Saga Birthright - Post ANH - AU - Han, Luke, Vader, Leia, etc. - CONCLUDED 5/1/05 - More Replies up 5/4

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  1. RedGold Force Ghost

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    Nov 29, 2004
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    The end?

    NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

    *coughs*

    Okay, I'm good now.

    Padme/Garm love nest!!! Figures... *evil eyes Padme*

    Everyone's having babies now... ain't it sweet!

    *sighs*

    Alas poor birthright... I shall miss you...

    until GreatOne gives me something else to be addicted to...
  2. Jedi-2B Force Ghost

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    Nov 2, 2000
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    Good wrap-up. :D Padme having Garm's love child? :eek: Now there was a real shocker. Do Padme and Anakin ever tell Luke and Leia they had an unknown half-sister? I'm guessing it stays a secret.

    Nice payback by Lando. I wouldn't trust 'Uncle Jar Jar' to do any babysitting.

    Here's hoping L&M have a beautiful healthy child, too. Thanks for another great story, GreatOne!
  3. Jedi_BMK Jedi Master

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    Sep 10, 2004
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    Definitely wasn't expecting Padme's little revelation about her and Garm, but at least things worked out for the best. Nice little reunion at the end and good to know everyone is doing well.

    And that was just plain evil on Lando's part bringing the annoying one with him. Han's going to have to get him back again somehow.

    I'll miss reading this one everyday, but something tells me it won't be long before you have another story going. ;)
  4. Alethia Force Ghost

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    Feb 13, 2005
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    This will definitely be missed. It was a great fic and I love how it had so many different things added into it, these little twists that always kept it interesting.

    So Padmé amd Garm had a child...that was unexpected. I had no idea that she had ever returned his feelings, though I can understand why. And I'm glad that Anakin came to terms with it and returned.

    Mara's having a baby! How sweet. And I loved 'Uncle' Jar-Jar. Revenge is definitely sweet. Mon in a mental ward? Don't blame them. I wonder if she'll ever get free...

    I'm sad to see this end. It was a wonderful fic and I truly loved it. I'd love to read more... Though I can see what you mean with a sequel. I just dislike seeing things end.
  5. cka3ka Jedi Knight

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    Apr 9, 2003
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    Ororororo?

    Done?!

    Sequel?!

    It was a spectacular and heart wrenching ending. poor ani and poor padme. I was hoping that you'd introduce the half-sister but she's dead!

    Spectacular story GO!

    CK

  6. QueenOfAces Jedi Knight

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    Jun 10, 2003
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    GreatOne:

    Well, I think you shocked everyone with the Padme/Garm revelation. I DEFINITELY did not see that one coming. :eek:

    I certainly don't blame her for that, though. Her husband's gone mad with power, and she has to give up her children to protect them from him. What is she supposed to do--be celibate and depressed for the rest of her life? Still, I am surprised that she would willingly give up another child even if she didn't want a relationship with Garm. Also sad that the girl died without ever knowing her mother. Very interesting plot twist there.

    Lando is pure evil...that Jar Jar thing is the perfect revenge.

    Loved the happy reunion at the end.

    You are amazing, GreatOne. I seriously have no idea how you write so much so fast, but all of the readers at the JC are very thankful that you do. Thanks for all the great entertainment!!!
  7. Starshine Jedi Knight

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    Mar 8, 2005
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    =D= =D= =D=
    What a great story. It was so good to read it in every free evening I had. You are wonderful writer and I hope I have a chance to read many more tales of yours.
    Great work!
  8. Rosh_Penin Jedi Knight

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    Jan 20, 2005
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    Excellent last two chapters, GreatOne! The battle with Palpatine was well executed, a good balance between his undeniably greater skill versus the determination of Anakin & Co.

    And I've finally figured it out - Wedge is obviously one of Palpatine's clones who woke up early. Therefore his continued existence fits.

    Kudos for Jar Jar's final appearance, too. :)
  9. Laura_Anu Jedi Master

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    Jun 27, 2002
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    Padme had a kid with Garm?? Now THAT was a shocker!

    Anyway, this was an absolutely amazing fic!!! Thanks for all the time you put into it!
  10. RebelMom Jedi Grand Master

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    Apr 20, 2000
    star 6
    Nice wrap up. Surprised at Padme's confession :eek: Once again Anakin handled it without the Darkside. Impressive.

    Can't wait for whatever the plot bunny feeds you next.
  11. Arcalian Jedi Knight

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  12. carla Jedi Knight

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    Oct 23, 2004
    Hi!! I miss a couple of chapters and next time I take a look it's over!! wow... ok, I really enjoyed the story and I think you wrote it quite well, so it was great reading it.

    I liked the last chapter, and I'mn really glad Padmé didn't actually made queen... I was quite surprised abou the whole Halle thing, specially about Anakind leaving... I understand him being sad, but he left? He was Darth Vader!! If Padmé could forgive him so easily, he should've being able to do the same. Although they do have very different personalities, so I guess it could happen... Anyway, he came back so I'm good... Padmé was so surprised when he came back I was afgraid she would drop my darling Jacen!

    And, of course Lando would bring back Jar Jar! It's payback baby! And Han couldn't help hilself with the corellian magic comment!

    Overall, just great.
    Congratulations.
  13. Jerjerrod-Lennox Force Ghost

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    Mar 9, 2005
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    An absolutley brilliant story Great One!.

    It has been a pleasure to read.
  14. Solo_Fan Jedi Master

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    Feb 3, 2003
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    I bow once more before the Master of Productivity. Obviously, you are one not much afflicted with procrastination. You have more than earned your name! :) =D=

    The Padme/Bel Iblis love child shocked me. Very curious as to why Padme gave her up to be raised by Garm. Glad to see Anakin came back to her and their family. Excellent payback on Lando's part, although I think when Jacen and Jaina get a little older, they might like to use their force skills to have a little "fun" with Jar Jar. Fabulous characterizations all around. Bravo!!!
  15. Katarina42 Force Ghost

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    Oct 10, 2001
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    Whoa! :eek: Think you threw enough twists in there?

    Do you think there'll be a sequel? [face_batting]

    Oh, and I guess I owe you that cookie... *hands you several*

    Kat
  16. starwarsfan68 Jedi Knight

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    May 25, 2003
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    BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO!!!!!!!

    Again the reason you are the Greatone!!
  17. JuniorPadawan Jedi Knight

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    Feb 12, 2005
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  18. Kazzy Jedi Master

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    Oct 17, 2002
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    Fantatsic work, GreatOne, as usual. And you shouldn't worry about the ending it was very sweet.

    But Padme having Garm bel Iblis' child? Now that has got to be one of the more original ideas I've seen in fanfic in a while. :eek: And the poor girl died aboard the Peregrine very sad.

    Glad to see Anakin came back at the end too, and that so far there is no talk of ruling!

    Great stuff!
  19. GreatOne Force Ghost

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    Jeditheskyisblue - no husband even if they were on the darkside at the time is going to take the fact that their wife had a child with another man while married to you well- True, but even Anakin said that during the time he was Darth Vader that Anakin was dead. And Padme wasn't thinking too clearly in her grief. :( - Did the child really die with her Father? - That's what Padme thinks! [face_devil]

    RedGold - Padme/Garm love nest!!! Figures... *evil eyes Padme- LOL! She wasn't really EVIL! And once Mothma was gone, she no longer had ambitions to become Queen, either! :D

    Jedi-2B - Do Padme and Anakin ever tell Luke and Leia they had an unknown half-sister? I'm guessing it stays a secret. - I would think they'd keep it a secret. Until.... one day..... a woman shows up claiming that.... *slaps hand over mouth* :D :D I wouldn't trust 'Uncle Jar Jar' to do any babysitting. - For sure! Especially after the really bad job Han did when he was supposed to babysit Jar Jar and keep and eye on Mara! [face_laugh]

    Jedi_BMK - And that was just plain evil on Lando's part bringing the annoying one with him. Han's going to have to get him back again somehow. Muahahaha. Actually, Jar Jar had been back in Gungan City for a while before the babies were born. It's just that Lando deliberately invited him to visit right away after the babies were born! Bad Lando! [face_devil]

    Alethia - So Padmé amd Garm had a child...that was unexpected- I just couldn't resist throwing in one more twist! ;) - Mon in a mental ward? Don't blame them. I wonder if she'll ever get free... - Or maybe some young woman by the name of Halle will BREAK her out... and together.... they will exact an evil revenge upon the happy Jedi Families! :eek:

    cka3ka- . I was hoping that you'd introduce the half-sister but she's dead! - :_| - Poor Halle! We never even met her! :(

    QueenOfAces- Well, I think you shocked everyone with the Padme/Garm revelation. I DEFINITELY did not see that one coming. - Yeah!! Actually, one of the reasons I decided to throw that in there (besides just my evil tendencies) I decided that maybe Anakin should have a reason to FORGIVE someone, too! And if he was able to do that, it would be solid proof he would never return to the dark side. :) Still, I am surprised that she would willingly give up another child even if she didn't want a relationship with Garm. - My thinking behind that was that Padme was forced to stay at Cloud City, in seclusion, and she would think her child would be better off with her father. And Padme was also very depressed. :( :(

    Starshine- Thank you for reading! :) - As far as MORE stories.... I'll have to give my plot bunny some CPR, first! :p

    Rosh_Penin- I've finally figured it out - Wedge is obviously one of Palpatine's clones who woke up early. Therefore his continued existence fits. - OR! Maybe he's Wedges evil twin brother... SPIKE! [face_laugh]

    Laura_Anu - Padme had a kid with Garm?? Now THAT was a shocker! - hehe. No one had any odds going with that one! ;)

    RebelMom - Once again Anakin handled it without the Darkside. - It was his biggest test of staying true to the light, and he passed it! Yeah!! :)

    Arcalian- Thank you! :D

    carla - I was quite surprised abou the whole Halle thing, specially about Anakind leaving... I understand him being sad, but he left? He was Darth Vader!! If Padmé could forgive him so easily, he should've being able to do the same- Absolutely! Which is exactly why I threw that in there, so he could show the same forgiveness. And he did, even if it took him six months! ;) - Padmé was so surprised when he came back I was afgraid she would drop my darling Jacen! - LOL! With all those Jedi in the room, he was pretty safe. Although it was Malla that took him away for safety! :)

    Jerjerrod-Lennox- Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)
  20. padawan lunetta Force Ghost

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    May 15, 1999
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    Dang I get sick and get behind in my reading! Wow, great way of ending it! SO glad Wes lived and learned the error of his ways, and the end was so sweet with the babies :D Excellent work! *claps*'

    Now....sequel time... ;)
  21. ccp Force Ghost

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    Apr 29, 2005
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    Cool story liked the ending. Also thanks for introducing me to this site, lots to read.
  22. skywalker64089 Force Ghost

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    Jeditheskyisblue - no husband even if they were on the darkside at the time is going to take the fact that their wife had a child with another man while married to you well- True, but even Anakin said that during the time he was Darth Vader that Anakin was dead. And Padme wasn't thinking too clearly in her grief. - Did the child really die with her Father? - That's what Padme thinks!

    Sooooo, by the above line, it sure sounds like you've got a sequel planned to me. :D

    Are you just teasing us?

    S.
  23. kimmi Jedi Knight

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    Mar 15, 2004
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    Claps hands. Great ending
  24. Kazzy Jedi Master

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    And the poor girl died aboard the Peregrine very sad- At least that's what Padme thinks happened!

    :eek: What's that?
  25. GreatOne Force Ghost

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    May 22, 2003
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    padawan lunetta- SO glad Wes lived and learned the error of his ways- Yes, he did! So when jasa comes back from vacation, he will be happy! :D Thanks for reading. :)

    ccp- Welcome to these boards, ccp! - This is actually a fun place to read and interact with everyone, and there are LOTS of wonderful stories. If you like H/L stuff, check out LadyPadme, QueenOfAces and ivylore, just to name a few. :D

    skywalker64089 - by the above line, it sure sounds like you've got a sequel planned to me.- I always like to leave open the possibility! Although right now, I have no plans to continue this. :cool:

    kimmi- Thank you, kimmi! :D

    Kazzy- What's that? - Muahahahahaha. If you think about it, how did Padme really KNOW Halle was onboard the Peregrine? Her father could have sent her away to a safer place after deciding to help the Rebellion. I know if I were Halle's parent, I certainly would have! ;)
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