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Saga Blessed (Sabewan poem, written again in Obi-Wan's p.o.v)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by AERYN_SUN, Aug 5, 2003.

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  1. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 1, 2001
    Blessed
    By obi?s girl

    Summary: Sabewan poem; Obi-Wan praises the woman he loves, Sabé.
    A/N: This poem was inspired by my viggie, ?Meant to Be?. I wrote it not too long after I edited the hard copy.
    Disclaimer: I am not George Lucas, but I am a hopeless Sabewan ?shipper, playing around with that other part of the SW universe.
    Rating: PG-13

    Something about you
    makes me smile;
    the grace of your step,
    the wisdom beneath your eyes,
    your sweet innocence.

    The words you say to me,
    are like a lullaby,
    playing serenely as a symphony.

    I don?t know how I could
    be so lucky,
    to have you by my side.

    My angel,
    my beloved,
    my soul,
    my goddess.

    I?ll be forever grateful
    to be yours
    and
    for you to be mine.

    The Force has blessed our union,
    my life belongs to you now
    and
    I will carry your heart with me always.

    My beloved,
    my angel,
    my Sabé.
     
  2. JazzyJedi

    JazzyJedi Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jul 7, 2000
    What a lovely poem! You have been busy!

    I know this will have to go to the archive.
     
  3. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    I have been busy and really inspired.

    Hmm, I don't know if you know about this already, by SobiFan's Sabewan website, has it's own domain :D :D Everything there looks so good and I am just so envious of her.

    The Sobiwan Network

    ~aeryn
     
  4. SobiFan

    SobiFan Jedi Youngling star 3

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    May 7, 2003
    :') that's so romantic! I like it alot! Can I have permission to put it on the poetry page @ SO..?? :D
     
  5. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Now, that I've had a chance to edit it a little, sure go ahead and archive it, SobiFan. Also, I'm about to send you a pretty sabewan wallpaper.

    ~aeryn
     
  6. Hananiah

    Hananiah Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 15, 2003
    This is a very descriptive poem, the emotions flowed wonderfully.
     
  7. AERYN_SUN

    AERYN_SUN Jedi Knight star 5

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    Apr 1, 2001
    Thank you, Han :D

    ~aeryn
     
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