Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by GreatOne, Mar 9, 2005.
Cool idea. Of course, with Han and Chewie in trouble, Luke will be doing something very stupid in the near future. Looking forward to more.
I can't wait to see where you go with this!
Looking forward to a new post.
There was only one problem with that command. Vader didn't want to turn Luke over to Palpatine. He was tired of being a puppet, a pawn for the Emperor. Flicking the holo of his wife off, Vader realized he not only wanted his son by his side as he took down the Emperor, he needed Luke by his side. Palpatine wasn't the Chosen One. Anakin Skywalker was. Anakin Skywalker, a name he'd given up years ago, only now he wanted it back. All he had to do was locate his son, and that may happen faster than Vader anticipated.
The smuggler that had saved Vader from taking his own son's life was on his way to Acoda to pick up supplies for the Rebellion. The only person waiting for Solo on Acoda would be Darth Vader. There were no supplies, just a trap.
Vader is very determined to get his hands on his son and not to share him. This looks like it will be a great story!
Just thinking about the dark-haired Princess caused Han all sorts of conflicting emotions.
I'm sure it does... Great start, O Great One!
Another one? Already? GreatOne, you must be running a plot bunny farm!
*settles in for next post*
Yea!!! A new fic from GreatOne! And I get to catch it from the begining!!!!
Great start, but how could I expect anything less?
this looks like fun. And you've already hurt Han in the first post.
A great start ... waiting for more!
Han Solo and trouble undeniably go hand-in-hand.
You don't waste any time, do you? You go right into the action - and you hurt Han already.
Oh well, I'm anxious to see how Vader's plan unfolds. Great start!
Yes! A new fic, AND I got to it the first day! I think this is a first for me...hahaha. Anyway, I've so excited! Vader is awesome!
Vader is going to use Han to lure Luke, but I bet this is going to unintentionally lure his daughter also. I like that Vader has always known about Luke. I do wonder why he never knew about Leia. Why did Padme hide her from him, but not Luke? Good start.
So Vader wants his life as Anakin Skywalker back huh? This has started out great. A captured and confused Han and Chewie can't wait until Luke does come he will be in for a surprise.
more...more soon...get'em vader..get'em good...but not too hard!
Ooh good start! Yeah...hurting Han in the first post??? :'( And I'll bet he's wondering who the heck Vader's son is!
Very interesting start, GreatOne. Han really shouldn't try to hotwire things, should he? It never seems to work out for him, poor guy. I don't like Vader having his hands on Han... This could get very painful.
You shot Han! Twice!
Wow, GreatOne, I think you've officially joined the Han-torturers club now.
So, will Vader lure Lukie-baby to him the way that he does on Bespin? Or will a more subtle method be used, I wonder?
*straps herself in* I'm all set!
A brand New story
Han is already in a big trouble
Jedi_BMK - Of course, with Han and Chewie in trouble, Luke will be doing something very stupid in the near future. Looking forward to more. - Aww! Poor Luke! He will only be trying to help!
VaderLVR64 - can't wait to see where you go with this!- I sorta have a vague idea.... subject to change of course!
BrokenNoseOfQui-Gon - Vader is very determined to get his hands on his son and not to share him. - In this story, Vader is going to be a bit more determined to break Palpatine's hold. Especially now that Palpy knows about Luke!
HerHighness33 - I'm sure it does- And conflicting emotions for Leia, too!
Katarina42 - you must be running a plot bunny farm! - I keep vowing to crush those bunnies, but they breed too fast!
Webogirl - I get to catch it from the begining!!- Yup, another story. Thanks for reading!
RebelMom - you've already hurt Han in the first post- - I figured I'd get it out of the way early, this time!
oldjedinurse - Han Solo and trouble undeniably go hand-in-hand. - Yup! Poor Han... now he's a 'guest' of Vader!
HanSolo29 - You don't waste any time, do you? You go right into the action - and you hurt Han already.- No point in dilly-dallying! Poor Han.... at least Vader ordered him treated for his blaster wounds!
Laura_Anu - Vader is awesome! - He is fun to write.... and I hope to throw in a few twists along the way, as well.
Solo_Fan - Awww! You're reading, even though I upset you in my last story! I hope this means I'm forgiven! (I promise..... Leia will NOT end up with someone else!) I bet this is going to unintentionally lure his daughter also.- Do you think? *face innocent* Why did Padme hide her from him, but not Luke? - I think she tried to hide both, but Obi-Wan messed up when he hid Luke.
Jeditheskyisblue - Vader wants his life as Anakin Skywalker back huh?- Yes, and he has more than one reason for wanting that, too! until Luke does come he will be in for a surprise. - Luke is going to find out the truth a lot faster than you might think. Muahahhaha
son-of-kenobi - get'em vader..get'em good...but not too hard! - Awww. Poor Han and Chewie.... walked right into a trap!
padawan lunetta - I'll bet he's wondering who the heck Vader's son is! - I'm sure he is, but he will be enlightened shortly.
Knight_Aragorn - really shouldn't try to hotwire things, should he? - LOL! It doesn't seem to be his strong suit, does it? I don't like Vader having his hands on Han... This could get very painful. - Actually, it already has!
KnightedRogue - You shot Han! Twice! - - Who? Me? *face innocent* I could swear it was those nasty stormtroopers! I think you've officially joined the Han-torturers club now- Just first NOW?? - Oh my goodness! I've tortured Han is sooooo many ways in all my other stories, already. Let's see.... I've drown him (several times, even in March's challenge, which was a humorous viggie) I've hanged him, I've broken many of his bones, I've thrown him into the carbonite pit many, many times, he's been beaten, battered, embarrassed, had amnesia, been left blind and stalked by love-sick witches.... Muahahahaha. - Poor Han! will a more subtle method be used, I wonder? - Ohhhh, it's not subtle at all this time!
zsuzsa - Han is already in a big trouble - I love putting Han in trouble! It's so much fun!
The next post will be later this morning, after I have some time to tweek it!
His first step toward ensuring Luke's birthright was completed.
Oooooh. I'm intrigued. Great start, I like Vader wanting to be Anakin again; can't wait to find out what happens next.
Well, yeah, okay. You can be the president of the Han-torturer club now. How's that?
mixza - I like Vader wanting to be Anakin again- But will he be able to become the man he once was? We shall wait and see!
KnightedRogue - You can be the president of the Han-torturer club now. How's that? - Me? President? I'm soooo honored! I will wear the crown with pride! (I do get a crown, don't I? Or is that just Royalty?)
*Luke, I need to show you something important. Alone,* he woofed quietly, and somewhat apologetically, toward Leia, waiting while the young man read the monitor. *Please, come to the Falcon with me.*
That can't be a good thing. Han's already in trouble and Luke appears on track to join him. More please.
Well, I dunno, Leia. Why would they not include you? I have no idea whatsoever.
Hmm, so Vader let Chewie go to bring Lukie back. I wonder if a certain princess will wind up tagging along anyway?
And, Ms. Mary, you can have the crown. I'll even throw in a scepter for you to complete the ensemble.