strong in the Force – was often the one to begin to plan a prank with his friends Jihan Eled-Non and Ivano Arvedai. And that meant that she had to play along.
    Another moment was when he showed her the tickets to Alderaan where he was going to with Ivano. Her brother had to spread out his wings.

    100. Teacher

    The Kerebuy Hawk had – after crashing on Noranan spaceport – wrecked her entire hyperdrive. Being an old YT-1300 freighter she was decommissioned and donated to the Noranan technical school by her owners Halfir and Jesin.

    Jesin had been the first to accept a job as a teacher. He had gained a vast technical expertise helping on Pangona to give that planet protection against flash floods.

    Halfir had followed. Darth Sidious, Imperials, Yuuzhan Vong, Killik, delusional dictators, Abeloth and Sith had been avoided by him and Jesin. Traipsing across the galaxy – with all the unrest still there – was not his thing anymore.

    FIN

    @Hazel
    @Jade_eyes
    @AzureAngel2
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  5. Hazel Force Ghost

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    That was a fantastic wrap io to the challenge. Congratulations!
  6. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    Terrific use of the prompts. Altogether, all 100 feel like mini-chapters in a short story. =D=
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  7. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    Those hawk stories are nice.
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