Saga Birthright - Post ANH - AU - Han, Luke, Vader, Leia, etc. - CONCLUDED 5/1/05 - More Replies up 5/4

I just got caught up, and I have only one thing to say:

More later...I'm still thinking this through...wow....

 

Wow, MarySue, what a marvelous story! You are really one of the most creative writers on this board, and that's saying something considering how prolific you are, as well. As many stories as you've written, I don't think you've ever become repetitive.

Thanks so much for throwing the L/M fans our favorite redhead, cause I don't think you had her planned in this originally, did you? THANKS!

I loved all the little twists and turns along the way, but that last one was really good! Padme had a daughter with someone else! No wonder Garm was a littly prickly with Anakin. He was probably hoping that he and Padme could have gotten together eventually, but with Ani back, he knew it would never happen.

Wonderful, wonderful story and if you do decide to write a sequel, I'll be right here (probably lurking way too much like I was on this one, but here nonetheless! )

 

Webogirl- Thanks for reading!

kayladie97 - Thanks so much for throwing the L/M fans our favorite redhead, cause I don't think you had her planned in this originally, did you?- hehe. Not really. But I take requests! - He was probably hoping that he and Padme could have gotten together eventually, but with Ani back, he knew it would never happen- So very true. Poor Garm. You have to feel a bit sorry for him.

 

whoa

i just got home from my break (paris-nice-florence-venice-munich-now back in paris) and just read all the posts i missed

whoa again

i will do individual chpt responses tomorrow, right now going to watch the fireworks on the champs elysees (cause the wwii ended today, but you know, 60 years ago).

 

jasa - Glad you got back safely from your vacation! Fireworks are fun.

My father served in WWII, but mostly in the Pacific Theater, not the European Theater. He did spend a little time in France and Italy, though.

 

A few more days and I will be able to read your story from the 20th page to the end.

I'm fighting with DRL nowadays.

Feedback later.

 

*Cough*Well, there's always that tongue of his*Cough Cough*

 

GREATONE-- I enjoy reading your stories; you write Han very well. Where can one read the stories you alluded to at the beginning of "Birthright"?

 

loved it. found it and read in a day. *goes to sleep, it being 9.55*

 

zsuzsa- Hope DRL lets up!

Demonique- Yup.... Jar Jar, what a man (or a whatever....)

Stella_StarStrider - Sorry I didn't see these replies earlier. If you go to fanfiction.net, and type in my screen name 'GreatOne' in the search, then click on my name, you will go to the bio page, and at the bottom of that page are ALL my stories! (well, almost all. I took a few off) Hope this helps!

palpyisgod2 - All at once? And this was my longest story! Glad you liked it.

 

Great One, I just started reading this today, and I got up through Chapter 4. Since there seems to be lots of chapters and lots of pages of posts, I thought I might post my thoughts as I read so I don't forget anything I wanted to say. I'm enjoying this quite a bit so far, and I love how "big" the story seems to be getting; this is very character-driven, but not to the point where it feels like there's nothing happening...there's actually a LOT going on here. Can't wait to see how this develops!

I know this hasn't been touched in a while, so I hope you don't mind my offering feedback any way.

 

Aquarius1977- Wow... this story is still being read? LOL! Thanks for reading. (PS... I'm using this name now)

 

Sneaky!! I'll be reading more later. And yes, it's still being read... that Bespin Cafe index comes in pretty handy for the benefit of those of us who've tuned in late.

 

I read up through Chapter 6 today. I like the detail of the abandoned dome; I hope that little mystery reaally does become part of the plot!

 

I read up through Chapter 14 this morning. The snake thing was freaky--what they are and how they came to be in an abandoned research station would make a wonderful story in and of itself. I hope you revisit that sometime and develop it some more.

There are some very wonderful pieces of dialogue, too many to name, but the characterizations are great.

This story is addicting. I will try to read some more today.

 

I sat at my computer for I don't know how many hours and read this all the way through. Like all of your stories, it's just a pleasure to read. All of the characters are right in character and having Padme there makes for an interesting twist.

 

Aquarius_1977- I always had it in the back of my mind that the snakes were a weapon devised by the Vong to eliminate the scientists from discovering their presence.

Liesl- Wow! The entire thing at once! *face shock* that was a long read.... glad you liked it!

 

I took me about a week, but I finished it! Awesom plot and twists, Ponytricks!

 

Look I was looking in the forums and I started reading this at 11am. It is now 9.30pm and i finally finished it. It a great storie and you could send it to be published.

 

Golden_Jedi- Awww....Thank you for reading!

NARRABIE- All at once? - *hands cyber-aspirin to NARRABIE* Thanks for reading!

 

I just wanted to say that I read the whole story and loved it.

Good story.

 

I got up through chapter 20 today and boy, I'm impressed! There was something hilarious-yet-creepy about Han telling Vader he had to go apologize to Dorme's parents. Something tells me that in the end, Leia is going to be right about her father, though.

Can't wait to read more, but I have to go to bed now!

 

Got as far as Chapter 22 right now and I just had to pause reading to say:

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

 

I finally finished this today--go me!!

This was certainly a wild ride, and a great read. Thank you for posting this!