'Blame Nat' sequel to What if Anakin met Natalie.(upd 07/30 "I love palpy"

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  1. Bellyup Jedi Master

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    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!POST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    ?Well, Your Highness, I?m sure you know your way, so I?ll leave you for now. The Jedi that escorted you here will be along to your room shortly with your trunk, and to make sure that you?re settled in.? Young Typho hesitated for a second before bursting out in a voice full of emotion, ?Your Highness?. I?m?I?m glad you?re back!?

    Natalie smiled at the young man. ?I too am glad to be here.? She said in a regal, but warm tone. Thankful that the great personage did not think him impudent for his boldness, he bowed and walked quickly away. Gazing around, Natalie let her mouth drop open, an exploit that she had forced herself not to succumb to while the guard-in-training had been at her side. She was standing in an immense corridor, much larger than any hallway she had even been in, and much different that the set she had worked on in Caserta, Italy. Even with her huge robes and magnificent hairdo (if the job that the inexperienced Jedi had done could be called magnificent), which had made her feel huge and bulky with so many people crowding around her, she now felt extremely tiny and insignificant. Huge tapestries hung from the walls, embroidered with a vast palette of rainbow-colored hues. Interspersed among the tapestries were amazing paintings, so vivid and realistic that she could almost taste the fruit in the bowl, or smell the flowers in the meadows. Sculptures plated in gold were situated along the marble floor, and on the lower walls, gold-plated lamps were to be found, lit with massive, cream-colored candles. The walls rose up and curved gracefully into a cathedral-like arch and the ceiling was one, immense window, letting the golden sunlight of day's end pour down in a warm flood. The rich, medieval beauty was so different from the sleek and silver moderness of her previous surroundings that she caught her breath.

    She stood there for several minutes, drinking in everything around her until the sunlight gradually shifted, and the place began to get dark and dusky. Pulling herself together, she began walking until she reached the end of the huge hallway. There, it branched into two passageways, each going in the opposite direction. Uncertain as to where she should go, she paused. There was really no way to decide which was the right way and which was the wrong. She spun around in circles several times, and then opening her eyes, found herself staring into the left corridor. With a shrug, she strode purposefully forward, hoping that this was the right way. She went like this for about half an hour, after which she began to get tired and cross. Muttering to herself, she turned a sudden corner to find herself staring into?a stone wall?.

    ?Sith!? she spat. Surprised that she was now cursing rarely in anything but ?space terms?, she managed a wry smile.

    ?Oh, if Mom and Dad could see me now??

    ?Your Highness??

    Natalie spun around to see a young girl of about 18 dressed in simple, dark green robes staring quizzically at her. Her dark hood mostly covered her blonde hair, and her features were pale and delicate with thin lips and an oddly shaped nose.

    ?Your Highness? She repeated, more firmly this time, ?is anything the matter??

    Sighing slightly in relief, she shook her head slightly. It was only one of her handmaidens. Looking more closely into the deepening gloom revealed another girl standing behind the first handmaiden. She also, was dressed in deep green robes, but she was slightly taller with almost black hair, long straight features and a noble expression.

    ?She probably looks more of a queen that I do right now? Natalie thought.

    ?No, I am fine. I was just?just admiring these gorgeous paintings and tapestries again. It is good to be back home. ?

    Never mind the fact that she wasn?t looking at a painting or a tapestry, the reason would have to do. She could see the slightly bewildered look in the girl?s eyes, but she ignored it.

    ?Well, we ought to go back to your room M?lady, as it is getti
  2. Jade_Max Force Ghost

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    hahahahaha! I love it, Bellyup! *grins* Nat's a veggie *snicker* and Anakin doesn't understand exactly what that means lol! *snickers*

    Oh this is going to be fun *rubs her hands together*
  3. Jedi_Suzuran Jedi Grand Master

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    Mwahahahaha! [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Poor Nat. :) And Anakin too. [face_laugh]

    Great post, bellyup. Looking forward to yours, Jade. :D
  4. george_starwars Jedi Master

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    Oh that was great! Poor Natalie! 8-}
  5. Jedi_Knight150 Jedi Master

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    My fanfic can be found here.

    Great post. I can't believe Natalie just whacked Anakin! "Target for her wrath"... *lol* [face_laugh]
  6. angel_of_iego Jedi Padawan

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    yay--another post! =) Poor Natalie, having to eat meat.. and poor anakin, for being the target of Nat's wrath!
  7. george_starwars Jedi Master

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    jedi night: I've been to your fafic. I have posted my comments. Like I said there, this can't be your first time.

    [Edit: Woops I forgot one importaint thing, [face_shocked] Up
  8. Jedi_Knight150 Jedi Master

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    No, I'm serious. This is my first time writing a fanfic.
  9. Queen_Sara Jedi Master

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    Great bellyup! Lol Natalie can't remember who her handmaidens are! Even I know which one is which, and I wasn't in the movie!
    Losing herself in the palace...lol that doesn't exactly look too good.

    Find out what? What's Natalie going to find out? I have an idea, but I'm not sure.

    Post soon Jade!


    :) ~*^SARA^*~ :)
  10. Jedi_Knight150 Jedi Master

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    I think it had to do with the fact that Amidala liked meat.
  11. Monica_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    ?Well, I don?t think I should leave Natalie yet. You know that sooner or later she?ll?well?she?ll find out, and I think I need to be there when she does.?

    Hmmm...that is going to keep me wondering for the next few days!

    I loved the post! It was very funny, especially the meat thing! [face_laugh]
    ~*Monica*~
  12. sabrelight Force Ghost

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    Great post bellyup.

    Nat doesn't know the handmaidens because they don't look like thier Earth counter parts.
  13. Jedi_Knight150 Jedi Master

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    I can't wait for the next post. This story is still really good.
  14. Bellyup Jedi Master

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    Thanks for the ups DR's (dear readers) The thing that Obi-Wan and Anakin were talking about had nothing to do with the meat. It's something elsewhere....elusive.....Sorry if I made it seem that way. And now.....we are waiting for Jade_Max! (I think)
  15. george_starwars Jedi Master

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    I love the title! :cool: Somebody ought to make a movie out of this. Is more coming soon? Hope so. In the meantime, UP!
  16. sabrelight Force Ghost

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    Jade is preparing the next, she said it'll be ready sometimes tomorrow.
  17. Jade_Max Force Ghost

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    Yup, and I'm working on it right now... :) So it'll probably be up tomorrow
  18. Bellyup Jedi Master

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  19. bobilll Jedi Master

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    HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!

    Jeez, I guess Nat's not going to be a vegetarian for long!

    and I've started to catch up on the prequel, but I've haven't gotten very far...

    It's great so far! I have to be careful not to eat anything while I'm reading or I'd choke laughing!
  20. george_starwars Jedi Master

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  21. sabrelight Force Ghost

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    Bobill you will have a whole day to catch up.

    Jade's post is ready, It's held up with me as soon as I check it she'll be posting.
  22. Jade_Max Force Ghost

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    *chuckle* or longer... but yeah, soon as I can, I'll get it up.. it -is- coming though :)
  23. Monica_Skywalker Jedi Master

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  24. Bellyup Jedi Master

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  25. Jade_Max Force Ghost

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    lol, alrighty, it's pretty much finished, I just have to make some changes.. and then you'll get it... warning, it's pretty long still..
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