~-~-~Breakin' My Heart~-~-~ K/J/J Song Viggie **COMPLETED 3/20**

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Bellyup, Mar 15, 2003.

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  1. AERYN_SUN Jedi Grand Master

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    I know this a Kyp/Jaina romance, but I still can't believe Jag would just leave and marry someone else. Good fic, though.

    ~aeryn
  2. Jedi_Jaina_Durron Jedi Grand Master

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    Yeah, it might have helped to develop the Jag thing more...I've read several fics where he randomly ends up married to some other girl, and you have no clue why...that would be interesting to read a fic where that happened and we actually got to know the girl...

    Upsies!
  3. Bellyup Jedi Master

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    JJD: (That is what people call you I think! :D) *blushes* My thanks for taking the time to read this! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. :) EDIT: Ack--yes, I probably should have developed him a little more...I guess since it was more of a vigge, I trie to keep things pretty short. Several times, I deleted stuff that stopped the story from moving on. Oh well, I knew I was going to do something wrong-lol!! I'll try to remember that tip for the next time, though.

    Aeryn: Well, Jag knew that over the last month Jaina wasn't feeling the same way about him, and although I wasn't focusing on Jag's feelings too much, he was actually starting to feel like more of a brother to Jaina than anything else. :) Thanks for reading this!
  4. JainaDurron Jedi Master

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    Very cool story Bellyup. :) I like.

    ~~Jilly
  5. duskwings Jedi Knight

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    Aww . . . that's so sweet. A nice, happy, mushy ending. :D

    -duskwings
  6. Jedi_Jaina_Durron Jedi Grand Master

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    Yes, that's what they call me, and you can, too! :) Anyways, I wasn't criticizing your fic, par se, I just think it would be interesting to read a viggie like that...maybe I'll have to write it! :D
  7. alain_bioras Force Ghost

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    Bellyup I have no idea how to convert meters to feet either. ;)

    Awww, a MUSH post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [face_love] And Kyp cried!!!! Perfect ending! :D
  8. doggans Jedi Grand Master

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    What a sweet story. :)

    Yeah, I'm a softie. ;)
  9. Bellyup Jedi Master

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    JainaDurron: Thank-you! I'm so glad you liked it! :)

    Duskwings: lol...thanks. [face_blush]

    JJD: Oh I understand that you weren't criticizing purposefully, but I always appreciate comments on improving, especially when I'm writing something new. Today I'm going to the library, and I'm going to start reading all the NJO books so I can get a feel for the characters a litle more!

    Alain: Kyp didn't cry!! He just had...umm...something in his eye. Yeah, that's it! ;) Thanks so much for reading this! :)

    Doggans: :) Thanks Dog-Face! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
  10. Bellyup Jedi Master

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  11. Monica_Skywalker Jedi Master

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    Wow, it looks like I get to be one of the last replies! :p

    I'm sorry I didn't reply sooner, but I was on vacation, and couldn't get near a computer.

    OMG, that last post was absolutely beautiful!! :D I loved the ending, and I'm glad that everything worked out between Jaina and Kyp. :) [face_love]

    You did a great job writing this, and I can't wait to read your next piece! :D
  12. Bellyup Jedi Master

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    ey Monica--better late than never! :D I understand completely about vacation..I just wish I was on one! :p Thanks so much for reading and replying to this. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :) And as for my next piece??...hmm...I haven't really thought up anything, so it might be a while. Unless you count the posts I contribute to Blame Nat (one of which I am currently working on) But thanks so much for dropping by my first NJO piece! :)
  13. Eowyn_Jade Force Ghost

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    Jan 14, 2003
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    Excellent J/K ^_^ Though I was scared of Kyp at first ;) Nicely done!

    EJ
  14. Bellyup Jedi Master

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    :) Thanks Eowyn_Jade--I'm so glad that you enjoyed this! lol-Kyp was getting a bit creepy wasn't he? It's funny what love will do to ya!
  15. doggans Jedi Grand Master

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    It's funny what love will do to ya!

    Truer words were never spoken.
  16. JainaDurron Jedi Master

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  17. Elfsheen Jedi Grand Master

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    Ohhhhh, this was good, this was very good and I'm not even an official K/J or J/J ;)
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